Critique my BING PPC landing page

by fahax
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hello upon advice of few senior warriors I really don,t know whether they misguide me or m doing something wrong, I start campaign and instead sending visitor to sale page I redirect him/her to landing page for free download,uptill now there are 22 visitors land on optin page but non of them is converted?
here is landing page
Recipe
Please Advice me
#bing #critique #landing #page #ppc
  • Profile picture of the author mairsol
    First thing i noticed is your page is slow you need to improve your page speed with less images try to cover the lead or grab my deal button on the top with proper information.
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  • Profile picture of the author cooler1
    If there was an email opt in box on the page instead of having to click a button to be taken to another page to see it, I think that would improve the opt in rate.

    The testimonial doesn't make any sense i.e. "This most ingredients".. Plus there is no name next to it so it doesn't seem to have any credibility.

    This article has lots of advice on creating a great landing page- http://www.wordstream.com/blog/ws/20...-landing-pages
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