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Graham Maddison 24th January 2009 06:06 PM

Constructive critisism required
 
Hi Guys,

I have been revamping my new niche site Winning Ways and would be grateful of any constructive critisism. Particularly my Home page which was originally my About page. I am not sure I have done the right thing.

I also have an affiliates page which is where I am promoting PIPS.

Please let me know your thoughts.

Thanks in advance.

Graham

andrewharrison 24th January 2009 06:42 PM

Re: Constructive critisism required
 
You might try adding the following text, "A loser says, "I don't know." A winner says, "Let's find out."

Patrician 24th January 2009 07:43 PM

Re: Constructive critisism required
 
Looks good Graham. Nice and clean...

jmidas 24th January 2009 07:51 PM

Re: Constructive critisism required
 
Graham, I clicked your lotto picker twice in a row, got the same numbers, then a third time and it just keeps running - still is after about 3-4 minutes as of now - I think you may have bug in the script.

But, what I was going to suggest was that I see one main thing - although I am not clear what the intent of the site is. First, I would have an opt in capture on the main page. You can collect names and offer ecourses or other freebies to build your list, then sell whatever you want as you go. by email, etc...

- numbers still running -

Stephen Meyer 24th January 2009 08:17 PM

Re: Constructive critisism required
 
Hey Graham,

I noticed the links at the bottom in "Useful Links" show the clickbank hoplink. You should cloak them the same way you did the links on top in your menu.

I know it's still under construction so maybe your three boxes,
Games Of Chance, Lady Luck, Games Of Skill aren't finished. I tried to click the bullets but they aren't clickable. I would link them to some affiliate product or website.

One thing I've learned is to focus on a product of your own. In your case a good PLR Ebook on a subject online gamblers need would be great. Link it to a PayPal "Buy Now" button and keep all the money.

Looks like you are doing great with it. Create some excitement and make some money.
Steve

Graham Maddison 25th January 2009 03:37 AM

Re: Constructive critisism required
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by jmidas (Post 454826)
Graham, I clicked your lotto picker twice in a row, got the same numbers, then a third time and it just keeps running - still is after about 3-4 minutes as of now - I think you may have bug in the script.

But, what I was going to suggest was that I see one main thing - although I am not clear what the intent of the site is. First, I would have an opt in capture on the main page. You can collect names and offer ecourses or other freebies to build your list, then sell whatever you want as you go. by email, etc...

- numbers still running -

Thanks for alerting me to this.....but everytime I try it there is no problem. I'll keep an eye on it. Thanks for the feedback.

Graham

Graham Maddison 25th January 2009 03:42 AM

Re: Constructive critisism required
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Stephen Meyer (Post 454892)
Hey Graham,

I noticed the links at the bottom in "Useful Links" show the clickbank hoplink. You should cloak them the same way you did the links on top in your menu.

I know it's still under construction so maybe your three boxes,
Games Of Chance, Lady Luck, Games Of Skill aren't finished. I tried to click the bullets but they aren't clickable. I would link them to some affiliate product or website.

One thing I've learned is to focus on a product of your own. In your case a good PLR Ebook on a subject online gamblers need would be great. Link it to a PayPal "Buy Now" button and keep all the money.

Looks like you are doing great with it. Create some excitement and make some money.
Steve

Thanks Steve for the awesome feedback.

I was a bit rushed last night trying to get the Home page live, so yes there are a few areas of concern, not least of which is the cloaking of my links.

I like the Idea of yours about a good PLR ebook. I will explore that and see where we go.

Many thanks to all who have taken the time to look.

Graham

Graham Maddison 25th January 2009 03:44 AM

Re: Constructive critisism required
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Patrician (Post 454813)
Looks good Graham. Nice and clean...

Thanks Pat,

I am trying to give a professional image ...... trying being the operative word.

thanks for looking.

Graham

talfighel 25th January 2009 01:16 PM

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Graham,

I think that it looks very decent. I like your layout and the part where somone can get lottery numbers(Lottery Number Picker).

You did a good job,

Tal

Graham Maddison 25th January 2009 02:55 PM

Re: Constructive critisism required
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by talfighel (Post 456719)
Graham,

I think that it looks very decent. I like your layout and the part where somone can get lottery numbers(Lottery Number Picker).

You did a good job,

Tal

Thanks Tal,

The lottery no picker was just a novelty but people seem to like it.

I have just added a forum to the site, got a bit of tweeking to do to it yet though.......more work...but i'ts worth it.

Thanks again.

Graham


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