Forum: Copywriting 
1st December 2015, 02:23 AM
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Replies: 86
Views: 5,095  Re: Advice needed...
I guess it may have looked that way since most people likely didn't see the initial post which was a 30-line chunk of text.
As it was the first post from this person I immediately assumed they...
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Forum: Copywriting
30th November 2015, 12:46 AM
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Replies: 86
Views: 5,095 Re: Advice needed...
Paragraph | Define Paragraph at Dictionary.com (http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/paragraph?s=t)
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Forum: Copywriting
20th October 2015, 11:06 AM
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Replies: 43
Views: 1,963 Re: Sales Letter Critique Pls.
Also don't drive annoyed, bitter, enraged, furious, heated, irate, outraged or resentful.
Amazing what you can do in five seconds with a free thesaurus ;)
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Forum: Copywriting
20th October 2015, 12:56 AM
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Replies: 43
Views: 1,963 Re: Sales Letter Critique Pls.
When you can demonstrate you have the first clue what writers are actually looking for (hint: nobody is buying writing software because of promises of sex) and you're actually willing to listen to...
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Forum: Copywriting
11th October 2015, 09:49 PM
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Replies: 17
Views: 842 Re: Need some help with Landing Page Copy
It wouldn't hurt to hit the thanks button for Ewen and others who have offered advice.
If you seem appreciative of people's time and advice, rather than expecting it, you're more likely to get...
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Forum: Copywriting
9th October 2015, 05:25 AM
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Replies: 36
Views: 1,777 |
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Forum: Copywriting
5th October 2015, 06:31 AM
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Replies: 36
Views: 1,777 |
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Forum: Copywriting
4th September 2015, 01:45 PM
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Replies: 17
Views: 1,193 Re: Critique my copy please
I don't even know what 'this' is yet, nor do I want it, so I don't care if it's free.
The whole sales message is vague, generic and forgettable.
It's awkwardly written.
What are you even...
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd September 2015, 04:37 AM
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Replies: 1
Views: 1,784 |
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Forum: Copywriting
20th August 2015, 03:18 AM
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Replies: 29
Views: 3,447 |
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Forum: Copywriting
26th May 2015, 09:19 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,646 Re: Critique this landing page copy please
I highly doubt you're constantly getting approached by big sites, unless your idea of a big site is a poorly written blog run by a 13 year old kid in Indonesia.
Big sites employ journalists who...
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Forum: Copywriting
26th May 2015, 07:43 AM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,646 Re: Critique this landing page copy please
If you had an audience they would be engaging with you on the site. That's not happening.
You're here asking for help, but it seems you can't handle feedback... good luck with it.
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Forum: Copywriting
24th May 2015, 03:41 AM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,588 |
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd May 2015, 02:39 AM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,588 |
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Forum: Conversion Rate Optimization
6th May 2015, 02:48 AM
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Replies: 48
Views: 4,187 Re: I need help with my sales page!!
It's not about being 'salesy' or 'cheesy', it's about clearly demonstrating why they need your training. There's nothing cheesy about giving them hard factual data that proves the effectiveness of...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th May 2015, 12:44 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 1,861 Re: Short Copy (260 words long) Worked Better?
The numbers are statistically irrelevant, you need a larger sample size.
But beyond that you've got so many obvious differences that it doesn't matter anyway. If you want to accurately split-test...
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Forum: Conversion Rate Optimization
5th May 2015, 12:35 PM
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Replies: 48
Views: 4,187 Re: I need help with my sales page!!
Grab them by the throat from the start and don't let go. You need to make them feel the pain of what's going to happen if they don't buy your training.
This is an industry that has a notoriously...
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Forum: Copywriting
10th April 2015, 10:41 AM
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Replies: 10
Views: 1,459 Re: i need your HONEST advice:one "LAST" ride
The fact that you think you can get 10% conversions with this shows how unprepared you are to start spending money on traffic.
A 10% conversion rate from cold traffic is amazing and so many...
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd February 2015, 10:34 AM
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Replies: 23
Views: 1,604 Re: Can you critique my Copy
There's a tailor at the end of my street. Every single day tries to pull me inside while telling me the benefits of owning a suit.
I don't need a suit. Nothing he says is going to convince me...
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Forum: Conversion Rate Optimization
20th January 2015, 01:44 PM
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Replies: 17
Views: 1,413 Re: My Landing Page- Your Thoughts?
Dude, you've got a crazy amount of mistakes here and on your blog for a native English speaker. Only the first word of a sentence starts with a capital letter.
This may seem trivial to you but it...
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Forum: Copywriting
30th December 2014, 08:49 AM
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Replies: 19
Views: 1,546 Re: My sales page
Yep. Lots of people have told him the same thing and he's ignored it every time.
With all the threads he's starting seems he's more interested in link-dropping than getting actual feedback.
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd December 2014, 07:19 AM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,973 |
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd December 2014, 01:44 AM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,973 |
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Forum: Copywriting
12th December 2014, 04:17 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 1,201 |
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Forum: Copywriting
12th December 2014, 02:43 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 1,201 |
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Forum: Copywriting
26th November 2014, 07:53 AM
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Replies: 9
Views: 1,593 Re: Should I set up a squeeze page instead?
Maks,
Advice is only worthwhile if you do something with it. You've had so many suggestions about how to improve your page but it's exactly the same every time you ask for help.
The headline...
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Forum: Copywriting
11th November 2014, 07:00 AM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,820 Re: Critique my squeeze page please?
There's a difference between language style and blatant mistakes with spelling and grammar. Perhaps you're not aware of the mistakes you're making here, as I have no idea if English is your first...
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Forum: Copywriting
10th November 2014, 06:57 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,820 Re: Critique my squeeze page please?
Character is created via compelling copy, not appearing lazy and sloppy.
If you can't even get your headline correct, why should I trust anything you say?
Everything about this page...
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Forum: Copywriting
17th October 2014, 10:47 AM
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Replies: 9
Views: 976 |
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd October 2014, 05:26 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,025 |
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd October 2014, 07:08 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,025 |
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Forum: Conversion Rate Optimization
18th September 2014, 10:29 AM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,576 Re: Opinion on my LP
The copy is really average and there's a lot of points you're not addressing.
A perfect rottweiler... what does this even mean? Are your prospects likely to be kept awake at night thinking, If...
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Forum: Copywriting
10th September 2014, 05:43 AM
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Replies: 46
Views: 1,272 |
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Forum: Copywriting
10th September 2014, 04:59 AM
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Replies: 46
Views: 1,272 |
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Forum: Copywriting
7th September 2014, 03:44 PM
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Replies: 86
Views: 3,838 Re: Tear My Sales Letter To Shreds
Looks like you've put all of about an hour into it. Even though you were warned that the $97 job was going to be a waste of money, is it really worse than what you currently have?
If you're still...
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Forum: Copywriting
1st September 2014, 02:32 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,384 Re: Squeeze Page Copywriting Critique Needed!
Looks like you paid someone on Fiverr to read a (badly written) script that you wrote. The video is horrendous.
The headline reads awkwardly so you need to fix that.
You've received some great...
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Forum: Copywriting
31st August 2014, 02:57 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,622 |
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Forum: Copywriting
30th August 2014, 03:53 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 1,120 |
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Forum: Copywriting
28th August 2014, 08:08 AM
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Replies: 17
Views: 1,269 |
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Forum: Copywriting
26th August 2014, 08:13 AM
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Replies: 5
Views: 491 Re: suggestions, thoughts
Don't take this the wrong way, but at the moment it seems like you're just popping up on here every time you have an assignment and are basically asking people to do it for you.
You haven't...
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Forum: Copywriting
25th August 2014, 05:28 AM
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Replies: 71
Views: 3,251 Re: Can I make it as a copywriter?
You're trying to sell a skill that you don't possess.
But when you do make some money let me know as I'd love to manage your investment portfolio for you. I've never actually traded stocks before...
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Forum: Copywriting
24th August 2014, 04:18 PM
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Replies: 71
Views: 3,251 |
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Forum: Copywriting
24th August 2014, 08:36 AM
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Replies: 22
Views: 9,771 |
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Forum: Copywriting
24th August 2014, 07:25 AM
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Replies: 20
Views: 849 |
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Forum: Conversion Rate Optimization
23rd August 2014, 02:11 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 658 |
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Forum: Copywriting
20th August 2014, 11:45 AM
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Replies: 24
Views: 1,124 Re: Some Copywriting Issues on my squeeze page
I told you the same thing in the other thread you started on this. You need to have a better understanding of this market and what they actually want.
Also spend some time learning the language...
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Forum: Copywriting
20th August 2014, 06:00 AM
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Replies: 30
Views: 1,501 Re: Sales Letter vs VSL
This might not be what you want to hear but I think you'll have a tough time selling just an e-book in this niche. I know quite a few who have tried and given up.
Even the products in the $27 to...
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Forum: Copywriting
11th August 2014, 09:40 PM
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Replies: 52
Views: 2,358 Re: Robin Williams: DEAD
If it's for news and public interest commentary then the legal issue (the right of publicity) doesn't apply.
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Forum: Copywriting
11th August 2014, 08:59 PM
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Replies: 32
Views: 1,505 Re: Critique my upsell (monthly sub) copy?
Sorry, but I stopped taking you seriously after you wrote this:
I guess that Josh Pellicer and Jason Capital who have done 7 figures through Clickbank are not what you consider best-selling...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
10th August 2014, 06:46 AM
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Replies: 9
Views: 588 Re: Outsourcing & Fiverr
You've created two new threads asking the exact same question, which has literally nothing to do with copywriting.
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Forum: Copywriting
9th August 2014, 09:19 PM
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Replies: 32
Views: 1,505 |
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Forum: Copywriting
6th August 2014, 02:29 PM
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Replies: 37
Views: 2,199 Re: Letter for my copywriting business
Besides all the other problems with the letter, there's two important issues you fail to address: PROOF and CREDIBILITY.
If you can't demonstrate your ability to sell yourself, why would someone...
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd August 2014, 05:31 PM
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Replies: 46
Views: 1,476 Re: Critique Requested (thank you in advance)
The headline has no relevance to the rest of your letter. If you are going to use an intrigue-based headline you need to come back to it in the letter.
First line is 'beauty isn't cheap' and then...
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Forum: Copywriting
31st July 2014, 03:16 PM
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Replies: 34
Views: 1,292 Re: College...sick of it
Not sure what I wrote that you have construed as me getting emotional or being insulted, I think what I wrote was anything but. Of course you're entitled to your opinion, just as anyone is entitled...
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Forum: Copywriting
31st July 2014, 12:53 PM
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Replies: 34
Views: 1,292 Re: College...sick of it
I don't think it's the fact that you advocate college, more that you seem to want to steer everybody into engineering or pharmaceuticals without having any idea what they might be interested in. If...
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Forum: Copywriting
28th July 2014, 10:49 AM
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Replies: 30
Views: 1,549 |