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Forum: Copywriting 15th May 2009, 03:55 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 860
Posted By I Write Junk Mail
Re: Would you PLEASE critique my seminar sales page ;)

Okay, it's Friday night. I could be out on the town, meeting interesting people, maybe even some nice women, but I'm surfing the web because it's the safest thing I know how to do right now. See, I...
Forum: Copywriting 15th May 2009, 02:01 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 902
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Re: Writing my first ever sales letter - please help~!

Hi Asher,

I don't know what you did to get me to your sales letter (AdWords, text link, whatever), so I'm going to take it a face value. Let's start with your headline.

At first blush I'm...
Forum: Copywriting 15th May 2009, 12:49 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 770
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Re: Please Critique My Copy

Wow George. By the time I get to read about your solution, I feel like I got the sh*t kicked out of me in a dark alley. I'm in such pain I'm not sure I have the strength to hit the "BUY" button.
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Forum: Copywriting 28th April 2009, 10:12 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 572
Posted By I Write Junk Mail
Re: Please critique my fitness product sales copy

I didn't get a chance to read your entire sales letter. After struggling through an ALL CAPS HEADLINE, you convinced me the size of my butt is only going to get worse. So I gave up. Consider the...
Forum: Copywriting 18th April 2009, 05:36 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 644
Posted By I Write Junk Mail
Re: Fonts: What are your thoughts?

If we're talkin' online stuff, I use Verdana exclusively for body copy. Why? It was created by Microsoft just for screen use. You see, the human eye is strained an extra 20% or so reading screen type...
Forum: Copywriting 18th April 2009, 04:48 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,771
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Re: Advice on what to write my first copy for?

Don't sell yourself short just because you've never written a sales letter before. None of us were born with a Montblanc in our hands. Here are some thoughts ...

Take that passion of yours –...
Forum: Copywriting 15th April 2009, 02:36 AM
Replies: 68
Views: 3,158
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Re: Can YOU Figure Out Why This Copy Is Not Converting?

Daniel,

I've learned, though much trial and error, that you've got to make every word of a sales letter work for you. Excess verbiage wears the reader down. So let's trim your headline so there's...
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