Forum: Copywriting 
17th November 2011, 12:15 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 830  Re: Can you critique my sales letter please...
Sure, I'd be happy to.
I actually disagree about the headline not connecting with your target market.
Sure, it could be improved a bit... but "porn-star penis" will definitely hit home...
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Forum: Copywriting
16th November 2011, 09:14 PM
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Replies: 22
Views: 953 Re: Please Tell Me Why This Sucks
Hey there Steve,
Other than what's already been suggested, I noticed something else right away:
Towards the bottom, the "flow" you've got goin' on is...
Price Introduction >> Product Image...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
16th November 2011, 08:39 PM
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Replies: 37
Views: 908 Re: Would my site convert you, and if not, why?
Hey resellcells,
Lovin' the nice, clean design you've got goin' on...
...but I couldn't agree more with Fluffy here.
This has already been said before, too... but I honestly wouldn't rate...
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Forum: Copywriting
14th November 2011, 05:40 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 605 Re: Do you use this copy fee strategy?
Hi abugah,
You're absolutely right, the nature of your relationship with a client plays a big part in how much you can raise your fees at any one given time.
Here's what I've noticed:
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Forum: Copywriting
13th November 2011, 12:59 PM
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Replies: 41
Views: 1,551 Re: How Good Are You?
Right on Mark, right on.
I'll admit this wasn't easy for me to grasp when I first got started... but once I wrapped my head around it, I didn't look back.
A few months ago I had a gentleman...
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Forum: Copywriting
13th November 2011, 11:05 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 751 Re: What do you think of this 1914 space ad?
Interesting post, abugah... I enjoy reading REALLY old ads. :)
Honestly, you'd probably have to change a lot more than a few things for it to work with today's consumers.
I'd actually never...
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Forum: Copywriting
12th November 2011, 08:54 AM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,021 Re: Suppose the copy fee was $15,000...
Absolutely not.
I don't care what someone's willing to pay:
If what they're offering isn't legit, if I don't believe in it myself, if I can't get behind it 100%... I won't write.
Guess I'm...
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Forum: Copywriting
11th November 2011, 08:50 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 446 Re: Report Title-Help please
Hmmm...
...don't really have all that much to work with here, Mark... but I'll try.
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Headline - Social Profits
Subheadline - It Pays To Be Friendly
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Forum: Copywriting
11th November 2011, 08:14 AM
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Replies: 8
Views: 1,811 Re: Books on Getting Copywriting Clients
Hey J,
Getting clients is always tricky, and in my personal experience... there isn't an end-all be-all solution that'll work for absolutely everybody.
You've got 2 ways you can approach this:...
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Forum: Copywriting
10th November 2011, 11:24 AM
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Replies: 10
Views: 676 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
9th November 2011, 03:27 PM
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Replies: 29
Views: 987 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
9th November 2011, 12:00 PM
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Replies: 29
Views: 987 |
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Forum: Copywriting
8th November 2011, 01:31 PM
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Replies: 17
Views: 1,489 |
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Forum: Copywriting
8th November 2011, 01:16 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 1,902 |
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Forum: Copywriting
7th November 2011, 01:43 AM
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Replies: 10
Views: 676 Re: Available to Critique My Sales Copy?
Hi Paula,
I've attached my critique as a PDF so you can
download and read it away from the forum if
you'd like.
Good luck with increasing the sales of your
WSO! :)
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Forum: Copywriting
6th November 2011, 02:27 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 676 Re: Available to Critique My Sales Copy?
Hey Paula,
Got your PM, but I haven't had a chance to look at it yet.
Something has come up (that I didn't PLAN on)... and I've got to get that out of the way first.
I'll review your copy...
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Forum: Copywriting
6th November 2011, 11:54 AM
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Replies: 10
Views: 676 |
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Forum: Copywriting
6th November 2011, 11:50 AM
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Replies: 10
Views: 643 Re: Newbie request for Site Review
Hey TinPete,
Hmmm... this looks like a sniper site to me. :)
AWESOME job with that bigger link in your right sidebar Pete.
The classic upside-down triangle. Great technique to use for...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th November 2011, 05:36 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 740 Re: How Do YOU Write Copy?
Awesome, I'm not the only one! :)
Haha, I redefine the word 'thorough' with my research and preparation process most of the time.
Normally I try to cram all the prep work into one or two...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th November 2011, 09:41 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 704 Re: "Yes, I hear you're a copyright-er?"
Hi there,
I'd usually never recommend editing a testimonial (at least not without the permission of the person who wrote it)...
...but in this case, it'd be in your best interest to change it...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th November 2011, 09:07 AM
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Replies: 23
Views: 809 Re: A Little Rant
No offense Max, but a response like this is only going to make Copy Nazi heckle you even further.
Thought this was supposed to be a learning environment... all I'm seeing is childish arguments. ...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th November 2011, 08:18 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 704 Re: "Yes, I hear you're a copyright-er?"
Hey Steve,
Knew I wasn't alone on this one!
Honestly, I'm surprised it's taken me this long to run into that... but yeah, I'll definitely take that extra second or two and explain that I'm...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th November 2011, 08:06 AM
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Replies: 23
Views: 809 Re: A Little Rant
WOW, couldn't agree with you more here Max.
We're more alike than I thought.
I set aside at least 1-2 hours a day for fitness, and I've done so since around age 14.
Maybe the military...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th November 2011, 07:42 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 704  "Yes, I hear you're a copyright-er?"
No joke - that's what a (very pleasant) woman said to me on the phone this morning.
Apparently another friend of mine had verbally mentioned to her what I do
for a living... and somehow failed...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
19th October 2011, 01:32 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 404 Re: Where would you start?
EXCELLENT advice here. Andy, read this one about 10 times... it'll save you so much time and frustration, it's unreal.
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Forum: Off Topic Forum
19th October 2011, 01:06 PM
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Replies: 17
Views: 758 |
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Forum: Copywriting
26th September 2011, 04:47 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 1,442 |
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Forum: Copywriting
26th September 2011, 03:21 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 1,442 Re: Please Critique This Ad Copy
Hey Jonathan,
I see a lot of good stuff goin' on here...
...but I've also got some ideas for improvement.
What I Like About It Right Now:
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Forum: Social Media
24th March 2011, 08:55 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 1,053 Re: Social Media Automation ?!?
I used to use something that was 'slightly' automated.
Had a WP blog that automatically posted to Twitter (Twitter plugin)..
And I had something similar for posting to Facebook...
But...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
1st December 2010, 01:15 AM
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Replies: 8
Views: 418 Re: Twitter - How to Start?!
Hey boaterscott,
Pretty good stuff here so far... Thought I'd add a little more. About the name issue..
Depends on what you'd like to "brand" the most.... you, or your site. Like for example...
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Forum: Offline Marketing
1st December 2010, 12:42 AM
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Replies: 9
Views: 1,061 Re: A Guide to Training Your Sales People
Hi there,
I like what you said about having sales reps stop by the business in person. Little more direct and unique than just pickin' up the phone and making a cold call.
And, doing it...
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Forum: Mind Warriors
7th July 2010, 10:49 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 1,727 Newbies: Affiliate Marketing Really IS An Art
Earning substantial money from affiliate marketing truly is an art.
Hate to say it, but writing up a decent product review and slappin' it online won't get you too many sales. You've got to do...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
4th July 2010, 08:55 AM
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Replies: 14
Views: 898 Why "High Traffic" Should NOT Be Your Goal Online
Alright this is geared more towards those that are newer to the IM scene. All you salty vets will already know this.
When I first came online, I thought it'd be great to have LOTS of traffic. I...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
4th July 2010, 08:02 AM
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Replies: 49
Views: 2,201 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
3rd July 2010, 04:31 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 611 Re: Your honest opinion please...
Hi,
I like your idea of offering the videos for free right up front.
Have you considered getting visitors to opt-in before they can get their free videos? Or are you already doing that?
...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd March 2010, 03:02 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 506 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd March 2010, 02:30 PM
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Replies: 22
Views: 693 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
23rd March 2010, 12:24 PM
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Replies: 22
Views: 693 What Golf Can Teach Us About Internet Marketing
I never really thought about it much before, but playing good golf and doing well with IM are VERY similar.
Had a chance to get out and play my first round of Michigan golf yesterday, and I was a...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
21st March 2010, 05:35 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 539 Re: Confused About What To Digg/Stumble
Hi there,
I don't think there'd be a problem with Digging and Stumbling the same articles.
Have you heard of Social Marker?
I used to use that to social bookmark my articles -- it's a...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
19th March 2010, 06:35 PM
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Replies: 24
Views: 1,464 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
20th February 2010, 02:50 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,235 |