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Forum: Copywriting 9th June 2012, 01:38 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 828
Posted By Ryan Popovic
Re: Please Critique My For Hire Page

I am certainly no great copywriter but how about something like "What would it mean for your business if your site was bringing you tons of traffic and insane sales?" as a headline?

Something like...
Forum: Copywriting 15th March 2012, 02:47 AM
Replies: 50
Views: 3,074
Posted By Ryan Popovic
Re: Your Squeeze Page Comments Are Invited

Ronak,

First impression: Seems like a lot of words in general, and a lot of big words. Testimonials are good.

Definitely cut down the call to action "download the holy grail of internet...
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