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Forum: Copywriting 22nd September 2011, 07:41 AM
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Posted By PaulP51D
Re: Anyone care to review and critique my copy?

Derek,

First impressions are that Raydal is correct, much of the copy is too cramped and when you get into the normal, smaller text you starting getting too earnest - better to concentrate on...
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