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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 20th February 2014, 03:18 AM
Replies: 67
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Posted By James Druman
Re: Where to get article witers?

God bless America, right?

Where some idiot decided (more like a bunch of idiots) it was a good idea to extort men and lock them up when they couldn't pay.

Because it's so easy to make money in...
Forum: Copywriting 17th February 2014, 06:25 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,359
Posted By sethczerepak
Re: Site critique?

Just a tip...

When you ask people for feedback, you might want to hold off on the debating and explaining. It's a turn off. Makes us not want to invest our time into helping.
Forum: Copywriting 17th February 2014, 12:24 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,359
Posted By shawnlebrun
Re: Site critique?

Nick, is that true... or is it just what YOU think.

Remember, an important skill as a copywriter is to be able to put yourself COMPLETELY into your prospects' shoes.

Would THEY think it's too...
Forum: Copywriting 17th February 2014, 12:12 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,359
Posted By Mark Pescetti
Re: Site critique?

Ewen is right.

You have a brandable name. Yet there's ZERO branding.

There's also ZERO hook or positioning.

Here's something your copy doesn't acknowledge...

When prospects read a...
Forum: Copywriting 16th February 2014, 05:24 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,359
Posted By Tim R
Re: Site critique?

It's because you've got different links set up. The one you are talking about goes to /my-work/ but the link in the side menu goes to /category/portfolio.

I'd get rid of the latter, as you don't...
Forum: Copywriting 16th February 2014, 05:14 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,359
Posted By joe golfer
Re: Site critique?

--Dimensionalize (http://www.makepeacetotalpackage.com/archives/make-your-products-benefits-sparkle/) the benefits in your bullets more.
--Do lay people know or care about NLP?
--Tell me some of...
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