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Forum: Copywriting 24th May 2009, 05:44 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 638
Posted By Daniel Scott
Re: Please help review my copy

A quick skim of your copy reveals:

No hook
No story
No bullets
Few testimonials

Essentially, what DOES it have that a good salesletter should?

Answer: not a lot.
Forum: Copywriting 21st May 2009, 05:11 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 638
Posted By BillOliver
Re: Please help review my copy

1) The major mistake product developers make is to first think "product" then "market". Gary Halbert said: "Find a starving crowd." That is, FIRST look at the market, THEN tailor make the product...
Forum: Copywriting 21st May 2009, 10:08 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 638
Posted By BlaineGlynn
Re: Please help review my copy

I saw you put up a headline which is not bad IMHO, but maybe you want to look at it from the customer's point of view: They are really frustrated to their wits end because they cannot figure it out,...
Forum: Copywriting 20th May 2009, 08:13 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 638
Posted By JMartin
Re: Please help review my copy

Who exactly is the initial target?

I ask because the first thing that jumped out at me was your headline addresses students, but then you address parents and then you talk using "you" as it...
Forum: Copywriting 20th May 2009, 03:10 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 638
Posted By bryansarnold
Re: Please help review my copy

You need a headline. Don't be afraid to place a powerful headline even though you have niche market.
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