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Forum: Programming 15th May 2010, 01:52 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 719
Posted By Manfred Ekblad
Re: Baffles some of the best coders on the planet!

Yeah, sure :)

I'm guessing you are hosting your site on the Squarespace platform. Do you have access to customize the code? (PHP/html/javascript-code)
Forum: Programming 15th May 2010, 01:11 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 719
Posted By Manfred Ekblad
Re: Baffles some of the best coders on the planet!

Hmm...

So, the concept is like this, if I understand you correctly:

1. the visitor fills in the form
2. onsubmit then submitted=true
3. the target for the form is hidden_iframe
4. when...
Forum: Copywriting 6th April 2010, 09:18 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,311
Posted By JohnMcCabe
Re: As if GOD himself wrote this squeeze page

I guess even God himself has off days...

I hate to pile on, but I'm going to force myself...

What is your Most Wanted Response? You say you want downloads of the free trial, yet your landing...
Forum: Copywriting 6th April 2010, 08:51 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,311
Posted By maximus242
Re: As if GOD himself wrote this squeeze page

Okay lets begin, layout, sucks.

Design, sucks.

Headline formatting makes me think your a con artist.

Free analysis tool doesnt seem very valuable and why are you giving it to me for free
...
Forum: Copywriting 5th April 2010, 07:05 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,311
Posted By rondo
Re: As if GOD himself wrote this squeeze page

Put the exe file in a zip because a lot of people don't like to download exes.
Or place a 'safe download' badge from one the big download sites.

Andrew
Forum: Copywriting 5th April 2010, 02:38 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,311
Posted By travlinguy
Re: As if GOD himself wrote this squeeze page

I didn't look below the fold because there was no reason to. Like ghyphena says, you've got way too much going on with this page. If you really want to 'convert' you're going to need to go with a...
Forum: Copywriting 5th April 2010, 02:10 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,311
Posted By ghyphena
Re: As if GOD himself wrote this squeeze page

In my (very) humble opinion, your squeeze page is not effective. Not at all.

There's just too much going on. There very dominant frames on the top and right-hand side... a whole bunch of...
Forum: Copywriting 5th April 2010, 02:00 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,311
Posted By travlinguy
Re: As if GOD himself wrote this squeeze page

Start by getting a headline with the main benefit in it. Something like:

Free Analysis Tool Shows Realistic Cash Projections For Your Prospective Franchise. Get It NOW!


Then you've got a...
Forum: Copywriting 25th July 2009, 04:42 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,104
Posted By Alex Cohen
Re: Seriously, why the hell am I converting under 1%?

Jason,

1. It could be the headline. Warning headlines can be very effective, but only if they talk about the condition/situation/pain the prospect is trying to move away from.

If you haven't...
Forum: Copywriting 25th July 2009, 04:00 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,104
Posted By Sleaklight
Re: Seriously, why the hell am I converting under 1%?

Probably because the screen shot of the order page you have is of the old clickbank versus the new order form. They click through to buy and see that it is a different page and don't complete the...
Forum: Copywriting 28th May 2009, 11:36 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 901
Posted By gjabiz
I wasn't sure I went to the same page as the others.

I'm seeing some ORANGE??? copy that says "13 Steps for Evaluating a Franchise Opportunity"...is this the right site?

If so, then here are my comments, if not, I'll delete this post.

First, I...
Forum: Copywriting 27th May 2009, 07:22 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 901
Posted By Alex Cohen
Re: How good is my pre-selling and pitch?

Jason,

I coach in the business buying niche, and I have examples in my files of people who bought businesses without consulting a buyer representative and lost huge amounts of money. So I...
Forum: Copywriting 27th May 2009, 11:01 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 901
Posted By icering87
Re: How good is my pre-selling and pitch?

I think the story is good, It's set up in a well, logical order, and I think it works as far as getting people to download the documents. But not the book. I would put the actually book on another...
Forum: Copywriting 27th May 2009, 08:56 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 901
Posted By Phalanx
Re: How good is my pre-selling and pitch?

One thing that jumps out at me is the distracting background. I'd say black or dark blue would work better, because those are perceived as serious business colours (can't find the reference right...
Forum: Copywriting 27th May 2009, 08:22 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 901
Posted By Johnny12345
Re: How good is my pre-selling and pitch?

Jason,

A few more things...

1) The placement of your picture isn't optimal. It's looking away from your copy, instead of into it. That's a mistake. I would move it to the start of your first...
Forum: Copywriting 26th May 2009, 07:46 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 901
Posted By activetrader
Re: How good is my pre-selling and pitch?

I personally like the look except for the background. I gravitate toward editorial style pitch pages. I would personally took off the word "finally" from the headline. I would definitely take off the...
Forum: Copywriting 26th May 2009, 06:34 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 901
Posted By Alex Cohen
Re: How good is my pre-selling and pitch?

Jason,

A better approach would be to use a "classic" sales letter format. What you have now is pretty-much just a brochure on a website.

For example, get the reader's attention with a...
Forum: Copywriting 26th May 2009, 05:44 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 901
Posted By Loren Woirhaye
Re: How good is my pre-selling and pitch?

There are a lot of factors in choosing the voice of the copy
and the layout even of the salespage. The way you have
it set-up reminds me of a site for an engineering firm, not
a site selling a...
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