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Forum: Copywriting 9th December 2009, 05:12 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 980
Posted By Hugh Thyer
Re: Critique of my sales letter please

Oh, and a photo of you in a banana lounge in a Hawaiian shirt would be better instead of the headshot you've used.
Forum: Copywriting 9th December 2009, 04:15 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 980
Posted By Hugh Thyer
Re: Critique of my sales letter please

I like your page.

I agree that you should have more pictures and video of the things people can do on a budget. Make it FUN! Get people excited. Build it around a story of someone who went on...
Forum: Copywriting 9th December 2009, 08:16 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 980
Posted By travlinguy
Re: Critique of my sales letter please

Your post illustrates several things. One, you're dead-ass wrong about Lee's copy sucking big time and she has absolutely no need to start over. I'm not going to go point by point as to why you're...
Forum: Copywriting 8th December 2009, 05:23 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 980
Posted By andyphillips101
Re: Critique of my sales letter please

Hi Cindy

There are some great suggestions in this thread, I love the idea that you can ask the forum for feedback and people genuinely want to help fellow marketers. With this in mind I have...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 8th December 2009, 05:11 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 3,552
Posted By Zeus66
Re: Average Conversion Rates for eBooks from List Traffic?

A "rented" list of 2 million is a far cry from your own in-house list of subscribers. Not even worth comparing the two.
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 8th December 2009, 04:27 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 3,552
Posted By Zeus66
Re: Average Conversion Rates for eBooks from List Traffic?

What Brad wrote. I track this stuff pretty closely in my business, and I see a pretty clear progression based on the traffic source.

I might get as much as 2% from a source like organic search...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 8th December 2009, 04:21 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 3,552
Posted By Brad Spencer
Re: Average Conversion Rates for eBooks from List Traffic?

This is a tough question to answer b/c there are wicked amounts of variables to consider.

I'll do the best I can to answer this...

Yes, list traffic is easier to sell stuff to b/c people know...
Forum: Copywriting 6th December 2009, 01:56 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 980
Posted By Mr. Enthusiastic
Re: Critique of my sales letter please

Hi Cindy! Next time I visit Hawaii I plan to buy your guide and ask your advice!

You have enough material for a series of guide books:
How to enjoy a great Hawaiian vacation with a disability...
Forum: Copywriting 5th December 2009, 11:46 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 980
Posted By Rubes
Re: Critique of my sales letter please

G'day Cindy,

Here are my suggestions from top to bottom;

Center the page, if you resize your screen resolution to 1024 x 768, some of the text is cut off on the right side. That's a pretty...
Forum: Copywriting 5th December 2009, 09:52 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 980
Posted By superaffiliate007
Re: Critique of my sales letter please

My suggestion is:
1.Add more pictures!
2.Add more videos!
3.Emphasize what they will suffer if thy don't get your product
4. Emphasize the joy if they buy your product.

People need more...
Forum: Copywriting 5th December 2009, 01:10 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 980
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: Critique of my sales letter please

Put a headshot up top left. You in Hawaiian lei. Break up the copy with the photos you have across the top of the page. And instead of the tricky headline, turn it around to something like "At Last!...
Forum: Copywriting 4th December 2009, 06:39 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 980
Posted By wrcato2
Re: Critique of my sales letter please

Actually... you have all your eggs in the basket the only problem is that they aren't in the right spots.
Your headline
your pre-head is there
Open your eye's and you'll find the gems.
Forum: Copywriting 2nd December 2009, 10:45 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 980
Posted By Jim Gillum
Re: Critique of my sales letter please

The suggestions look pretty good so far......

Long letters sell better that short letters......
Prospect is interested them...heavy on the "you"

Price structure is difficult to understand at...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd December 2009, 09:24 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 980
Posted By travlinguy
Re: Critique of my sales letter please

First, let’s get a link in there for ya: http://www.coconutroads.com/HawaiiBudgetVacation.html (http://www.coconutroads.com/HawaiiBudgetVacation.html)

Okay, there are some issues but it really...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd December 2009, 09:09 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 980
Posted By kimperino1985
Re: Critique of my sales letter please

The page is too long to scroll down. You might want to keep it short using hyperlinks and a little description about each topic. The background color and the font color is decent. However, the font...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd December 2009, 07:21 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 980
Posted By Andrew Gould
Re: Critique of my sales letter please

It reads more like an article than a sales letter.

The only specific things I can say are that it doesn't appear centered in Firefox and 'unlink' your name, you don't want the reader leaving your...
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