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Forum: Search Engine Optimization 3rd September 2012, 02:42 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,072
Posted By dburk
Re: New Sales Page.. about to send PPC traffic

Hi Gene,

I just spotted this thread, sorry I didn't see it sooner, I may have been able to save you some time.

It took me about 1 second to spot why your landing page was disapproved. The...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 1st September 2012, 11:10 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,072
Posted By Lauraknigh
Re: New Sales Page.. about to send PPC traffic

Try adding something to let visitors know they can trust your site. You've already got a money back guarantee and testimonials, but adding some kind of approved website badge would make the site a...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 1st September 2012, 06:29 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,072
Posted By ours
Re: New Sales Page.. about to send PPC traffic

Check your robots.txt file.. you place wrong sitemap and no need to place crawl delay.. why you place those ? check http://gerwingolf.com/robots.txt
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 31st August 2012, 11:04 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,072
Posted By Greedy
Re: New Sales Page.. about to send PPC traffic

- Multiple order buttons.

- I would incorporate a green color scheme. Looks great with golf.

- Have an auto-playing video.

- An Arnold Palmer picture maybe.

But you are headed in the...
Forum: Copywriting 31st August 2012, 08:47 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 625
Posted By travlinguy
Re: Headline Innapropriate?

Try this: Only In Your Dreams Will Your Swing Be Better

Put Arnold's quote under that.
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 31st August 2012, 08:13 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,072
Posted By IM Nick
Re: New Sales Page.. about to send PPC traffic

Your only giving your visitors one chance to order. You need to have multiple order buttons on there.
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 31st August 2012, 07:38 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,072
Posted By Weedy92
Re: New Sales Page.. about to send PPC traffic

Looks decent enough.
Forum: Copywriting 31st August 2012, 03:24 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 625
Posted By CopyMonster
Re: Headline Innapropriate?

I'd test against the AP quote...

"This FORCES Me To Swing
The Way I’m Supposed To Swing..."
Arnold Palmer
Forum: Copywriting 31st August 2012, 12:30 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 625
Posted By Steve The Copywriter
Re: Headline Innapropriate?

Hi Gene,

It's not bad at all - once you get in to it.

But...

You HAVE to grab the readers attention at the very beginning with the best you've got or they may not bother to read it.
...
Forum: Copywriting 31st August 2012, 01:16 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 625
Posted By 1robert
Re: Headline Innapropriate?

Congrats Gene :)

This is a HUGE improvement.

I was shocked to see how much better your letter is now.

Nicely done!
Forum: Copywriting 31st August 2012, 01:12 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 625
Posted By objectifsucces
Re: Headline Innapropriate?

Hi Gene,

First thing that came in mind to me when I read "spooky" in your headline was Gene Schwartz's famous "Sneaky Little Arthritis Tricks" ad.

Not sure, but I guess your copywriter may have...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd August 2012, 01:30 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,222
Posted By BizManRobert
Re: Copy Critique Please

Hi Gene.

I concur with what Ewen mentions in his post.
Moreover, if you want to study a real pro/someone who has sold millions in the golf market.
Look no further than Copywriting Expert John...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd August 2012, 01:30 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,222
Posted By buddhabux
Re: Copy Critique Please

Gene,

your copy is getting better and better with the revisions, but there are two things about it still to be addressed: lack of targeted emotional push buttons and wordiness that dilutes the...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd August 2012, 01:18 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,222
Posted By Rob28x
Re: Copy Critique Please

Yes. I understand that's what it is doing, but I really could care less. All I care about is that it works, and helps me not be the laughing stock of the course.

Yes the updated version.


...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd August 2012, 07:08 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,222
Posted By Rob28x
Re: Copy Critique Please

I will say that I am probably in your target market. I have been a golfer for just a few years now. I am sure my swing needs a lot of work, but there's nothing in your sales letter that makes me want...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd August 2012, 02:15 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,222
Posted By 1robert
Re: Copy Critique Please

This product is interesting Gene, but the letter does need some work.

If this was my letter, I would make it look like an article by placing testimonials on the right side of the page.

You...
Forum: Copywriting 14th August 2012, 12:14 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,222
Posted By schttrj
Re: Copy Critique Please

Headline needs work...I see only the name of the product. It doesn't make any sense to me. Just like any generic product in the market.

Lead does NOT bring any emotion...It doesn't catch me and...
Forum: Copywriting 13th August 2012, 07:22 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,222
Posted By ewenmack
Re: Copy Critique Please

Gene, I'd bring to the top of the page those 2 top endorsements you have...
and use their logos too.

It will create believability at the beginning and carry it through to the buy button.

Just...
Forum: Copywriting 13th August 2012, 06:18 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,222
Posted By ThomasOMalley
Re: Copy Critique Please

Your headline needs some serious work. It only mentions features.

Unless your product is already famous, the name of your product in the headline is a mistake. Plus, the name is not even...
Forum: Offline Marketing 5th April 2011, 08:53 PM
Replies: 40
Views: 3,820
Posted By iAmNameLess
Re: SMS Campaign Management - What to charge??

Well, this is what separates me from others, and stops them from doing it by themselves. I get the setup fee, if I decide to do table tents, no later than a week later they approve what we have...
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