Forum: Copywriting
13th November 2012, 07:28 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 853 Re: What do you recommend?
A combination SHORT (no longer than 90 seconds) email at the top of your WSO, then a long form sales letter that easily moves from point to point without irrelevant graphics, arrows, or dollar bill...
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Forum: Copywriting
9th November 2012, 10:50 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 1,479 |
Forum: Copywriting
2nd November 2012, 02:05 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 791 What's Your Vibe?
Just like when you walk into a restaurant, bar, nightclub or coffeehouse and immediately feel the vibe of the joint...
...your copy needs to project a deliberate atmosphere.
Since copywriting...
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Forum: Copywriting
2nd November 2012, 01:42 PM
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Replies: 26
Views: 1,218 Re: How is this opening paragraph?
So more like this?
Attention Biz,
Do you run your business like me?
You’re careful where you spend your marketing dollars, and find nothing worse than some ad rep calling you during lunch...
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Forum: Copywriting
31st October 2012, 04:49 PM
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Replies: 28
Views: 986 Re: Please critique my squeeze page
Apologies to the OP for derailing his thread.
Here's some links that might help:
The Top 4 Best Squeeze Pages Of 2012 (so far) | The Marketing Show with Clay Collins...
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Forum: Copywriting
31st October 2012, 01:27 PM
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Replies: 28
Views: 986 Re: Please critique my squeeze page
Nowhere near.
It's over-designed and over-written (this also applies to the other layouts you've shown).
[A friendly bit of advice - either edit or scrap your other sample with the bad language...
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Forum: Copywriting
31st October 2012, 10:14 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 483 |
Forum: Copywriting
31st October 2012, 07:46 AM
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Replies: 28
Views: 986 Re: Please critique my squeeze page
Yes... and unfortunately... since its been ripped 957,634 times so far, I can no longer use the page. :-)
note to self: keep your mouth shut on whats working.
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Forum: Copywriting
29th October 2012, 03:14 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 795 |
Forum: Copywriting
29th October 2012, 02:17 PM
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Replies: 28
Views: 986 Re: Please critique my squeeze page
I actually designed this "warning" squeeze page you're using a few years ago, Gave it to kern and now the damn thing is everywhere.
If you're gonna use it, you might as well use it correctly,...
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Forum: Copywriting
29th October 2012, 02:17 PM
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Replies: 19
Views: 949 |
Forum: Copywriting
29th October 2012, 07:41 AM
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Replies: 91
Views: 4,490 |
Forum: Copywriting
27th October 2012, 04:42 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 769 Re: Need some opinions on my squeeze page!
Copy Critique
Headline: Generic, boring, heard it all before. What makes you product special? Is it new? Revolutionary? Does it burn fat in new awesome ways? What the hell are ya sellin'?
Copy:...
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Forum: Copywriting
26th October 2012, 08:52 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 772 Re: The Market for Lemons - as applied to I.M.
Very interesting paper, Professor Lambe.
An essential takeaway from this paper is while dishonesty in the market may drive away legitimate businesses, it leads to merchants becoming...
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Forum: Wanted - Members Looking To Hire You
23rd October 2012, 10:38 AM
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Replies: 8
Views: 602 |
Forum: Copywriting
22nd October 2012, 07:17 PM
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Replies: 91
Views: 4,490 |
Forum: Copywriting
22nd October 2012, 10:07 AM
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Replies: 51
Views: 3,529 |
Forum: Copywriting
21st October 2012, 11:40 PM
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Replies: 91
Views: 4,490 |
Forum: Copywriting
15th October 2012, 11:49 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 763 K.I.S.S.
http://marchingagainstphilip.files.wordpress.com/2010/04/piano_ad3.jpg
K.I.S.S. - "Keep It Simple Stupid".
The old "They laughed when I sat down at the piano..." press ad. Written by John...
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Forum: Copywriting
4th October 2012, 10:13 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 1,171 What Is Copywriting?
A great mentor of mine told me, "One of the best ways to learn is to teach."
And I've always admired people who "get" their craft.
They seem to spend more time than I do organizing my thoughts....
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Forum: Copywriting
4th September 2012, 07:29 AM
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Replies: 9
Views: 1,573 Re: Swipe File for Gold
WHO'S MAILING WHAT! Archive (http://www.whosmailingwhat.com/)
http://www.ultimate-online-swipe-file.com/
Best Advertising Collection | Hard To Find Editorial Ads (http://www.hardtofindads.com/)...
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Forum: Copywriting
26th February 2012, 09:28 PM
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Replies: 29
Views: 4,389 |
Forum: Copywriting
13th February 2012, 03:05 AM
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Replies: 9
Views: 1,996 Write if you want work
http://www.infomarketingblog.com/images/write_JWT.jpgRick Duris just sent me this. Mainly because he knows I started my career as a 16 year old runner for J. Walter Thompson - then the world's...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
10th October 2011, 01:03 PM
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Replies: 53
Views: 1,552 |
Forum: Off Topic Forum
4th June 2011, 04:46 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 511 Re: kidney sold for ipad
I heard that news.:eek:
Quite unbelievable and so sad.
Sorry but i really don't know why people can be so dumb sometimes.
So what's he gonna do when the iPad 3 comes out? Unless there's an...
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Forum: Ad Networks (CPM/CPL, Display)
30th May 2011, 03:41 PM
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Replies: 24
Views: 1,711 Re: CPA -How To Start At CPA ?
You can do a coupons type list...you really don't need such "niche" lists with cpa offers, just deliverability, then you just drop the offers, and walla. But since you're promoting something broad...
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Forum: Copywriting
11th February 2011, 01:20 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 970 |
Forum: Mind Warriors
17th June 2010, 04:50 AM
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Replies: 275
Views: 63,291 Re: The Secret in Think and Grow Rich?
I'm there with you on that one. If I had to summarise the book in one sentence, that would be exactly it.
Thoughts are things.
It took me awhile to really "get" it.
It's easy and hard at...
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Forum: Copywriting
11th February 2010, 07:03 AM
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Replies: 42
Views: 4,015 The Care and Feeding of Copywriters
Dear Fellow Marketer,
Like you, I am a marketer.
But at my core, in my heart, I am a copywriter. I get paid thousands per sales letter and email. Frankly, even more than the late, revered...
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Forum: Ad Networks (CPM/CPL, Display)
17th January 2009, 07:36 PM
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Replies: 348
Views: 54,776 |