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Forum: Copywriting 18th May 2012, 07:09 PM
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Posted By Daveslaw
Re: Squeeze page advice?

Joseph has a point here... although this niche it may work for the people who would be looking at this ad who are looking for this type of information... a photo of a sexy woman... I just think more...
Forum: Copywriting 18th May 2012, 07:00 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 758
Posted By Des Lau
Re: Squeeze page advice?

overall the page layout is good. Above the fold and no fuss.

Your copy can be improved as the content phrasing is alittle clumsy. There was one line that didn't make sense to me, only after...
Forum: Copywriting 18th May 2012, 06:58 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 758
Posted By Daveslaw
Re: Squeeze page advice?

I think the squeeze page is fine for the niche. The photo for the background... nice! This is the type of niche that photo attention is important, however I have read many case studies on other...
Forum: Copywriting 18th May 2012, 06:43 PM
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Views: 758
Posted By Nathan251
Re: Squeeze page advice?

I like the background pic ;) although some would view it as smutty or cheap

and i agree with earlier comments, you need an image of the product you are providing like an ebook cover or some discs...
Forum: Copywriting 18th May 2012, 06:39 PM
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Views: 758
Posted By Declan O Flaherty
Re: Squeeze page advice?

Well, I disagree with Birdi. I think the market you are promoting to have 45 minutes to spare if it will provide them wih the information they need.

I like your copy (I think Eben Pagan uses...
Forum: Copywriting 18th May 2012, 06:27 PM
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Views: 758
Posted By Birdi
Re: Squeeze page advice?

hey,

well your squeeze page is not offering some form of incentive to subscribe, an image of the product that your offering for free?

I think your copy needs to change, people dont like being...
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