Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 
29th July 2013, 04:46 PM
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Views: 1,122 Re: Sales Funnels are tough!!!!
Focus on the sales copy for the product you are promoting and finding out if it converts or not.
Then focus on testing and tweaking and keeping what is working and discarding what is not working.
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
29th July 2013, 03:13 PM
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Replies: 24
Views: 1,122 Re: Sales Funnels are tough!!!!
That is not a benefit. What are the benefits of working with a trainer? I'm not in that niche but I can think of 15 right off the top of my head. I'm not going to do that.
Here are a couple...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
29th July 2013, 02:09 PM
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Replies: 24
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
29th July 2013, 08:22 AM
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Replies: 24
Views: 1,122 Re: Sales Funnels are tough!!!!
Being a bit finicky - I'd change the wording on the Sign Up Form thus: -
Instead of saying ----- "without sweating!"
I'd say ---------- "No Sweat!" (Makes it a bit edgier, I think!)
As...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
29th July 2013, 03:22 AM
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Replies: 24
Views: 1,122 Re: Sales Funnels are tough!!!!
Hey Wes,
I landed on your page, but didn't feel compelled to put my email down. I'd need more context. Who's this expert trainer? What authority do they have? Who's used this stuff before? Does it...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
29th July 2013, 01:10 AM
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
29th July 2013, 12:31 AM
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Replies: 24
Views: 1,122 Re: Sales Funnels are tough!!!!
What traffic do you use? This is the key element of conversion. Imagine if your traffic is not interested in your topic. Or they are freebie seekers. The more targeted the traffic is, the more sales...
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Forum: Copywriting
29th December 2012, 04:43 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,216 |
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Forum: Copywriting
29th December 2012, 04:42 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,216  Re: Any WeightLoss and fitness niche writers
Hi Sue,
Nice to meet someone from "Aussieland." How's it there? I have a friend that lives in your area. I do work for him once in a while.
Anyway, I looked at the e-book again, and am...
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Forum: Copywriting
29th December 2012, 04:23 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,216 |
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Forum: Copywriting
29th December 2012, 04:22 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,216 Re: Any WeightLoss and fitness niche writers
I had a look at the ebook and I found the whole set up very ugly. I got as far as the testimonials and found far too many that it started to look spammy.
In my opinion this book needs a rewrite...
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Forum: Copywriting
29th December 2012, 04:20 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,216 Re: Any WeightLoss and fitness niche writers
I concur. I actually took a minute or two to skim through the e-book. I noticed a number of errors. The formatting is wrong, etc.
The best way to get this book shaped up to sell, is to have a...
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Forum: Copywriting
29th December 2012, 04:10 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,216 |
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Forum: Copywriting
29th December 2012, 03:57 PM
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Replies: 15
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Forum: Copywriting
29th December 2012, 03:19 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,216 Any WeightLoss and fitness niche writers
Hey I am a professional weight loss and fitness writer. I am working in this industry for 5 years. If you want to know more about me you could post a question.
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Forum: Copywriting
28th December 2012, 06:57 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,216 Re: Any WeightLoss and fitness niche writers
Did you make that header banner in Geocities?
Well, I actually did read through a couple of pages. Did you write this yourself? It's pretty hard to read and it's not something you want to...
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Forum: Copywriting
28th December 2012, 03:02 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,216 |
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Forum: Copywriting
28th December 2012, 01:33 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,216 |
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Forum: Copywriting
28th December 2012, 01:07 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,216 Re: Any WeightLoss and fitness niche writers
I'm afraid I don't quite understand what you are asking.
What is your product?
What do you mean when you say it is "working very well online"?
What exactly are you trying to sell, and...
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Forum: Copywriting
28th December 2012, 12:54 PM
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Replies: 15
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
26th December 2012, 08:30 AM
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Replies: 24
Views: 1,722 Re: 10,000/Month starting from 2013?
Please don't take this the wrong way. but your a little bit delusional in thinking people that work their ass off are just going to take you by the hand and spoon feed you success.
I often wonder...
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Forum: Copywriting
10th December 2012, 05:32 AM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,513 Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???
Squeeze Page Code - Here's Your Push-Button Easy Money Secret! (http://www.warriorforum.com/main-internet-marketing-discussion-forum/332422-heres-your-push-button-easy-money-secret.html)
Download...
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Forum: Copywriting
7th December 2012, 04:33 AM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,513 Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???
hi wes. your site is good. you dont need a sales page. all you have to do since you have your squeeze page now is to build your list as fast as you could. :)
good luck wes!
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Forum: Copywriting
2nd December 2012, 09:35 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 604 Re: My First Copywrite! Need Help
Change title to:
Burn that "grandma bathing suit" and slip into a sexy binkini. Ann reveals her story inside...
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Use your features and weave them into a story...
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Forum: Copywriting
2nd December 2012, 12:31 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 604 Re: My First Copywrite! Need Help
Wes, to be blunt, people have heard this all before. Oh, blah blah, full access, burn fat, track progress. I don't care how much it is because I'm not buying it whether it's $1 or $1,000.
You're...
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Forum: Website Design
28th November 2012, 12:03 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 669 Re: Review my site WF Friends
Hi there! I think your site's layout is okay. . however by the way I noticed there are quite many white spaces especially on the bottom part.
also, 24Hr may consider changing to 24 Hour :)
and...
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Forum: Website Design
27th November 2012, 10:34 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 669 Re: Review my site WF Friends
You have a very beautiful website Wesley. Nice color scheme and combination.
Some suggestions...
1. Add more social media buttons (twitter & pinterest) for more exposure.
2. Make the teaser...
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Forum: Copywriting
27th November 2012, 03:00 PM
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Replies: 21
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Forum: Copywriting
27th November 2012, 08:22 AM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,513 Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???
Couple quick thoughts about your site.
1. What's up with you holding the basketball? My first thought was it may be the idea behind your exercise program.
2. I didn't get any clear USP. ...
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Forum: Copywriting
26th November 2012, 08:02 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,513 |
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Forum: Copywriting
26th November 2012, 04:34 PM
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Forum: Copywriting
26th November 2012, 12:02 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,513 Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???
Hey Wesley,
First, check out Kyle Leon, I work with him and he gets freakin' amazing results with this niche.
Second, what kind of mentor are you looking for? Cause if you can help me get...
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Forum: Copywriting
26th November 2012, 08:36 AM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,513 Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???
I would first get a copywriter. Tell him your best techniques or the benefits you can provide to your customer. I'm sure he can push a few psychological buttons and make it convert for you better.
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd November 2012, 09:12 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,513 Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???
Hey 7day. To follow-up, here's my take on your video-focused theme page.
There are a couple big issues that are going to keep it from performing well.
First, your messaging is off. Making...
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd November 2012, 08:54 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,513 Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???
The overall layout works fine. Easy visual appeal and all, but instead of seeing a "holy cow, gotta learn more about this" hook or title of any sort, my eye is immediately drawn to $47 for Lifetime...
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd November 2012, 08:39 PM
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Replies: 21
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd November 2012, 08:22 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,513 Re: Do I need a sales page? Mentor???
No. It's a clean page but guess what? I have no idea what you're selling. Lifetime access maybe gives me a clue but people don't buy on clues. You need to explain exactly what you've got.
Maybe...
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd November 2012, 08:01 PM
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Replies: 21
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd November 2012, 07:48 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,513  Do I need a sales page? Mentor???
Hi there,
Here is my landing page for my fitness service. www.wesleyvirgin.com (http://www.wesleyvirgin.com)
Is this enough to convert someone to buy?
What do you think of my home workout...
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Forum: Affiliate Program Database
30th October 2010, 04:16 AM
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Replies: 0
Views: 78,017 |