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Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings 29th May 2013, 09:03 PM
Replies: 38
Views: 10,584
Posted By TimCastleman
Re: Frank Kern's Consulting Webinar

I have to laugh at this thread.

#1. There was a webinar. It was good. If you didn't attend live, you missed out.

#2. Zero replays, I'm sure he'll do it live again.

#3. He was selling a 6...
Forum: Social Media 12th December 2012, 05:58 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 565
Posted By RevClicksMedia
Re: First FB ads are going well. But need some extra advice!!

Your CTR to your Ads dropping after time is a broad example of " Banner Blindness " which is an aspect of affiliate marketing that all advertisers run into - however, to offset this process from...
Forum: Social Media 12th December 2012, 01:32 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 565
Posted By DonDraper
Re: First FB ads are going well. But need some extra advice!!

yea if you keep lowering your cpc fb will lower what they charge you also.

also, I'd upload more copies of the same ads with different images. then when your ctr starts to slip, pause those ads...
Forum: Social Media 29th November 2012, 02:26 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 2,229
Posted By crissie
Facebook success in 24 hours - dammit, its so easy!

I find it somewhat sad when I read people complaining they are getting no new fans, no interactions, no shares. It's so damn easy that I just don't get it. Actually, I do! They're doing it wrong,...
Forum: Ad Networks (CPM/CPL, Display) 27th October 2012, 07:03 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 9,908
Posted By Cash37
Re: SiteScout - Media Buying: Good Starting Place?

Sitescout is way too much for a newbie to start at.

I suggest you start at BuySellAds and BlogAds. Learn to study the sites BEFORE you buy them. Take 2-3 days and just study what kinds of ads...
Forum: Copywriting 27th October 2012, 04:52 PM
Replies: 45
Views: 2,080
Posted By Mkcoy
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

IMHO TMI on the homepage.

Give people the meat and they'll come in and get the potatoes their self.
Forum: Social Media 20th October 2012, 06:42 PM
Replies: 209
Views: 47,147
Posted By Localleadsguy
How I got 10,000 new likes to my Facebook page in 7 days

Don't worry there is nothing for sale here, I'm just going to show you exactly how I got 10,000 new likes to my Facebook page in 7 days. (I actually have 17,000 fans now, but 10,000 in 7 days just...
Forum: Copywriting 14th October 2012, 01:13 PM
Replies: 45
Views: 2,080
Posted By dylanvarian
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

1. It's too dark. As a web designer I know from a lot of trial and error that people act better to bright colours on websites - ESPECIALLY SALES PAGES. This is also something for blogs to keep an eye...
Forum: Copywriting 10th October 2012, 10:29 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 768
Posted By George Lee
Re: ANY help whatsoever will be greatly appreciated! Need some extra tips for improving page convers

Ok, here is my humble 2 cents.
1. Who is the audience? The headline should define and speak to them. Is it all internet marketers, or a specific category of marketer?

2. What is their problem?...
Forum: Copywriting 10th October 2012, 08:02 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 768
Posted By Steve Faber
Re: ANY help whatsoever will be greatly appreciated! Need some extra tips for improving page convers

Here is the Internet Marketing Info the "Gurus" Keep Under Wraps, Dangling Forever Just Out Reach, and I'm Giving it to You For Free......

CONGRATULATIONS! Your Online Success is Determined by...
Forum: Copywriting 9th October 2012, 05:48 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 768
Posted By Shaolinsteve
Re: ANY help whatsoever will be greatly appreciated! Need some extra tips for improving page convers

I too first read the title and thought I don't get it...

The first word of the title is tired and the video makes me feel tired because I don't really know what's going on. Ideally rather than...
Forum: Copywriting 9th October 2012, 09:08 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 768
Posted By NickN
Re: ANY help whatsoever will be greatly appreciated! Need some extra tips for improving page convers

Hi Vitaliy,

-Your headline is super weak and vague. When I read it, I thought, "Half of what information?"

-Your copy contains no benefits.

-It's not a good idea to say you've only been in...
Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings 29th September 2012, 09:00 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,070
Posted By Sarevok
Re: NEED some serious feedback on this site.

Site is actually pretty sweet. I thought it was a tad slow (according to my calculations Page load time: 6.18s)

There's something missing.

I think it's an enticing headline, and your...
Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings 29th September 2012, 02:09 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,070
Posted By nmoppa01
Re: NEED some serious feedback on this site.

The header graphic needs to be higher quality. You tell people you are only a few months active but that you reached your self-set goals. So you must tell them what exactly you achieved. What kind of...
Forum: Copywriting 27th September 2012, 07:28 PM
Replies: 45
Views: 2,080
Posted By wrcato2
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

@Vitality,
First off, Kudo's to you for pulling the trigger on your sales funnel. You have just screamed past about 65% of new marketers.
Keep it up! :)

Next... and I am going to be honest with...
Forum: Copywriting 8th September 2012, 09:57 PM
Replies: 45
Views: 2,080
Posted By Mark 99
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

Keep trying mate, good to see you're making a change. I think enough has been said already... it was bad. I was lost after the first paragraph, change the graphics and background (made my eyes...
Forum: Copywriting 5th September 2012, 12:53 PM
Replies: 45
Views: 2,080
Posted By Don Grace
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

Each line you write has one purpose, to get them to read the next.

You literally lost me after line 1... I closed the page.

"Are you thinking what I'm thinking?" My answer was "Nope"
Forum: Copywriting 5th September 2012, 12:38 PM
Replies: 45
Views: 2,080
Posted By TheWrightWords
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

"I personally HATE how those internet giants prey on people like hungry sharks who have maybe lost their jobs or fallen into debt, and are looking to earn some extra cash on the internet in some...
Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings 4th September 2012, 05:31 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,070
Posted By Duncan
Re: NEED some serious feedback on this site.

The sales page is a rough draft at best, but I have to say it is a great start to sales copy. I am no expert at writing copy, but here is my hones evaluation.

*I do know that successful sales...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 31st August 2012, 08:55 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 646
Posted By Ali Rangwala
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

Just want to step in again and say what you're doing here is awesome, it's gonna help in a big way. You're taking a ton of brutal criticism in the name of good business, a lot of people online won't...
Forum: Copywriting 30th August 2012, 11:41 PM
Replies: 45
Views: 2,080
Posted By 1robert
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

The headline and deck copy do nothing to get my attention. Its not your fault, writing a sales letter is hard work.

The first thing I would do is break up your sentences to make your copy more...
Forum: Copywriting 30th August 2012, 08:11 PM
Replies: 45
Views: 2,080
Posted By cynthiamason
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

I forgot to say this:

Think of copywriting almost like dating. If you want to get the girl to talk to you, then your going to have to convince her. The same concept goes for sales letters. You...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th August 2012, 06:07 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 646
Posted By everydayreviews
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

I haven't read the responses yet because I just wanted to tell you straight up. On the sales page: less words, more pics. Sales vid would be great but just words lost my attention quick.
It might be...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th August 2012, 06:01 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 646
Posted By travlinguy
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

You didn't f**ed up. It's a decent effort. It sucks to have strangers come and insult your baby. But these are not insults. It's constructive criticism. Now that you've got some feedback, make...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th August 2012, 05:40 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 646
Posted By JohnMcCabe
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

Not only is the section above unnecessary blather, it could be actively harmful because it introduces negative possibilities the reader may not have been thinking until you brought it up.

"fancy...
Forum: Copywriting 30th August 2012, 05:31 PM
Replies: 45
Views: 2,080
Posted By TheSalesBooster
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

If I was a real customer, You would of lost me by the third paragraph

and I was pretty much forcing myself to read it!

You got a lot of good advice here already, but let me see if I can help...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th August 2012, 05:18 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 646
Posted By travlinguy
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

Your headline is silly. People don't want riddles they want to know why they're on the site immediately or they'll click away. You need a real headline if you want to make sales. It needs to let the...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th August 2012, 05:17 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 646
Posted By Fredbou
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

Perhaps change the "bare in mind" to "bear in mind" .
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th August 2012, 05:09 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 646
Posted By UMS
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

The biggest problem is with your home page. As already mentioned, the stuff under "Extra Notes" give the impression that the whole membership site is not finished and in a state of flux. That's...
Forum: Copywriting 30th August 2012, 03:30 PM
Replies: 45
Views: 2,080
Posted By Steve The Copywriter
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

Vit,

It’s always brave to post copy for a critique.

And I guess you’re not feeling ecstatic seeing your work getting hammered.

But it’s saved you a stack of money.

Because not only do you...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th August 2012, 03:01 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 646
Posted By Ali Rangwala
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

Major problem: the headline! Now that's a big topic in and of itself, don't be afraid to spend a few hours learning about headline writing, and even spending more time writing your headline than you...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th August 2012, 02:45 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 646
Posted By John J M
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

For the sales page, I would say way too much content above the fold. You really should have a video or a picture or something to make people want to continue.
Forum: Copywriting 30th August 2012, 02:37 PM
Replies: 45
Views: 2,080
Posted By JohnRussell
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

Sorry man but it sucks.

It needs a complete rewrite unfortunately and you have to decide whether you want to spend the time learning to write good copy or spend the money on a good copywriter.
...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th August 2012, 02:37 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 646
Posted By Robert M Gouge
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

I agree with this. You have a LOT of text on your page.

When I was presented with the wall of text, upon loading your site, nothing grabbed my attention and I wanted to click away.

Also, get...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th August 2012, 02:33 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 646
Posted By blend
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

I would insert a sales video? Always helps :)
Forum: Copywriting 30th August 2012, 02:24 PM
Replies: 45
Views: 2,080
Posted By Steve The Copywriter
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

Hi Vit,

I'm hoping you - with all the right intentions wrote this - and didn't pay anyone.

On the plus side you tried.

But…

Sorry - it is bad.
Forum: Copywriting 30th August 2012, 02:08 PM
Replies: 45
Views: 2,080
Posted By angiecolee
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

I scanned it. Boring, doesn't say anything different from any other IM piece I've read.

I think you're trying too hard with sections like this: Very Important! Before you read any further, be...
Forum: Copywriting 30th August 2012, 02:05 PM
Replies: 45
Views: 2,080
Posted By Andrew Gould
Re: I really NEED some serious feedback on this site.

It's terrible.

The headline and everything above the fold (and for the next page or so) tells me nothing about what you're selling, who it's aimed at, what problem it solves, etc.

The...
Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings 24th August 2012, 05:38 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 677
Posted By oniram
Re: Could someone give me some feedback on my site.

I am not sure you will get very many paid members @ 47/mo just to view IM products. I don't see a "what's in it for me" (WIFM) if I become a member. How can I earn money by becoming a member? What's...
Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings 24th August 2012, 04:47 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 677
Posted By DavePalermo
Re: Could someone give me some feedback on my site.

I have to give you props for honesty.
I like that.
But if you want the brutally honest truth, and please do not be offended by this I am only trying to help you, your website in general sucks.
Let...
Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings 24th August 2012, 12:33 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 677
Posted By superplatinum
Re: Could someone give me some feedback on my site.

Hey! I think your sales copy could use a bit of work. If you can say all those things in fewer words, you might have a better shot. ALSO, according to the text, customers will pay $47 per month, but...
Forum: Offline Marketing 11th August 2012, 11:51 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,217
Posted By Carl Fridsjö
[Success Story] Newbie Revisits 1 Year Later - Lessons Learned A long The Way

Hello Warriors,

It's almost exactly 1 year since I found and registered at the Warrior forum. I was quite the newbie and hadn't earned a single dollar online. To this date I still haven't "worked"...
Forum: Ad Networks (CPM/CPL, Display) 2nd February 2012, 04:58 PM
Replies: 44
Views: 6,122
Posted By ChadH
Re: IMGrind,Six Months from Today etc

Ya they're crap and evil except that something I learned when I joined PPC Coach (which was not shared on wkdfireee or warriorforum or whatever), lead directly to my first 6 figures in my first 3...
Forum: Ad Networks (CPM/CPL, Display) 23rd February 2011, 05:29 PM
Replies: 37
Views: 8,790
Posted By Filter
Re: How to track keyword on Leadimpact using Prosper202?

Hi Walker

Two different ways to do it with Lead Impact. You can either "enable keyword passthrough" on each campaign (on the Lead Impact dashboard), or add the token %KEYWORD% to your Prosper202...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 16th July 2010, 08:28 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 8,320
Posted By Steve Robertson
Re: Help Screenflow Video File Size Too Big

ScreenFlow records your entire screen all the time. If you don't really need to see the entire screen, you can remove the unwanted screen real estate in editing. Just click on the button in the lower...
Forum: Copywriting 19th August 2009, 10:00 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 44,159
Posted By Chris Ramsey
Use This Checklist Before Asking For A Critique

If you've been on the copywriting forum for a while, you've seen a LOT
of critique requests. I like that business owners are looking to improve
their copy, but most of the time we end up giving...
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