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Forum: Copywriting 14th November 2009, 10:44 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 567
Posted By Loren Woirhaye
Re: Please Check out my Sales Page

It looks ok. I think your price-justification at the end is kind
of ham-handed though. It looks like an interesting product
that does some cool stuff.

You should emphasize the "value" price -...
Forum: Copywriting 14th November 2009, 09:14 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 567
Posted By euhlir
Re: Please Check out my Sales Page

First thing I notice is there is an error in your header. "system" is not spelled right. That will make any person visiting your sales page immediately leave, or be on guard. You can't make...
Forum: Copywriting 14th November 2009, 07:58 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 567
Posted By superaffiliate007
Re: Please Check out my Sales Page

You should add some reivews or beta testers there to improve the conversion of your site. Also add some more valuable bonuses there.
Forum: Copywriting 13th November 2009, 11:34 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 567
Posted By Rick Johansson
Re: Please Check out my Sales Page

Headline could be stronger...put quotes around it and put a specific in there (number, percentage, "7 ways" etc.)

Give the software to some Warriors to test out and get some decent testimonials...
Forum: Copywriting 13th November 2009, 08:11 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 567
Posted By travlinguy
Re: Please Check out my Sales Page

I think your headline and sub header are good, though I'd change Dynamically to Dramatically. People don't always know when something is dynamic but there are very few people out there that don't...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 7th April 2009, 11:15 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 971
Posted By glasshalffull
Re: who refuses to use twitter?

the concept you want to understand, if you are wanting to use it for marketing purposes, is that you want people to pay attention to what you have to say (your tweets)

imagine if you're in a...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 13th March 2009, 02:32 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 868
Posted By Kunle Olomofe
IM Is Too Hard, Sometimes It's Easier To Just Give Up!

...But Don't!

The Key To Your Success In IM is in one word...

...Persistence.

IM can be a hard road to travel. I should know, I've been at this since 1998 and it has not always been a smooth...
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