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Forum: Copywriting 28th January 2011, 09:41 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 551
Posted By travlinguy
Re: Need a Quick Sales Letter Critique

The headline is a clunker and does little or nothing to grab attention. Same goes for the text alongside your pic. It's useless. Do you really want to guarantee that someone will be in "Utter Shock...
Forum: Copywriting 27th January 2011, 05:46 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 551
Posted By Pusateri
Re: Need a Quick Sales Letter Critique

A few suggestions:

Here's a Simple Method to Beat Your Speeding Ticket to Avoid Paying a Single Dime in Fines or Surcharges...

I haven't studied this market. Is 'surcharge' a hot button or...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd February 2010, 03:41 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 784
Posted By travlinguy
Re: Sales Have Dipped - Please Critique My Sales Letter

Okay, that's kinda what I thought. The special report is hurting you regardless of what's in it. There are some sales letters (very few in my opinion) where you can have an opt-in offer combined with...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd February 2010, 12:49 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 784
Posted By Loren Woirhaye
Re: Sales Have Dipped - Please Critique My Sales Letter

I charge for full critiques, but I think you're eliciting fear
in your headline by using the words "traffic courts" and
implying that a court appearance will be necessary, which
is discouraging...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 19th January 2010, 12:08 PM
Replies: 1,534
Views: 165,861
Posted By Jagged
Re: Offline Marketers: What services are you offering for monthly fees?

Just a thought...

As these threads grow larger they have a tendency to get deleted from the forum...most times without notice, as did the infamous "cash cow" & the "single dad" threads....tons of...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 18th January 2010, 07:16 PM
Replies: 1,534
Views: 165,861
Posted By AP
Re: Offline Marketers: What services are you offering for monthly fees?

How to Position Yourself
-CREDIBILITY-



From Wikipedia:

Credibility refers to the objective and subjective...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 17th January 2010, 07:15 PM
Replies: 1,534
Views: 165,861
Posted By AP
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 17th January 2010, 01:48 PM
Replies: 1,534
Views: 165,861
Posted By Dexx
Re: Offline Marketers: What services are you offering for monthly fees?

I'm sure AP has his own thoughts, but here's mine:
(responses in green)
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 16th July 2009, 11:30 PM
Replies: 436
Views: 38,651
Posted By JaySabree
Re: Need $1000 bucks this week?

Hey guys,

Hope all is well and you guys and starting to make some money.

Here's a great video that I watched awhile ago and thought I would

share it with you... This is a good one :)

How...
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