Brand New to Internet Marketing/Adsense -- Review my site(s)

I am pretty new to the whole ad-sense/internet marketing/affiliate marketing "scene" and honestly I don't know which area(s) to focus on to build a TRUE/SOLID site (or a network of site(s)) which will deliver CONSISTENT results overtime. So, in order to get on the "path", I figured I will listen/read/watch videos/articles on internet marketing etc and then focus on a very *few* things and take action. These are the things that I learned (or rather got a rough idea) from my research and decided to focus into actionable results.

* Original Content (I read that copying content/articles from the internet gives you bad google juice, so I did my own research and wrote original articles)
* At least 5 pages/articles on each page/topic
* Every topic/article on wordpress (setup on different sub-domains)
* Google Adsense ADS blending into the page/placement

I have one main domain and I am planning on setting up multiple 'subdomains' as completely seperate Mini-Sites with various niche topics with at least 4-5 seperate pages. I am also planning on running google ad-sense primarily and possibly multiple affiliate links / products etc. The articles will be original/non-spam and actually helpful.

*** URLS removed by request, pm me if you are interested.

I would like you guys to critique those two sub-domains/site(s) first. Remember: I am a complete NEWBIE with ZERO experience, I just got a few tips from reading/watching videos and decided to put it into action, I am not looking for hand-outs, but real, actionable advice from people who *actually* get consistent results (ie: a decent paycheck) would be--not only highly appreciated, but put into real practice (I will also report back for more)

My goal is to build my own mini-empire and I KNOW that the people who get the best results will always keep their techniques a secret, if that was not the case, EVERYONE would make money -- which is impossible. (IE: 80/20 principle), I actually feel that in this space, its more like a 95/5 split, meaning 95% of the people either fail or get mediocre results and 5% make BANK. I am interested in being in the 5% and I want to make sure that I understand the FUNDAMENTALS of making this work before doing anything fancy. I am also interested in using white-hat methods since I've heard doing otherwise will eventually get me busted.


Thank you!