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Forum: Copywriting 8th November 2010, 01:51 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,161
Posted By barakos9
Re: Looking for talented copywriter in her pregnancy

Hi Rick,

I am going to implement your suggestion (free bonus)

i will be happy if you can review my audio testimony and advice whether i should keep it ? Also i was thinking about video...
Forum: Copywriting 7th November 2010, 01:44 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,161
Posted By barakos9
Re: Looking for talented copywriter in her pregnancy

Thanks Rick, I really appreciate your practical comments...

Thank you all guys, I am thankful for your help and time & efforts while reviewing my copy.

Best Regards,

Barak
Forum: Copywriting 4th November 2010, 11:37 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,161
Posted By barakos9
Re: Looking for talented copywriter in her pregnancy

ok guys , i get the point.

Actually i am now open minded for other people (not only pregnant women’s)

now! before i decide with which writer i should move on, i have question to ask..
do you...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd November 2010, 11:48 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,161
Posted By barakos9
Re: Looking for talented copywriter in her pregnancy

Thank you all for your comments.

But still, i think pregnant women will be the best choice. She’s the only one knows the
Exact filling of a woman in her pregnancy and how to convince her she...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd November 2010, 06:03 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,161
Posted By barakos9
Re: Looking for talented copywriter in her pregnancy

I've decided not to make any of the changed suggested since my
new writer will create a totally new copy so why even bothering..

i didn't say the writer must be pregnant but it's a serious...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd November 2010, 03:54 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,161
Posted By barakos9
Looking for talented copywriter in her pregnancy

Hello Ladies,

I am Looking for talented copywriter in her pregnancy to help me
out with my new sales page : My Maternity Photography | Do-It-Yourself Maternity Photos...
Forum: Copywriting 28th October 2010, 12:31 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 766
Posted By barakos9
Re: Who will be the best writer for my copy?

Thank you for the help,
but there are to many names and direction to go with..

if someone can show me the best writers for my sales copy or even top 10 i will be very thankful.
Forum: Copywriting 28th October 2010, 12:20 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 766
Posted By barakos9
Re: Who will be the best writer for my copy?

Yes! that is a great idea..now we just need to find one..

Any suggestion?
Forum: Copywriting 26th October 2010, 08:44 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,559
Posted By barakos9
Re: Sales Letter vs. Sales Video - Who will Conquor?

Actually it really depends on the product and what the conversion is all about?

if you are trying to sell free course or anything like that Video will do the job for you.
but if you are trying to...
Forum: Copywriting 26th October 2010, 08:35 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 766
Posted By barakos9
Who will be the best writer for my copy?

Hi,

I've a new sales copy live: My Maternity Photography | Do-It-Yourself Maternity Photos (http://www.mymaternityphotography.com/)
and i must admit i am not so happy with my copy...

Hence I...
Forum: Copywriting 26th October 2010, 08:27 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,253
Posted By barakos9
Re: Your help and review will be highly appreciated.

Hi,

Thanks again.

As i already mentioned, there is not doubt about the potential of this market.
I just want to hear some "real" comments regarding the copy itself.

Also I don't mind...
Forum: Copywriting 25th October 2010, 06:38 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,253
Posted By barakos9
Re: Your help and review will be highly appreciated.

Thank you all for your comments and suggestions.

i must disagree with : "İ think there are several problems not limited to are people willing to pay to learn to shoot baby photographs in the...
Forum: Copywriting 24th October 2010, 01:30 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,253
Posted By barakos9
Your help and review will be highly appreciated.

Hello people,

I am the owner of : My Maternity Photography | Do-It-Yourself Maternity Photos (http://www.mymaternityphotography.com/),

My maternity photography is a “maternity photography”...
Forum: Copywriting 12th November 2009, 12:12 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,220
Posted By barakos9
Re: am looking for a copywriter that will write me an amazing copy

Hi,

if you would pm you'll find out what my budget is,
my budget is around $500 and the deadline is really flexable (up to 2 months from now)
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2009, 09:31 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 2,335
Posted By barakos9
Re: Feedback please: weight loss niche, new sales letter

Hello,

I've some comments about the visual page , the copy seems to be just fine.
but I see no relevancy between the concept (loss weight) and the design / look of your landing page.

if you...
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2009, 09:18 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,220
Posted By barakos9
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2009, 09:17 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,220
Posted By barakos9
Re: am looking for a copywriter that will write me an amazing copy

I would like to hear some more about that..
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2009, 04:00 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,220
Posted By barakos9
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2009, 01:51 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,220
Posted By barakos9
Re: am looking for a copywriter that will write me an amazing copy

Thanks guys!
Where are those entire great copywriters that offer me some nice copy deals?
Forum: Copywriting 10th November 2009, 01:50 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,220
Posted By barakos9
Re: am looking for a copywriter that will write me an amazing copy

First of all thank you very much!
second , the visitors will be highly targeted using ADWORDS,
I know it's hard to tell and depends on lot's of parameters...

But still can someone help us out...
Forum: Copywriting 10th November 2009, 11:45 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,220
Posted By barakos9
Re: am looking for a copywriter that will write me an amazing copy

BTW,
Any one have an good name for such an ebook?
what do you think about those :

1. Digital Photography - Secrets and Tips

2. Upgrade your Photography results

3. Digital...
Forum: Copywriting 10th November 2009, 08:22 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,220
Posted By barakos9
am looking for a copywriter that will write me an amazing copy

Hello Guys,

I am launching a new digital product in the “Digital Photography” industry.
I am looking for a copywriter that will write me an amazing copy that converts like hell!

I...
Forum: Internet Marketing Product Reviews & Ratings 21st October 2009, 09:05 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 740
Posted By barakos9
Re: Social Money Magnet - Any Reviews?

i did not like it..not so pro
Forum: Copywriting 25th August 2009, 03:43 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 797
Posted By barakos9
Re: I am back !

Always nice being here...
Forum: Copywriting 25th August 2009, 11:06 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 797
Posted By barakos9
Re: I am back !

Thank you so much , these are helpful tips
Forum: Copywriting 25th August 2009, 11:05 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 797
Posted By barakos9
Re: I am back !

ok..I didn't expect to much from you..
you are always so negative , try to smile once i a while
Forum: Copywriting 25th August 2009, 11:03 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 797
Posted By barakos9
Re: I am back !

ok , that sounds like a good tip,
I will handle it
Forum: Copywriting 25th August 2009, 08:33 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 797
Posted By barakos9
I am back !

Hello Guys, few months ago I'd a site which got a really high bounce rate I'd to do something ,
I asked you guys and you said the copy is bad.. too negative actually , and you also mentioned the...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd August 2009, 06:29 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 705
Posted By barakos9
Re: Need your help

Hi Guys!

Thank you very much for your wonderful tips and suggestions,
I'll try to use them all (:
any other suggestions are welcome

what do you think about that one :

Enter any search...
Forum: Copywriting 21st August 2009, 08:56 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 705
Posted By barakos9
Re: Need your help

you are %100 right and we are going to change the whole interface, anyway I need help with this one sentence to describe the site purpose. search anything you want in one place.
I will appreciate...
Forum: Copywriting 21st August 2009, 08:53 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 705
Posted By barakos9
Re: Need your help

for one sentence?
Forum: Copywriting 21st August 2009, 01:34 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 705
Posted By barakos9
Need your help

Hi Guys,

I need your help with my website,

Joongel, Internet The Easy Way (http://www.joongel.com/index.php)

It's actually a search center where you can search whatever you need in one...
Forum: Copywriting 9th July 2009, 01:54 PM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,379
Posted By barakos9
Re: Sales page critique

Thank you Dot,
I do love to help people but you need to understand that my English
Is really bad. and starting to guide others sound like a joke to me.
But you have a point , giving is really...
Forum: Copywriting 9th July 2009, 07:18 AM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,379
Posted By barakos9
Re: Sales page critique

The lesson I have learned is that you need to focus on your end users (customer)
when creating a new sales page and picking the writer accordingly.
For example, if you are selling forex robot,...
Forum: Copywriting 8th July 2009, 11:11 PM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,379
Posted By barakos9
Re: Sales page critique

Hello,

Thank you very much for your honest opinion,

I think that next time I'm starting a new sales page the writer
I'll pick will be the most close thing to the customer I'm referring my...
Forum: Copywriting 8th July 2009, 03:25 PM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,379
Posted By barakos9
Re: Sales page critique

Truth is Bill if that's call not to appreciate what you've done...I really don't know how to thank you...
Forum: Copywriting 8th July 2009, 08:34 AM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,379
Posted By barakos9
Re: Sales page critique

I can't agree and I remind you all that I did hire people from this forum as for writing by my self ...no way ! I'm not America and my English sucks.
I do appreciate your work and I do think you...
Forum: Copywriting 8th July 2009, 12:39 AM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,379
Posted By barakos9
Re: Sales page critique

People you can all relax,
I cannot give you anything since my English is good as a nature's boy.
And I don't do all this shit for free,
I already hired a copywriter from Warrior for my page and as...
Forum: Copywriting 7th July 2009, 08:56 AM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,379
Posted By barakos9
Re: Sales page critique

So far I was still collecting information and suggestion,
now I am on the move on 3 actions:
1-I hired a marketing consulting service and I am going to implement their suggestion.
2- I am going to...
Forum: Copywriting 6th July 2009, 09:03 AM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,379
Posted By barakos9
Re: Sales page critique

Guys,
I asked you about the copy but not about the theme and design,
what do you think about the colors? do you think we should use other colors?
what about red/white or anything else?
Forum: Copywriting 5th July 2009, 09:29 AM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,379
Posted By barakos9
Re: Sales page critique

I am sorry if you or anyone were offended, I thank you all for your great suggestions and helpful tips
Forum: Copywriting 3rd July 2009, 06:36 AM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,379
Posted By barakos9
Re: Sales page critique

Hello Wonderful Bill!

This is the first time someone is helping (for free) in a way he could defiantly charge some serious money.
I've no words to thank you for what you've done here.
I think...
Forum: Copywriting 26th June 2009, 12:27 AM
Replies: 65
Views: 3,101
Posted By barakos9
Re: Free Headline Rewriting

Thank you!
But I'm not sure if that fits with the whole page Welcome to The Bible of the Bride | Free Yourself from Wedding Jitters (http://www.thebibleofthebride.com)
Let me know what you think.
Forum: Copywriting 24th June 2009, 06:33 AM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,379
Posted By barakos9
Re: Sales page critique

Huge thanks to you all!
I will definitely use your suggestion and come up with a batter sales page.
The product itself is really good, so as the free bonus ( I will write about that too)
I will...
Forum: Copywriting 21st June 2009, 11:16 PM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,379
Posted By barakos9
Forum: Copywriting 21st June 2009, 04:48 AM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,379
Posted By barakos9
Re: Sales page critique

Thank you guys!
I think I have some work to do...
Can I get some extra comments?
Forum: Copywriting 20th June 2009, 11:30 PM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,379
Posted By barakos9
Re: Sales page critique

Hi,

Thanks for your comment,

First,

" The purple color scheme looks like something from the 80's"

that's weird because I invested a lot in professional designer..
Forum: Copywriting 20th June 2009, 11:18 PM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,379
Posted By barakos9
Re: Sales page critique

No that's not the problem either, I'm promoting via PPC and the ksywords are highly relevant.
Forum: Copywriting 20th June 2009, 11:17 PM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,379
Posted By barakos9
Re: Sales page critique

not actually the the conversation rate is about 1:300...
Forum: Copywriting 20th June 2009, 11:16 PM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,379
Posted By barakos9
Re: Sales page critique

mostly PPC and the keywords are highly relevant so I think the problem isn't In the way people are getting into my site...
Forum: Copywriting 20th June 2009, 03:34 PM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,379
Posted By barakos9
Re: Sales page critique

Thank you guys I really appreciate your comments,
But still I can't find the reason of %90+ bounce rate...
really it's quite weird, 9 of 10 people are staying less then 5 sec and jump out..
can...
Forum: Copywriting 19th June 2009, 03:33 AM
Replies: 65
Views: 3,101
Posted By barakos9
Re: Free Headline Rewriting

Don't Let Disaster Hijack Your Wedding Day
My wedding planner left me twisting in the wind! Don't let it happen to you..

P.S :
I'm getting %95 bounce rate...I guess the header and the sub header...
Forum: Copywriting 19th June 2009, 03:31 AM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,379
Posted By barakos9
Re: Sales page critique

guys I really need your help , please give me some comments
Forum: Copywriting 19th June 2009, 02:01 AM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,379
Posted By barakos9
Sales page critique

Hi Guys,

Please help me out with my new sales page I have launched few days ago,
this page refers to future brides and guide them through their wedding planning process.
Welcome to The Bible...
Forum: Copywriting 18th May 2009, 01:33 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,134
Posted By barakos9
Re: Copywriter is needed - Sales page

No thanks I've found someone.
Forum: Copywriting 18th May 2009, 01:19 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,134
Posted By barakos9
Re: Copywriter is needed - Sales page

People, I found a writer, and a good one I am sure the copy will sell like hell!
I will not tell you how much it cost , but Let me know if someone wants to have a look at the copy.
dorothydot -...
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