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Forum: Copywriting 7th August 2015, 02:03 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 4,898
Posted By Testos
Re: I'm a good copywriter, but ... I have no portfolio.

Yeah, I'll go elsewhere. I contacted 30 folks off clickbank and got no responses, even for pro bono offers. Then I realized that the pages are old, the copyright date at the bottom were 2009, 2012,...
Forum: Copywriting 5th August 2015, 07:17 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 4,898
Posted By Testos
Re: I'm a good copywriter, but ... I have no portfolio.

I love the idea of going to clickbank and contacting the sellers to offer to edit their sales copy.

But when I go to clickbank and see something that I could work on, there's no way to contact...
Forum: Copywriting 19th July 2015, 03:32 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,219
Posted By Testos
Re: Critique my ebook copy

Hi again, everyone...

I overhauled my ebook copy, made it much longer, and gave it more structure to help it flow better. I spent about two weeks on this, most of it through research, studying...
Forum: Copywriting 28th June 2015, 01:41 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,219
Posted By Testos
Re: Critique my ebook copy

I updated my book copy.

This is my first serious attempt at creating copy. I don't expect it to be a masterpiece, and I fully expect to make further revisions. But for now, I think it's a good...
Forum: Copywriting 28th June 2015, 09:14 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,219
Posted By Testos
Re: Critique my ebook copy

My intention is to get into the copywriting field in the long term, and this is good practice. That's why I don't plan to hire someone for this. I may not have any experience with copywriting, but...
Forum: Copywriting 27th June 2015, 06:07 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,219
Posted By Testos
Re: Critique my ebook copy

gjabiz: Thanks for that list of questions. I already know who I'm marketing this to (men over 30, most likely married, have 9-5 jobs, and generally bored, depressed, and disillusioned about life).
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Forum: Copywriting 26th June 2015, 04:51 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,615
Posted By Testos
Re: Squeeze Page - Critique Please

In case you haven't noticed, there is a sticky in this subforum that gives a great checklist to go through before asking to be critiqued.
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Forum: Copywriting 25th June 2015, 09:29 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,219
Posted By Testos
Re: Critique my ebook copy

Haha thanks angiecolee! I found a picture like that.

I picked one where the woman is looking at you (the blog reader) instead of the man with her. I think it packs a lot more power that way.
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Forum: Copywriting 25th June 2015, 09:37 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,219
Posted By Testos
Re: Critique my ebook copy

gjabiz - Obviously I am very new to the copywriting world, and I did not realize that requesting critiques is akin to asking veteran copywriters to do the work for free. My apologies, and thank you...
Forum: Copywriting 24th June 2015, 10:13 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,348
Posted By Testos
Forum: Copywriting 24th June 2015, 09:50 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,219
Posted By Testos
Re: Critique my ebook copy

Chris,

Thank you for the feedback - this is fantastic and loaded with useful advice. You've already gotten the wheels in my head turning. A few points:

1. English is my native language. I'm...
Forum: Copywriting 24th June 2015, 08:35 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,219
Posted By Testos
Critique my ebook copy

I just wrote a book on testosterone replacement therapy, and I wrote a sales copy to get people to buy it on Amazon.

Here is the copy: Book - Testosterone Replacement Therapy...
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