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Forum: Copywriting 5th January 2017, 12:01 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 658
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: What is a "true" benefit?

Saving money is a great benefit.

The feature is a low price, the benefit is saving money.
Forum: Copywriting 29th December 2016, 07:28 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 185
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: How to Improve Conversion Rates of Your Landing Page?

Both. If the copy is good, they won't be scared away. The more copy, the better usually. At least to a point.

Content and testimonials are both great things to have.
Forum: Copywriting 8th December 2016, 10:58 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 360
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: does my site make you want to do business with me?

Honestly, I bet you're giving out a lot of refunds. DOUBLE the exposure in 24 hours?

As a filmmaker, exposure should NOT be your concern. That's for the artists, their management teams, and...
Forum: Copywriting 21st September 2016, 03:05 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 225
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: How important is it to be accessible by phone to big clients?

Important, but do realize that these clients are just as busy as you, if not more so. These calls are going to be typically to either get you to quote a project, or talk shop about a project you're...
Forum: Copywriting 19th July 2016, 11:32 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 214
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Please Critique My Letter For Selling My Domain Name

Don't focus on writing a sales letter. Focus on writing a landing page. If you're emailing a company, that means that they already have a domain name. You're not providing them with any value.

You...
Forum: Copywriting 14th July 2016, 07:14 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 330
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: My first sales letter

Change the headline "Let me show you the exact system that you can use to get rid of your cable or satellite bill and still watch all of your favorite tv shows and movies!" to something like:
...
Forum: Copywriting 14th July 2016, 07:11 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 330
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: My first sales letter

What's with the logo video on top? I was expecting a VSL but it was just a 7 second video of the OptimizePress logo and URL.
Forum: Copywriting 10th July 2016, 03:31 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 85
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Selling Via Facebook - Short or Long?

Because of the changes in Facebook's messaging algorithm, some of these private messages may not even be getting seen!

That's cash being left on the table just because you're PMing them.,
Forum: Copywriting 10th July 2016, 02:53 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 472
Posted By DKCopywriter
Forum: Copywriting 10th July 2016, 02:52 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 184
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Looking to do a good deed for the day? Consider helping a new copywriter out!

Don't take this the wrong way guys, and maybe I'm wrong, but I'm not entirely sure OP will generate much interest in selling a one-page report on screenwriting for $25-$40 or however much you'd...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd May 2016, 07:08 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 3,835
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Simple easy method to get more clients than you can handle

Sarah, here's a tip:

Rewrite some of the website and offer up some tips free of charge.

I've just started doing this. Sent out a good number of emails but I've got a local business owner who...
Forum: Copywriting 28th April 2016, 09:26 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,824
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Does Profanity Hinder Professionalism?

It's a chain where the waiters/hosts/etc treat you like shit (in a funny way!). They give you large hats to wear while you eat. On the hats, they write sexual innuendos and jokes at your own expense....
Forum: Copywriting 27th April 2016, 09:20 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 927
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Why didn't this convert

What Ewen said. It goes against human nature. When it comes to looking good, I'd rather workout a TON than stop eating burgers and ribs.

You say you serve delicious meals and fun workouts, but...
Forum: Copywriting 27th April 2016, 09:10 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 1,824
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Does Profanity Hinder Professionalism?

Depends entirely on the audience. If you use profanity when you're trying to sell child care services, it's not a good idea.

However, for "Rock 'n' Roll" or raunchy type products,sure. Sometimes...
Forum: Copywriting 27th April 2016, 04:06 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 3,835
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Simple easy method to get more clients than you can handle

Actually, most of my connections AREN'T in sales/marketing/advertising. They're either still in school or they're doing meaningless stuff like data entry or serving tables.
Forum: Copywriting 27th April 2016, 02:48 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 3,835
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Simple easy method to get more clients than you can handle

Except you need an email list. I don't have one. I haven't built a following. How would you recommend I do so?
Forum: Copywriting 20th April 2016, 02:58 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 785
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: May I borrow your expertise for 5 minutes?

It's a pretty good start. Here are a couple changes/additions I would recommend:

1. I'd get rid of the definition of hackers. Everyone knows what that is. If they don't, they probably don't run a...
Forum: Copywriting 15th April 2016, 10:04 AM
Replies: 57
Views: 3,294
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Explain Like I'm 5: How do I find clients as a newb?

I had a call with a local marketing agency yesterday. It was a no-go. They want people with more experience in content strategy :( as I've said many times, I really think experience is key and very...
Forum: Copywriting 12th April 2016, 07:23 PM
Replies: 57
Views: 3,294
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Explain Like I'm 5: How do I find clients as a newb?

Well for one, I actually used to have a full time sales position doing both cold calling and in person meetings. I've also done door to door and telemarketing sales. I've mentioned that earlier in...
Forum: Copywriting 10th April 2016, 03:48 PM
Replies: 57
Views: 3,294
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Explain Like I'm 5: How do I find clients as a newb?

How do I fix the issue of photos loading slowly?
Forum: Copywriting 7th April 2016, 09:34 AM
Replies: 57
Views: 3,294
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Explain Like I'm 5: How do I find clients as a newb?

Yeah but it's not like I've never done cold calling. I have. I've worked as a telemarketer, door-to-door sales, and in inside sales.

I've made thousands of call calls. I suck at them. I've had...
Forum: Copywriting 6th April 2016, 06:44 PM
Replies: 57
Views: 3,294
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Explain Like I'm 5: How do I find clients as a newb?

I will make them money by rewriting their copy. The problem is I don't have any "social proof".

I get ignored whenever I send emails to the business owners. I REALLY do not want to call them.
...
Forum: Copywriting 31st March 2016, 10:50 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,215
Posted By DKCopywriter
Forum: Copywriting 31st March 2016, 08:19 PM
Replies: 57
Views: 3,294
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Explain Like I'm 5: How do I find clients as a newb?

I get pretty bad anxiety to be honest
Forum: Copywriting 31st March 2016, 06:58 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 656
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Need critique on my copywriting

So your USP is eye-catching colors that can draw attention from others then? Makes women feel attractive? Those are pretty good selling points! Emphasize those more.

I'd scrap that entire first...
Forum: Copywriting 31st March 2016, 06:17 PM
Replies: 57
Views: 3,294
Posted By DKCopywriter
Explain Like I'm 5: How do I find clients as a newb?

I've read the stickies. I've approached local businesses. I've emailed lots of marketing agencies. I've even flat out rewritten crappy ads, brought them to the businesses, gave it to them, and been...
Forum: Copywriting 30th March 2016, 05:37 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,215
Posted By DKCopywriter
As a Copywriter, how crucial are design skills?

I honestly am pretty terrible with any artistic ventures that involve creating something visually. I'm terrible with designing web pages, graphics, etc. I don't know the first thing about inDesign...
Forum: Copywriting 25th March 2016, 03:05 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,442
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Can you help me improve my sales page?

This is a four year old post lol.
Forum: Copywriting 25th March 2016, 03:04 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,172
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: This Few Lines Will Inject Copywriting Into Your Soul Today.

Exactly. Bait n' switches can work, but this just yanked everything out. What a poor move on OPs part.

Bad copywriting in practice right here folks!
Forum: Pay Per Click/Search Engine Marketing (PPC/SEM) 24th March 2016, 10:08 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,930
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Using PPC as an affiliate?

Because I ******* hate making web pages. I'm trying this now and I'd rather drown in a pool of sharks. I'd rather have my intestines ripped out and used to hang me from a noose.

You get my point....
Forum: Pay Per Click/Search Engine Marketing (PPC/SEM) 24th March 2016, 11:16 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,930
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Using PPC as an affiliate?

To be clear guys, I'm not looking to even make a landing page or website. I'm looking to purely advertise the direct affiliate link, NOT a link to a landing/squeeze page.
Forum: Pay Per Click/Search Engine Marketing (PPC/SEM) 23rd March 2016, 10:37 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,930
Posted By DKCopywriter
Using PPC as an affiliate?

I'm looking to get started in affiliate marketing to make a little extra cash and truth be told, I HATE making web pages!

What PPC systems are good to use as an affiliate? I know you can get...
Forum: eCommerce Sites, Wholesaling & Drop Shipping 22nd March 2016, 01:56 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 547
Posted By DKCopywriter
I want to Dropship Toys to eBay customers. How do I find trustworthy, reliable dropshippers?

I'd prefer them to be in the US. I know a lot of people are going to say to start an eCommerce store.

I don't want to. I don't want to make a website, I don't want to develop a brand here. I'm...
Forum: Copywriting 18th March 2016, 02:26 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 754
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: How to find 'high-paying' clients eager to pay you $9,997 per squeeze page copy

Any advice for the free report? I have no idea what to write about for that haha. If there are any resources you can point me to about that, that'd be great!

Also, any particular approaches in the...
Forum: Copywriting 18th March 2016, 01:14 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,472
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: How to land your first copywriting job?

Good job! However, it doesn't sound like you were hired for copywriting per say, but for content writing, which is different.
Forum: Copywriting 17th March 2016, 09:59 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,472
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: How to land your first copywriting job?

Congrats on your succes TheWriteStyle! How exactly did you reach out and what did you say to your prospects to get them to agree to take you on?
Forum: Copywriting 17th March 2016, 09:37 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 754
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: How to find 'high-paying' clients eager to pay you $9,997 per squeeze page copy

So then after you get/create your list, you sent a simple letter to them talking about what you do and how you can help their business?
Forum: Copywriting 14th March 2016, 05:42 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 703
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: How do you break into a niche without prior experience in said niche?

What about if nobody in your immediate friends/network is involved in the niche?
Forum: Copywriting 14th March 2016, 04:39 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 703
Posted By DKCopywriter
How do you break into a niche without prior experience in said niche?

As a new freelance copywriter, one of the most common pieces of advice I've been hearing is to "niche down".

So, I'd like to get into a very small number of niches, mainly software and travel....
Forum: Copywriting 7th March 2016, 12:59 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,085
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: I'd love your feedback

-The colors are all over the place.
-You start your letter with "I love you!". That's kinda creepy dude, especially with the pink coloring.
-As people have said, your fonts and design are all over...
Forum: Copywriting 6th March 2016, 10:08 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 877
Posted By DKCopywriter
Rewriting CB letters

I've read a lot of advice about how new copywriters can find early clients simply by contacting people on CB with low gravity, offering some advice, and hopefully that would lead to the person...
Forum: Copywriting 5th March 2016, 06:45 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 709
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Help improving headline for course on launching online courses

How I Started Making $1,000 Per Month By Creating Online Courses...
Without Knowing What I Was Doing!


Use it if you want. Change it to whatever fits your needs. Maybe it's...
Forum: Copywriting 4th March 2016, 02:51 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,472
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: How to land your first copywriting job?

You need to communicate clearly your potential customer's pain points and to show them EXACTLY how you can get rid of them and WHY you're the best person/company to do it.

No offense Steve, but I...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd March 2016, 11:05 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 468
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Where to Publish Abandoned Articles

Can you release them as PLR material?
Forum: Copywriting 2nd March 2016, 08:36 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 515
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: If i suggest my client to activate adsense on his website. Should i concern about images duplica

You're a copywriter. Your job should be to write the copy for the website. You shouldn't play a role in their monetization methods apart from making their offer stand out to their prospects
Forum: Copywriting 1st March 2016, 02:47 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,735
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Are you a money chaser? Or do you know how to HELP people?

Yes, that's all well and good, but how can you get results without people hiring you to do the writing in the first place? I really don't want to make my own product.
Forum: Copywriting 29th February 2016, 07:24 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,735
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Are you a money chaser? Or do you know how to HELP people?

As a new copywriter looking to get his first clients, how would you recommend going about it?

I can explain as much as I want to a prospect, but it comes off as salesy. If I'm telling them a...
Forum: Copywriting 27th February 2016, 03:23 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,270
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: How you do research ?

THIS! THIS! THIS x1000!!!

Also, write as if you are speaking to ONE specific person. Have an image of that person in your mind, then talk to him to her. Persuade them. Talk to them, appeal to...
Forum: Copywriting 27th February 2016, 03:21 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 939
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Looking for an Agent/Business Partner

This is the board for copywriters. You're pitching the wrong forum pal!
Forum: Copywriting 21st February 2016, 09:47 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,221
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: THE most important part of copywriting is...

I wonder how the response is for that Lyft billboard. Definitely a unique advertisement. It counts on people to stop and read, then entices them with turning around the corner. A lot of people...
Forum: Copywriting 14th February 2016, 01:34 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 861
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Can John Carlton make it in Clickbank anonymously ?

As I said, better than if an average person wrote the offer, but not as good as if they were writing for something targeted to Copywriters
Forum: Copywriting 14th February 2016, 01:53 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 861
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Can John Carlton make it in Clickbank anonymously ?

I think it will do well as great copywriters like him aren't really well known to the general populace. Other other copywriters know of them. Their VSLs will do amazing when they are promoting for...
Forum: Social Media 12th February 2016, 10:15 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,135
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: How do I copyright YouTube Videos?

You're talking about CopyRIGHTing. This is CopyWRITING. That said, you can't copyright other people's videos. If you take someone's video and post it on your channel without permission, not only will...
Forum: Copywriting 11th February 2016, 09:24 PM
Replies: 69
Views: 2,375
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: Agree.

I think it was luck lol. One of them was a Fiverr gig and the other was from a person in a Facebook group looking for someone to rewrite an Amazon product page. Not too bad, but really not much work....
Forum: Copywriting 11th February 2016, 01:10 AM
Replies: 69
Views: 2,375
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: New writer

Never mind, I found it! I thought you were referring to a different thread, because I thought you were referring to this specific thread, and so I was searching this one for the link you mentioned....
Forum: Copywriting 11th February 2016, 12:32 AM
Replies: 69
Views: 2,375
Posted By DKCopywriter
Re: New writer

I don't recall any link you sent. Would you be willing to resend it, so that I can see a great example? If you do, I'd really appreciate it. Thanks!
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