Forum: Copywriting
5th January 2017, 12:01 AM
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Views: 658 |
Forum: Copywriting
29th December 2016, 07:28 PM
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Views: 185 |
Forum: Copywriting
8th December 2016, 10:58 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 360 |
Forum: Copywriting
21st September 2016, 03:05 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 225 |
Forum: Copywriting
19th July 2016, 11:32 PM
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Forum: Copywriting
14th July 2016, 07:14 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 330 Re: My first sales letter
Change the headline "Let me show you the exact system that you can use to get rid of your cable or satellite bill and still watch all of your favorite tv shows and movies!" to something like:
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Forum: Copywriting
14th July 2016, 07:11 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 330 Re: My first sales letter
What's with the logo video on top? I was expecting a VSL but it was just a 7 second video of the OptimizePress logo and URL.
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Forum: Copywriting
10th July 2016, 03:31 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 85 Re: Selling Via Facebook - Short or Long?
Because of the changes in Facebook's messaging algorithm, some of these private messages may not even be getting seen!
That's cash being left on the table just because you're PMing them.,
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Forum: Copywriting
10th July 2016, 02:53 PM
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Views: 472 |
Forum: Copywriting
10th July 2016, 02:52 PM
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Views: 184 |
Forum: Copywriting
2nd May 2016, 07:08 PM
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Views: 3,835 |
Forum: Copywriting
28th April 2016, 09:26 PM
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Replies: 32
Views: 1,824 Re: Does Profanity Hinder Professionalism?
It's a chain where the waiters/hosts/etc treat you like shit (in a funny way!). They give you large hats to wear while you eat. On the hats, they write sexual innuendos and jokes at your own expense....
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Forum: Copywriting
27th April 2016, 09:20 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 927 Re: Why didn't this convert
What Ewen said. It goes against human nature. When it comes to looking good, I'd rather workout a TON than stop eating burgers and ribs.
You say you serve delicious meals and fun workouts, but...
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Forum: Copywriting
27th April 2016, 09:10 PM
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Replies: 32
Views: 1,824 Re: Does Profanity Hinder Professionalism?
Depends entirely on the audience. If you use profanity when you're trying to sell child care services, it's not a good idea.
However, for "Rock 'n' Roll" or raunchy type products,sure. Sometimes...
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Forum: Copywriting
27th April 2016, 04:06 PM
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Replies: 34
Views: 3,835 |
Forum: Copywriting
27th April 2016, 02:48 PM
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Replies: 34
Views: 3,835 |
Forum: Copywriting
20th April 2016, 02:58 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 785 Re: May I borrow your expertise for 5 minutes?
It's a pretty good start. Here are a couple changes/additions I would recommend:
1. I'd get rid of the definition of hackers. Everyone knows what that is. If they don't, they probably don't run a...
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Forum: Copywriting
15th April 2016, 10:04 AM
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Replies: 57
Views: 3,294 |
Forum: Copywriting
12th April 2016, 07:23 PM
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Replies: 57
Views: 3,294 |
Forum: Copywriting
10th April 2016, 03:48 PM
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Replies: 57
Views: 3,294 |
Forum: Copywriting
7th April 2016, 09:34 AM
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Replies: 57
Views: 3,294 |
Forum: Copywriting
6th April 2016, 06:44 PM
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Replies: 57
Views: 3,294 |
Forum: Copywriting
31st March 2016, 10:50 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,215 |
Forum: Copywriting
31st March 2016, 08:19 PM
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Replies: 57
Views: 3,294 |
Forum: Copywriting
31st March 2016, 06:58 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 656 Re: Need critique on my copywriting
So your USP is eye-catching colors that can draw attention from others then? Makes women feel attractive? Those are pretty good selling points! Emphasize those more.
I'd scrap that entire first...
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Forum: Copywriting
31st March 2016, 06:17 PM
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Replies: 57
Views: 3,294 |
Forum: Copywriting
30th March 2016, 05:37 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,215 As a Copywriter, how crucial are design skills?
I honestly am pretty terrible with any artistic ventures that involve creating something visually. I'm terrible with designing web pages, graphics, etc. I don't know the first thing about inDesign...
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Forum: Copywriting
25th March 2016, 03:05 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 1,442 |
Forum: Copywriting
25th March 2016, 03:04 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 1,172 |
Forum: Pay Per Click/Search Engine Marketing (PPC/SEM)
24th March 2016, 10:08 PM
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Replies: 19
Views: 1,930 Re: Using PPC as an affiliate?
Because I ******* hate making web pages. I'm trying this now and I'd rather drown in a pool of sharks. I'd rather have my intestines ripped out and used to hang me from a noose.
You get my point....
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Forum: Pay Per Click/Search Engine Marketing (PPC/SEM)
24th March 2016, 11:16 AM
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Replies: 19
Views: 1,930 Re: Using PPC as an affiliate?
To be clear guys, I'm not looking to even make a landing page or website. I'm looking to purely advertise the direct affiliate link, NOT a link to a landing/squeeze page.
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Forum: Pay Per Click/Search Engine Marketing (PPC/SEM)
23rd March 2016, 10:37 PM
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Replies: 19
Views: 1,930 Using PPC as an affiliate?
I'm looking to get started in affiliate marketing to make a little extra cash and truth be told, I HATE making web pages!
What PPC systems are good to use as an affiliate? I know you can get...
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Forum: eCommerce Sites, Wholesaling & Drop Shipping
22nd March 2016, 01:56 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 547 |
Forum: Copywriting
18th March 2016, 02:26 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 754 |
Forum: Copywriting
18th March 2016, 01:14 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 2,472 |
Forum: Copywriting
17th March 2016, 09:59 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 2,472 |
Forum: Copywriting
17th March 2016, 09:37 PM
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Views: 754 |
Forum: Copywriting
14th March 2016, 05:42 PM
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Views: 703 |
Forum: Copywriting
14th March 2016, 04:39 PM
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Views: 703 |
Forum: Copywriting
7th March 2016, 12:59 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 1,085 Re: I'd love your feedback
-The colors are all over the place.
-You start your letter with "I love you!". That's kinda creepy dude, especially with the pink coloring.
-As people have said, your fonts and design are all over...
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Forum: Copywriting
6th March 2016, 10:08 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 877 Rewriting CB letters
I've read a lot of advice about how new copywriters can find early clients simply by contacting people on CB with low gravity, offering some advice, and hopefully that would lead to the person...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th March 2016, 06:45 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 709 |
Forum: Copywriting
4th March 2016, 02:51 PM
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Replies: 25
Views: 2,472 Re: How to land your first copywriting job?
You need to communicate clearly your potential customer's pain points and to show them EXACTLY how you can get rid of them and WHY you're the best person/company to do it.
No offense Steve, but I...
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Forum: Copywriting
2nd March 2016, 11:05 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 468 |
Forum: Copywriting
2nd March 2016, 08:36 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 515 |
Forum: Copywriting
1st March 2016, 02:47 PM
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Replies: 24
Views: 1,735 |
Forum: Copywriting
29th February 2016, 07:24 PM
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Replies: 24
Views: 1,735 |
Forum: Copywriting
27th February 2016, 03:23 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 1,270 Re: How you do research ?
THIS! THIS! THIS x1000!!!
Also, write as if you are speaking to ONE specific person. Have an image of that person in your mind, then talk to him to her. Persuade them. Talk to them, appeal to...
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Forum: Copywriting
27th February 2016, 03:21 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 939 |
Forum: Copywriting
21st February 2016, 09:47 PM
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Replies: 17
Views: 1,221 Re: THE most important part of copywriting is...
I wonder how the response is for that Lyft billboard. Definitely a unique advertisement. It counts on people to stop and read, then entices them with turning around the corner. A lot of people...
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Forum: Copywriting
14th February 2016, 01:34 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 861 |
Forum: Copywriting
14th February 2016, 01:53 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 861 |
Forum: Social Media
12th February 2016, 10:15 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 1,135 Re: How do I copyright YouTube Videos?
You're talking about CopyRIGHTing. This is CopyWRITING. That said, you can't copyright other people's videos. If you take someone's video and post it on your channel without permission, not only will...
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Forum: Copywriting
11th February 2016, 09:24 PM
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Replies: 69
Views: 2,375 Re: Agree.
I think it was luck lol. One of them was a Fiverr gig and the other was from a person in a Facebook group looking for someone to rewrite an Amazon product page. Not too bad, but really not much work....
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Forum: Copywriting
11th February 2016, 01:10 AM
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Replies: 69
Views: 2,375 Re: New writer
Never mind, I found it! I thought you were referring to a different thread, because I thought you were referring to this specific thread, and so I was searching this one for the link you mentioned....
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Forum: Copywriting
11th February 2016, 12:32 AM
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Replies: 69
Views: 2,375 Re: New writer
I don't recall any link you sent. Would you be willing to resend it, so that I can see a great example? If you do, I'd really appreciate it. Thanks!
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