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Forum: Copywriting 5th July 2018, 12:53 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 486
Posted By workflow
RE: Critique First Copy Draft Please, Suggestions for Draft #2, expert or not.

Thanks for the tips Gordon J.
Forum: Copywriting 3rd July 2018, 07:34 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 486
Posted By workflow
RE: Critique First Copy Draft Please, Suggestions for Draft #2, expert or not.

Thanks for the butt chewing. Although I may not be able to sit for a week. #LearningFromMistakes
Forum: Copywriting 2nd July 2018, 04:27 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 486
Posted By workflow
RE: Critique First Copy Draft Please, Suggestions for Draft #2, expert or not.

So far my takeaway so far is to look at what no one has mentioned yet as a criticism. The most important parts. The headline, the call to action, the p.s, and the story.
Forum: Copywriting 2nd July 2018, 04:22 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 486
Posted By workflow
RE: Critique First Copy Draft Please, Suggestions for Draft #2, expert or not.

Duly noted.
Forum: Copywriting 2nd July 2018, 04:21 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 486
Posted By workflow
RE: Critique First Copy Draft Please, Suggestions for Draft #2, expert or not.

Too late. So I'm going forward. Just starting over.
(http://thenicheman.com/adcritiqepage.html)
Forum: Copywriting 2nd July 2018, 04:20 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 486
Posted By workflow
RE: Critique First Copy Draft Please, Suggestions for Draft #2, expert or not.

Getting experts too! But all opinions count for me. This is a copywriting critique section afterall. Even your opinion counts. Plus, others hopefully can learn from my mistakes. #EgoLeftAtDoor
Forum: Copywriting 2nd July 2018, 04:19 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 486
Posted By workflow
RE: Critique First Copy Draft Please, Suggestions for Draft #2, expert or not.

Thanks good points. Actually, I mentioned saving money throughout but I meant saving money on purchases as opposed to saving money in the bank which I agree is boring to most people.

You showed me...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd July 2018, 04:14 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 486
Posted By workflow
RE: Critique First Copy Draft Please, Suggestions for Draft #2, expert or not.

Sorry, posted another link. Deleted other by mistake.
Forum: Copywriting 2nd July 2018, 04:13 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 486
Posted By workflow
RE: Critique First Copy Draft Please, Suggestions for Draft #2, expert or not.

First thanks to everyone for your response and kick in the butt. Deleted link by accident. (he,he)
Forum: Copywriting 26th June 2018, 11:29 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 486
Posted By workflow
Critique First Copy Draft Please, Suggestions for Draft #2, expert or not.

Please critique following sales page.
All ideas, suggestions, constructive criticisms, or angry excuses to vent appreciated.
Sales Letter (http://thenicheman.com/index2.html)
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