Forum: Programming
28th March 2012, 08:07 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 788 Re: Strange WordPress Google indexing issue
We had something strange happen using that SEO plugin, too, regarding the meta page titles. After removing it (and re-installing All-in-One SEO) it straightened out.
But with your friend's site...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
24th March 2012, 07:22 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 604 |
Forum: Copywriting
19th February 2012, 12:09 PM
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Replies: 17
Views: 688 Re: Thoughts On My Sales Page
I was confused by your copy. What you're selling didn't really crystallize for me until I read half-way down the page. Here's the phrase that "turned the light on" for me: and start social networking...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
13th February 2012, 10:48 AM
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Replies: 31
Views: 3,537 |
Forum: Search Engine Optimization
27th January 2012, 11:49 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 460 |
Forum: Mind Warriors
9th September 2011, 01:15 AM
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Replies: 9
Views: 498 Re: A great blog I think you'll like
Hey Dante,
Thanks for your message. I haven't posted enough times yet, so I can't write you back in the PM.
When you get a chance, drop me a line here:
jewel3000 [at] gmail [dot] com
I...
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Forum: Mind Warriors
30th August 2011, 10:50 AM
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Replies: 9
Views: 498 |
Forum: Mind Warriors
30th August 2011, 10:47 AM
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Replies: 125
Views: 3,871 |
Forum: Mind Warriors
30th August 2011, 10:45 AM
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Replies: 34
Views: 810 Re: 11 Rules for choosing Domain Name
I like your list. There are a couple of points I'm not sure about, though.
For one, I think people should brainstorm a lot more than 5 keywords. The last time I had to choose a domain name,...
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Forum: Offline Marketing
27th August 2011, 08:34 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 1,211 |
Forum: Offline Marketing
27th August 2011, 07:49 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 1,798 |
Forum: Copywriting
11th May 2011, 04:13 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,219 |
Forum: Copywriting
11th May 2011, 04:10 PM
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Replies: 41
Views: 3,464 |
Forum: Copywriting
11th May 2011, 03:49 PM
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Replies: 17
Views: 821 |
Forum: Copywriting
9th May 2011, 08:50 AM
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Replies: 5
Views: 1,090 |
Forum: Copywriting
9th May 2011, 07:51 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 660 Re: B2B Guidance -- Please Help A Newbie
I agree @ travlinguy. I don't want to spend my time emailing you. You have to make this easier for forum members, and your future clients will need you to think this way, too.
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Forum: Copywriting
9th May 2011, 07:39 AM
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Replies: 18
Views: 1,155 |
Forum: Copywriting
9th May 2011, 07:14 AM
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Replies: 20
Views: 1,004 Re: Best Way To Phrase This...
I wouldn't stray too far from the first way you wrote it: “We Guarantee Results – Or You Get Your Money Back.”
The only tweak I might make is putting "60 Days" or whatever in the 'results' part of...
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Forum: Copywriting
9th May 2011, 06:41 AM
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Replies: 8
Views: 657 |
Forum: Copywriting
9th May 2011, 06:01 AM
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Replies: 9
Views: 863 Re: My Top 3 Copywriting Tips
@FuNwiThChRiS -- Can you explain your Point #3 in terms of writing copy? I don't find your Target vs. Wal-Mart example relevant, if your intent is to help people write better sales copy.
Can you...
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Forum: Copywriting
9th May 2011, 05:46 AM
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Replies: 5
Views: 521 Re: Looking for a critique
My impressions:
* Your headline needs a different focus. It doesn't seem to match all the rest that you say throughout the sales copy. Based on what you're selling/saying down in the copy, the...
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Forum: Copywriting
8th May 2011, 08:42 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 922 Re: Warriors I need a quick look-see please
My impressions . . .
* Very cool site design. The design alone was a groovy space to be in.
* I love your tone, your writing "voice" -- very earnest, enthusiastic & convincing.
* However,...
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Forum: Copywriting
8th May 2011, 08:16 PM
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Replies: 33
Views: 1,517 Re: Better Selling Word: Bargain or Deal?
"Deal" is better. It's a more assertive, more authoritative-sounding word. Also, shorter words / sentences have more punch.
For all of those reasons, "bargain" is a more passive word. By nature,...
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Forum: Copywriting
8th May 2011, 08:06 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,008 Re: Review My Sales Page?
@craigmo - these are my initial impressions of your page:
-- It feels very neat and peaceful, almost lulling or calming
-- 1st paragraph lacks intimacy, has no warmth. Seems too concerned with...
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Forum: Copywriting
15th April 2011, 08:51 PM
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Replies: 73
Views: 3,194 |
Forum: Copywriting
13th April 2011, 08:39 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,267 |
Forum: Search Engine Optimization
13th April 2011, 06:03 PM
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Replies: 194
Views: 50,057 |
Forum: Search Engine Optimization
13th April 2011, 08:09 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 740 Re: My site dropped from google rank - Need Help!
Someone mentioned that getting more backlinks will be the only way to keep going after these changes. But I'm growing wary of backlinks, as you don't know what kind of site is tied to your backlink ....
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Forum: Local Meetups, Mastermind Groups and Warrior Events
11th April 2011, 10:33 PM
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Replies: 60
Views: 4,935 |
Forum: Copywriting
11th April 2011, 10:23 PM
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Replies: 28
Views: 2,261 Re: Headlines for Self Defence Classes
How about something like:
"Start Manifesting Your Inner Alpha Male In 3 Weeks. This Self-defense Program Turns Meek Men into Dominant HULKS!"
Get the Body and Gain Untold Confidence to Become...
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Forum: Copywriting
11th April 2011, 09:25 PM
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Replies: 26
Views: 1,097 Re: When writing Do you Speak as You Type?
That's a good approach to writing.
I'll never forget one high school English teacher urging me to simply write essay the same way I talk. That's some of the best advice I ever received.
So I...
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Forum: Search Engine Optimization
25th March 2011, 12:15 AM
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Replies: 31
Views: 968 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
24th March 2011, 11:51 PM
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Replies: 38
Views: 1,619 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
24th March 2011, 08:25 AM
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Replies: 49
Views: 1,469 Re: To late for beginners
I'm sorry that you feel discouraged. You really needn't be. I think the point of Panda is that all of us should:
1) post decent, original content that makes sense for people to read & use, and
...
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Forum: Copywriting
31st August 2010, 07:50 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 901 |
Forum: Copywriting
31st August 2010, 06:52 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 696 Re: Looking for Press Release Headline Help
To attract more visibility, start by using your keywords, first thing.
I tried being "high-brow" with a press release title once, and it ranked so low on the search page that I knew I'd made a...
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Forum: Copywriting
31st August 2010, 04:28 PM
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Replies: 49
Views: 2,498 Re: Move over Rich Jerk
Ummm . . . I'm sitting here reading all of these comments, just STUNNED. I don't normally divulge client secrets, but I am the ghostwriter behind these two ebooks: Traffic Giant and Project New...
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Forum: Copywriting
31st August 2010, 03:39 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 2,845 |
Forum: Copywriting
31st August 2010, 03:16 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 3,105 |
Forum: Copywriting
31st August 2010, 03:07 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 739 |
Forum: Copywriting
31st August 2010, 02:46 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 3,244 Re: Which are the new "classics" sales letters?
Sorry, but "Rich Jerk" is still the ultimate sales letter, IMO.
I've read/studied many sales letters and honestly, Rich Jerk's is the only one that pushed all the right buttons for me.
I...
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Forum: Copywriting
28th March 2010, 07:35 PM
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Replies: 19
Views: 1,318 |
Forum: Copywriting
28th March 2010, 07:32 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 776 |