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Forum: Email Marketing 18th August 2016, 02:59 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 158
Posted By DavidG
Re: Best solution to send and get bounce/spam stats for a list of millions of emails

Did you ever find a solution? I'm curious... I've had clients with similar size lists but used their own custom solutions...

Also - is this list something you;re going to monetize?
Forum: Email Marketing 18th August 2016, 02:56 AM
Replies: 100
Views: 2,042
Posted By DavidG
Re: Help. Big lists but no sales.

Hey South, I reached out to you. Talk soon!
Forum: Copywriting 3rd July 2014, 08:07 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,362
Posted By DavidG
Re: How Did You Get To Write Such Great Copy ?

I agree with Brian.

Also, stick to the niche you know best.

First get into your own niche, write for it and then expand into more important aspects like building a great product, offer and...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd July 2014, 08:00 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 2,152
Posted By DavidG
Re: Brutal Copy Critique Of Jeff Bezos Sales Letter For The Amazon Fire Phone

Thanks for pointing out the obvious sean. PEEPS, don't forget that tech isn't something that you try to sell on your toes. It's something you present in a video.

And honestly, it wouldn't make...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd June 2014, 10:46 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,425
Posted By DavidG
Re: Scrivener workflow?

I use it. I think Colin Chung loves it...

The way I use it is a bit different but basically, one section on bullets, another on research, another on ideas and the final one is outline. I go back...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd May 2014, 06:24 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,102
Posted By DavidG
Re: A growing industry in the USA

Who is the copywriter if you don't mind me asking.

And to add a bit on what you are saying, someone can rent a list in colorado of people who have purchased a joint product and sell a weed based...
Forum: Copywriting 1st April 2014, 04:14 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,193
Posted By DavidG
Re: Landing Page Review

Have you tried segmenting traffic via surveys?

Basically, a survey that breaks down your niche into 2-3 different funnels where you convey specific sales messages.
Forum: Copywriting 25th March 2014, 08:56 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,680
Posted By DavidG
Re: A Quick Way to Find the Emotional Hot Buttons of Your Market

Listen to the 3 stars in particular. Not 5's or 1's.
Forum: Copywriting 24th March 2014, 07:20 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,339
Posted By DavidG
Re: A simple way to increase squeeze page conversions

Waiting in suspense....
Forum: Copywriting 16th March 2014, 10:51 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 630
Posted By DavidG
Re: Question about this offer

I second your question. I think I've seen it on newsmax a few times (email promos)...
Forum: Copywriting 16th March 2014, 11:41 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 469
Posted By DavidG
Re: Bencivenga and Garagiste?

I wouldn't be surprised. Each email comes off perfectly justified and 'new.'
Forum: Ad Networks (CPM/CPL, Display) 14th March 2014, 02:26 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 2,406
Posted By DavidG
Re: iMobiTrax vs CPVLab For Tracking Mobile ??

What do you personally use for tracking?
Forum: Copywriting 12th March 2014, 06:22 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 603
Posted By DavidG
Re: Can you help me spruce up my headline?

PLUS: How to avoid them...

I think it's worth a test. You just need a good sub-head explaining a bit.
Forum: Copywriting 17th January 2014, 03:04 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,737
Posted By DavidG
Re: How To Get A Bunch Of Good Junk Mail

Nice collection Colm. Did you also do health right now? Or are you exclusive to financial?
Forum: Copywriting 17th January 2014, 03:23 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,737
Posted By DavidG
Re: How To Get A Bunch Of Good Junk Mail

This is gold to the right person.
Forum: Copywriting 16th January 2014, 07:31 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,737
Posted By DavidG
Re: How To Get A Bunch Of Good Junk Mail

Another thing to keep in mind.

Yes, persuasion is fine and all. But to prove my point about being targeted for specific promos depending on what you buy/sign up...

I'm currently working with a...
Forum: Copywriting 14th January 2014, 05:17 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,737
Posted By DavidG
Re: How To Get A Bunch Of Good Junk Mail

In my experience, MOST snail mail is exactly the same promo you're emailed. Some are in VSL format, while others are long form emails.

To each their own.
Forum: Copywriting 14th January 2014, 04:33 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,737
Posted By DavidG
Re: How To Get A Bunch Of Good Junk Mail

Just sign up to all of the newsletters.

I've purchased stuff from Advanced Bio and Weiss, but the best promos are usually the ones trying to turn you into a paying costumer.

Also, sometimes...
Forum: Copywriting 12th January 2014, 01:21 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,037
Posted By DavidG
Re: Had much luck with this technique?

Check if you've received emails prior. They might have changed the page to keep up with the campaign (awareness) , or have some script going on for those who've clicked before.
Forum: Copywriting 11th January 2014, 04:19 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 617
Posted By DavidG
Re: One Tip To Strengthen Your Stories

Hey Jason,

It's funny. I just finished reading your thread on looking for a health copywriter, so when I glanced at this thread, I thought you were going to start talking about this promo...
...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd January 2014, 10:14 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 666
Posted By DavidG
Re: The Copy Conundrum

All people really want is a magic wand. That's the short answer...

But the problem is that even if you sold wishes, people would later realize that it's NOT what they NEEDED.

Read...
Forum: Copywriting 12th December 2013, 05:37 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,465
Posted By DavidG
Re: Edison's New Money

Of course, you have to redefine what people already believe.

It's like the biblical code video from newsmax.

The Biblical Money Code...
Forum: Copywriting 18th November 2013, 11:47 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,039
Posted By DavidG
Re: Quick and easy way to create a kick ass squeeze page....

I like the whole texting concept when it comes to restaurants/small local businesses because it acts as a great reminder and heck, a good branding machine.

I helped a bar in my city gather numbers...
Forum: Copywriting 18th November 2013, 11:38 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 950
Posted By DavidG
Re: Emotional Close: Pain first Then Pleasure or Visa Versa

Interesting.

Okay so for the first example, you sell why copywriting is a great business to get into.

The prospect would likely be someone who needs to make money. He or She doesn't know where...
Forum: Copywriting 18th November 2013, 01:36 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 950
Posted By DavidG
Re: Emotional Close: Pain first Then Pleasure or Visa Versa

Oh okay.

So the more aware of the pain (or problems), then agitate early on (including headline or lead)? Typically something emotional.

The more aware of the solution, then simply present the...
Forum: Copywriting 17th November 2013, 08:46 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 950
Posted By DavidG
Re: Emotional Close: Pain first Then Pleasure or Visa Versa

Hey Alex,

Could you expand more on that?

I understand shock value for headlines and maybe on some leads. But whats your perspective?
Forum: Copywriting 15th November 2013, 01:31 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 694
Posted By DavidG
Re: The Power of the Right State of Mind

Yeah, when you chase the dollar you forget about value. And chasing itself is a bitch.

You just want to be paid decently, and be left alone, doing what you're good at. But the pressure of...
Forum: Copywriting 8th November 2013, 10:07 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 540
Posted By DavidG
Re: CopyWriter, Help Needed.

Yeah, you can start off by being the "Squeeze Page Master"...

Seriously. Look at your squeeze page numbers, get the best ones and then show them as samples or proof.
Forum: Copywriting 14th October 2013, 04:02 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 943
Posted By DavidG
Re: Are you writing copy to follow your passion or make money? (Dilbert's creator has some advice)

As writers who need to do what's best for the sake of conversions... looking for a client who has passion in their product/service can be a 50/50.

Have you ever had a client who THINKS they know...
Forum: Copywriting 4th October 2013, 11:00 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,076
Posted By DavidG
Re: Help Me Improve My Sales Video Script :)

'hop off m8 calm down n' grab a jammy dodger"
Forum: Copywriting 1st October 2013, 07:24 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,076
Posted By DavidG
Re: Help Me Improve My Sales Video Script :)

For what you say, the script looks good.

I think that you should maybe focus on some 'newer' content. A new type of solution or area of focus involving videos.

Depending on the prospects who...
Forum: Copywriting 13th September 2013, 02:48 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,031
Posted By DavidG
Re: What kind of work are you doing most these days?

Interesting.

Would you say this only applies to big multi-million dollar publishers/companies?

Edit: To add more to it...

I always saw direct response as the first step to making a company...
Forum: Copywriting 4th September 2013, 02:21 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,072
Posted By DavidG
Re: How Layout and Design can Lower Conversions...

The beauty of copywriting.
Forum: Copywriting 29th August 2013, 06:39 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,413
Posted By DavidG
Re: Hottest Headlines

Sucks the man got fired.
Forum: Copywriting 27th August 2013, 06:59 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 436
Posted By DavidG
Chevy Volt Marketer Gesse tries to describe their "Avatar"...

Chevy Volt Marketer Gesse on Tesla Competition - Businessweek (http://www.businessweek.com/videos/2013-08-22/chevy-volt-marketer-gesse-on-tesla-competition)

Check it out.


Reminds me of the...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd August 2013, 05:19 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 2,203
Posted By DavidG
Re: What's your recommendation for learning copywriting?

Great advice.

I also agree with your swipe file bit... but generally people who do know how to swipe, do it for those small ideas that could make things happen.
Forum: Copywriting 14th August 2013, 08:51 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 888
Posted By DavidG
Re: People are not reading as much.

Yeah what Ken said..

I think the difference here is whether you're pro-active in keeping the readers engaged with details.
Forum: Copywriting 14th August 2013, 02:21 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 2,525
Posted By DavidG
Re: What are some of your "wow" books?

the WAR of ART by Steven Pressfield.
Forum: Copywriting 14th August 2013, 03:43 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 888
Posted By DavidG
Re: People are not reading as much.

Exactly. And I guess that's why those who do know how can make a pretty penny as a writer.
Forum: Copywriting 10th August 2013, 02:59 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 886
Posted By DavidG
Re: Do you outline when you're writing your body copy for your ad?

Exactly...

So would you say writing it down can give a better output? That's my main point.
Forum: Copywriting 10th August 2013, 02:22 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 886
Posted By DavidG
Do you outline when you're writing your body copy for your ad?

Just like the question asks...

Do you outline every piece of detail when making your case? Or do you keep it spontaneous/free flow?


I know for sure we all follow a some kind of formula, but...
Forum: Copywriting 8th August 2013, 05:11 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 845
Posted By DavidG
Re: Do you always need to hard-sell (use emotional writing) for copywriting? What about a free servi

I haven't really read what others have said but here's my take on your letter...

1. GREAT OFFER. But it lacks proof of it working.

Fact is, most people who click to see this letter will...
Forum: Copywriting 7th August 2013, 03:04 PM
Replies: 59
Views: 2,512
Posted By DavidG
Re: Anyone else find it weird about the copywriting forum....

In the end, we all have mortgages.
Forum: Copywriting 6th August 2013, 03:42 AM
Replies: 48
Views: 1,460
Posted By DavidG
Re: [HELP!] Critique my sales page PLEEEZE!

What I typed is exactly what you need to do. They're a bit of steps to help you narrow down your focus.

And like Mark said, don't complicated it. I used to spend up to 2 goddamn months taking...
Forum: Copywriting 5th August 2013, 02:59 PM
Replies: 48
Views: 1,460
Posted By DavidG
Re: [HELP!] Critique my sales page PLEEEZE!

Anyways, now that my colleagues have given FANTASTIC critiques... let me offer a bit of advice...

Whats the ONE SPECIFIC problem you solve?

In your case, finding "The ONE" isn't specific.
...
Forum: Copywriting 24th July 2013, 07:29 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,884
Posted By DavidG
Re: How to Write a Proposal that Lands Copy Clients

I thought this lesson was one of the best lessons from Bencivenga when I used to have trouble getting clients...

I like your mix to it though.
Forum: Copywriting 15th July 2013, 07:15 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 579
Posted By DavidG
Re: Suspense/Anxiety/Drama even when you know the end result

You want to believe! So you stick around until it happens.
Forum: Copywriting 10th July 2013, 10:57 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 628
Posted By DavidG
Re: You've got 4 lines to get the click...

Nice link.

Check this one out where they show how to narrow your ad by using the stages of awareness...

Search Terms And Stages of Awareness...
Forum: Copywriting 5th July 2013, 03:32 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,082
Posted By DavidG
Re: Anybody have some background info on Fat Loss Factor?

I remember when they first swiped the FatBurningFurnace copy with a powtoon type program drawings...

Then out of no where I saw it on clickbank.

I think the big idea is what makes it stand...
Forum: Copywriting 4th July 2013, 03:25 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,691
Posted By DavidG
Re: Rich Schefren breaking down his own sales letter, on video, for the first time o

I think he is using this as a form of marketing to get people to apply.

It's like describing your sales letter on weight loss to people who are trying to lose weight. And because you sound...
Forum: Copywriting 3rd July 2013, 09:15 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,261
Posted By DavidG
Re: anyone ever try a Treadmill desk?

Good research for Harlan in this thread. I think.
Forum: Copywriting 1st July 2013, 09:57 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 994
Posted By DavidG
Re: What do you think of this letter?

The headline is for prospects who are sophisticated. And the Big Idea seems to attract those who already know whats up. People who understand their problem but only need a solution.

The Story is...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd June 2013, 02:38 PM
Replies: 44
Views: 1,999
Posted By DavidG
Re: Advanced Copywriting...Lesson 1..."Proof"

I agree. But I tend to do it differently...

I try to say the proof first, then make the claim. Basically, setting them up to believe what I'm about to claim.

So in your example...

PROOF: Our...
Forum: Copywriting 18th June 2013, 02:01 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,311
Posted By DavidG
Re: Drayton Bird Unplugged: Wisdom, War Stories and Slashing Wit

I don't mean to offend anyone but Drayton reminded me of Halbert. Not that Halbert is better or anything... but Drayton kept telling story after story.

I saw all 2 hours of it. Wisdom for sure.
Forum: Copywriting 12th June 2013, 09:26 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 4,355
Posted By DavidG
Re: Do you do what Ben Settle says?

I bet 95% of all threads in this sub would end with "It Depends"
Forum: Copywriting 6th June 2013, 06:20 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 620
Posted By DavidG
Re: Don't Mess With a Copywriters' Money!™

Congratz homie
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