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Forum: Copywriting 4th September 2009, 07:12 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,202
Posted By HenryH
Re: Are these sentences too long to you?

Thanks; the project is actually mandatory in order to be eligible for graduation, so they tend to approve most projects.

I have actually considered freelance scientific grant writing, but...
Forum: Copywriting 4th September 2009, 06:36 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,202
Posted By HenryH
Re: Are these sentences too long to you?

Thanks to all who have offered criticism so far... and especially to Brian for giving the original piece a complete overhaul! Your version flows MUCH better (like anyone would have expected...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th September 2009, 03:16 PM
Replies: 115
Views: 4,548
Posted By HenryH
Re: Here's what to charge for articles and writing services

This <i>is</i> an ingenious business model for an article writing service (at least "on paper"). As long as you proofread and evaluate each article for clarity, spelling errors, relevance to the...
Forum: Copywriting 4th September 2009, 02:12 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,202
Posted By HenryH
Re: Are these sentences too long to you?

Thanks for the critique, Mark. When you say that there's a hugely long sentence after the first few lines, which one specifically are you referring to? Is it the one that begins with...

"You see,...
Forum: Copywriting 4th September 2009, 08:56 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,202
Posted By HenryH
Are these sentences too long to you?

I recently wrote a bit of copy mostly for my own practice/fun, but it seems like it breaks the rule of short sentences in almost every line. What do you think?:

Here......
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2009, 09:06 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,184
Posted By HenryH
Re: Please critique my squeeze page?

Thanks for the link. I just can't help but notice that so many copywriters in general (myself included) often write headlines that focus on a benefit of whatever product they're advertising (e.g.,...
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2009, 08:33 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 3,718
Posted By HenryH
Re: Specializing in writing autoresponder copy?

Thanks for your advice, Anita. Are you saying that autoresponder clients tend to request copywriting services beyond writing autoresponder e-mails? I think I'd like to target my copywriting services...
Forum: Copywriting 26th August 2009, 06:35 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,184
Posted By HenryH
Re: Please critique my squeeze page?

Thanks for the article to the link, Mark. But now I'm confused -- in it, Michel says that the objective of a headline is to entice the visitor to continue reading the copy. Specifically, he seems to...
Forum: Copywriting 24th August 2009, 03:48 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 3,718
Posted By HenryH
Re: Specializing in writing autoresponder copy?

Do you ever write e-mail autoresponders that don't focus on stories, or is it a general rule of thumb to *always* base an e-mail on a story?
Forum: Copywriting 22nd August 2009, 09:08 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 3,718
Posted By HenryH
Re: Specializing in writing autoresponder copy?

I went ahead and uploaded the file as a webpage in case people aren't keen on downloading it:

http://www.webspawner.com/users/henryh/index.html

Opinions would be appreciated...
Forum: Copywriting 21st August 2009, 05:12 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 3,718
Posted By HenryH
Re: Specializing in writing autoresponder copy?

Thanks for your input, Jay. I'll check out your AA course. :-)

If anyone is interested in critiquing, here is a link to an autoresponder e-mail I wrote a while back. I was ghostwriting for another...
Forum: Copywriting 21st August 2009, 08:47 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 3,718
Posted By HenryH
Re: Specializing in writing autoresponder copy?

Appreciate the responses so far.

A client that I've been ghostcopywriting for over the last few years recently assigned me to write a few autoresponder e-mails, and he gushed that they were some...
Forum: Copywriting 21st August 2009, 12:10 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 3,718
Posted By HenryH
Specializing in writing autoresponder copy?

I've heard about how Jay White is famous for his autoresponder copy. Do any of the copywriters here focus their services on writing this form of copy? Does it tend to be harder/easier for a talented...
Forum: Copywriting 19th August 2009, 09:07 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,203
Posted By HenryH
Re: Deciding how much to charge for copywriting services?

Actually, what the copywriter I work for usually does is dismantle each super-long headline, PS statement, etc. and includes the fragments as passages or subheadlines throughout the salesletter. In...
Forum: Copywriting 18th August 2009, 10:04 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,203
Posted By HenryH
Re: Deciding how much to charge for copywriting services?

LOL, I think it goes without saying that you probably wouldn't want to advertise with a headline like that for an ADHD self-help product. :-)
Forum: Copywriting 18th August 2009, 09:11 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,203
Posted By HenryH
Re: Deciding how much to charge for copywriting services?

LOL -- interesting series of recent posts. :-D

For some laughs, check out a few of the headlines I've ghostwritten that I seriously think might hold a few Guiness World Records for longest (and...
Forum: Copywriting 17th August 2009, 06:14 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,203
Posted By HenryH
Re: Deciding how much to charge for copywriting services?

First of all, thanks to all fellow Warriors who were gracious enough to offer their advice in this thread!

Several posters suggested running a "special" deal by offering copywriting services for...
Forum: Copywriting 16th August 2009, 10:47 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,203
Posted By HenryH
Deciding how much to charge for copywriting services?

Hey guys,

For the last several years, I've been a ghostwriter for a professional copywriter. Every bit of copy I write is published under his identity, and while the money I'm making is *decent*...
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