Forum: Copywriting
24th July 2011, 09:40 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 664 Re: Salescopy Review
Quick critique:
-> The truth is promoted by every other product out there. All products say the same thing. You don't need cars, looks, money. So it's not really a new truth, especially since the...
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Forum: Copywriting
24th July 2011, 09:28 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 1,169 |
Forum: Copywriting
20th July 2011, 01:49 AM
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Replies: 8
Views: 815 |
Forum: Copywriting
20th July 2011, 12:26 AM
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Replies: 71
Views: 7,314 Re: What's the most powerful emotion?
Rushmore nailed it.
If you earn $11.000/year you are poor.
But if everyone else is earning $10.000/year you will feel better about yourself.
This is greed.
If you have a Porsche Boxster...
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Forum: Copywriting
19th July 2011, 12:37 PM
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Replies: 71
Views: 7,314 Re: What's the most powerful emotion?
I would say that the most powerful two emotions are greed and love.
Greed is when you want more than you need. Or when you want more than those around you.
Love is somehow related with greed....
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Forum: Wanted - Members Looking To Hire You
19th July 2011, 12:31 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 496 |
Forum: Copywriting
19th July 2011, 06:14 AM
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Replies: 4
Views: 689 Re: JV email copy
Hello Sandy,
Please email me at razvan.rogoz@gmail.com.
I won't ask for a flat fee on the spot. Only after you've sent the email and it achieved the results, you will pay me.
Thank you,...
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Forum: Copywriting
17th July 2011, 06:20 AM
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Replies: 52
Views: 1,843 |
Forum: Copywriting
17th July 2011, 05:05 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 1,095 Re: What do you think of my websites content?
-> Increase the text size, cut down the number of words on the first page.
-> What's your USP? Your first job is to rank against the competition. How are you doing that?
-> Make it second...
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Forum: Copywriting
17th July 2011, 05:02 AM
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Replies: 21
Views: 1,740 Re: Please Critique my Brochure
Main cover:
-> Make your headline clear and specific. It's more like a motto ... like a tagline, then an actual specific headline.
"How To Buy The House Of Your Dreams (Which You Can't Afford...
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Forum: Copywriting
17th July 2011, 04:54 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 973 |
Forum: Copywriting
17th July 2011, 04:48 AM
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Replies: 34
Views: 1,038 |
Forum: Copywriting
17th July 2011, 01:10 AM
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Replies: 14
Views: 1,491 |
Forum: Copywriting
16th July 2011, 07:02 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 816 |
Forum: Mind Warriors
16th July 2011, 02:59 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 994 |
Forum: Copywriting
16th July 2011, 02:52 AM
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Replies: 14
Views: 1,491 |
Forum: Copywriting
16th July 2011, 02:41 AM
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Replies: 12
Views: 816 Re: Guys, what do you think of my copywriting!
Hello Musique,
Unless your traffic is really, really targeted, you have a far way to go.
For all intensive purposes, I'll analyze one product alone:
Classroom in a book.
Here is my...
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Forum: Copywriting
15th July 2011, 11:51 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 542 Re: please critique my sales letter
Hi Ben,
Good to meet you.
I won't go into a comprehensive analysis of it, but I'll tell you what I think, at least at a superficial level.
-> Your headline. You are trying to use an...
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Forum: Copywriting
14th July 2011, 09:13 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 588 |
Forum: Copywriting
1st July 2011, 11:54 AM
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Replies: 8
Views: 1,341 |
Forum: Copywriting
1st July 2011, 11:39 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 3,353 |