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Forum: Copywriting 24th July 2011, 09:40 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 664
Posted By RRMarketing
Re: Salescopy Review

Quick critique:

-> The truth is promoted by every other product out there. All products say the same thing. You don't need cars, looks, money. So it's not really a new truth, especially since the...
Forum: Copywriting 24th July 2011, 09:28 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,169
Posted By RRMarketing
Re: Wanted: Killer Copywriter for an Unfair Advantage

This reminds me of job offers on Elance.

There is always someone who wants kick-ass copy, veteran copywriter, proven track record, native English (really ... a read-proffer is not expensive) and...
Forum: Copywriting 20th July 2011, 01:49 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 815
Posted By RRMarketing
Re: Using Article Marketing Experience to Break Into Copywriting

You know who would make for a kick-butt copywriter?

STEPHEN KING!

I mean ... that guy kept me reading 600 pages in 2 days. That's more than what I can say for most copywriters.

So there is...
Forum: Copywriting 20th July 2011, 12:26 AM
Replies: 71
Views: 7,314
Posted By RRMarketing
Re: What's the most powerful emotion?

Rushmore nailed it.

If you earn $11.000/year you are poor.

But if everyone else is earning $10.000/year you will feel better about yourself.

This is greed.

If you have a Porsche Boxster...
Forum: Copywriting 19th July 2011, 12:37 PM
Replies: 71
Views: 7,314
Posted By RRMarketing
Re: What's the most powerful emotion?

I would say that the most powerful two emotions are greed and love.

Greed is when you want more than you need. Or when you want more than those around you.

Love is somehow related with greed....
Forum: Wanted - Members Looking To Hire You 19th July 2011, 12:31 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 496
Posted By RRMarketing
Re: NEEDED:Copywriter to Make a Salepage for a WP Plugin

Hello NowContactMeNow1,

I'm not an expert in video sales letters (or video scripts), however, I think I can help you. I can also suggest someone more suitable for it if that's the case.

Feel...
Forum: Copywriting 19th July 2011, 06:14 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 689
Posted By RRMarketing
Re: JV email copy

Hello Sandy,

Please email me at razvan.rogoz@gmail.com.

I won't ask for a flat fee on the spot. Only after you've sent the email and it achieved the results, you will pay me.

Thank you,...
Forum: Copywriting 17th July 2011, 06:20 AM
Replies: 52
Views: 1,843
Posted By RRMarketing
Re: My first sales page and I need the input of Experts

Hello Jim,

It's far better compared to most submissions here.

Here's my quick review:
- The headline is good, however, it doesn't really shocks or captures my attention. You could play around...
Forum: Copywriting 17th July 2011, 05:05 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,095
Posted By RRMarketing
Re: What do you think of my websites content?

-> Increase the text size, cut down the number of words on the first page.

-> What's your USP? Your first job is to rank against the competition. How are you doing that?

-> Make it second...
Forum: Copywriting 17th July 2011, 05:02 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,740
Posted By RRMarketing
Re: Please Critique my Brochure

Main cover:
-> Make your headline clear and specific. It's more like a motto ... like a tagline, then an actual specific headline.

"How To Buy The House Of Your Dreams (Which You Can't Afford...
Forum: Copywriting 17th July 2011, 04:54 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 973
Posted By RRMarketing
Re: Critique my very first copywriting piece EVER...

Hello Tony,

I don't think that insulting your target market helps you that much.

They are socially inept but that doesn't mean they don't have an ego.

Plus, they consider their lack of a...
Forum: Copywriting 17th July 2011, 04:48 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,038
Posted By RRMarketing
Re: Need A Critique: HTML Landing Page With A Difference

Hello,

The first major mistake I see in your sales letter is assuming things. Your prospect is an unique being. He comes with his own set of beliefs about life and business in general.

For...
Forum: Copywriting 17th July 2011, 01:10 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,491
Posted By RRMarketing
Re: "Copyright Fair Usage" on sharing copywriting courses / seminar notes (non-profit)

Thanks for the feedback.

Take a look at books | Derek Sivers (http://sivers.org/book) and tell me what you think.

Thanks,
Razvan
Forum: Copywriting 16th July 2011, 07:02 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 816
Posted By RRMarketing
Re: Guys, what do you think of my copywriting!

Hello Musique,

Glad I could help.

Feel free to mail me at razvan.rogoz@gmail.com and we'll talk more.

Take care,
Razvan
Forum: Mind Warriors 16th July 2011, 02:59 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 994
Posted By RRMarketing
Re: Goals: Why some people achieve them and why others don't. . .

I consider the main reason for not achieving goals is because they don't really believe they can achieve them.

Joe earns $100/month from IM. He sets a goal to earn $5000/month.

His self image...
Forum: Copywriting 16th July 2011, 02:52 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,491
Posted By RRMarketing
"Copyright Fair Usage" on sharing copywriting courses / seminar notes (non-profit)

Hi!

My name is Razvan and I'm studying copywriting about ... every day.

Not here to brag about this thought.

Instead, I've noticed that I've gathered tons of notes.

I have 14 courses's...
Forum: Copywriting 16th July 2011, 02:41 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 816
Posted By RRMarketing
Re: Guys, what do you think of my copywriting!

Hello Musique,

Unless your traffic is really, really targeted, you have a far way to go.

For all intensive purposes, I'll analyze one product alone:
Classroom in a book.

Here is my...
Forum: Copywriting 15th July 2011, 11:51 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 542
Posted By RRMarketing
Re: please critique my sales letter

Hi Ben,

Good to meet you.

I won't go into a comprehensive analysis of it, but I'll tell you what I think, at least at a superficial level.

-> Your headline. You are trying to use an...
Forum: Copywriting 14th July 2011, 09:13 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 588
Posted By RRMarketing
Re: I need help with my sales copy

Hello Jeskola,

Sure, I'd love to take a look.

Mail me at razvan.rogoz at gmail.com

Thanks,
Razvan
Forum: Copywriting 1st July 2011, 11:54 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,341
Posted By RRMarketing
Re: Metaphor resources?

Stephen King - On writing.

Really basic but it's a starting point.
Forum: Copywriting 1st July 2011, 11:39 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 3,353
Posted By RRMarketing
Re: Makepeace Desktop Copy Coach for $100

I think it was the digital copy.

In other words, PDFs + CDs.

I've paid $997 on it and it was a good investment.
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