Forum: Copywriting 
12th May 2015, 01:19 PM
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Replies: 8
Views: 1,584  Re: Vitamin Copy Controls
There was a probiotics VSL that crushed it last year.
It was by Keybiotics.
"The American Parasite" video. You can find it on Youtube.
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Forum: Copywriting
14th April 2015, 04:14 PM
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Replies: 62
Views: 10,049 Re: Gary Bencivenga --- I'm not impressed!
But you're not the market. So assuming people who ARE the market have the same reaction you do is a big mistake. Especially since we KNOW he's getting results. That's not opinion.
And since he's...
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Forum: Copywriting
14th April 2015, 03:14 PM
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Replies: 62
Views: 10,049 Re: Gary Bencivenga --- I'm not impressed!
Fortunately for him, Gary's job isn't to impress anyone.
He (self-admittedly) isn't the most talented "writer."
The reason he's considered one of the best is because of the results he...
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd May 2014, 02:57 PM
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Replies: 99
Views: 3,226 |
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd May 2014, 02:21 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 647 Re: Please Rip Apart My Landing Page
There's no urgency in your page. That's why people aren't
buying.
Give them a reason to use your service right now. Tell them
the horror story as to what can happen if they don't. It has
to be...
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd May 2014, 02:10 PM
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Replies: 99
Views: 3,226 |
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd May 2014, 02:01 PM
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Replies: 99
Views: 3,226 |
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd May 2014, 01:53 PM
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Replies: 30
Views: 1,908 Re: [Critique Request] - VSL Landing Page
How much do women care about being "strong?" Unless they already lift... it's probably not their primary motivation. And if they're lifters, they probably aren't looking for a weight loss program....
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Forum: Copywriting
22nd May 2014, 05:32 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,732 |
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Forum: Copywriting
7th May 2014, 01:47 PM
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Replies: 40
Views: 5,078 Re: Who is THE Top Dating Niche Copywriter?
Because this niche is so competitive, a lot of product owners
are secretive about who REALLY wrote their copy.
I can't speak for anyone else, but I know Vin Montello had one that
did over $250K...
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Forum: Copywriting
21st March 2014, 04:17 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 661 Re: Any copywriter could have told you that...
Sophisticated markets require unique solutions.
Ex: weight loss.
Most people buying diets are already aware they need to lose weight.
Chances are, they've already been trying to lose the...
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Forum: Copywriting
14th March 2014, 08:05 AM
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Replies: 25
Views: 1,076 Re: Which Sales Page Do You Like Better?
MaksP The Truth (like your YouTube videos btw),
You can't be looking for where to "add" certain elements to your sales letter. That's like putting a paint job on a car with an engine that doesn't...
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Forum: Copywriting
13th February 2014, 10:08 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 3,690 Re: New VSL Swipe
Blindly assuming most people are "like you" is a big mistake.
That's why they test in the first place.
Personally, I thought the video was a good job of fear-based
marketing. And I bought the...
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Forum: Copywriting
21st January 2014, 04:41 PM
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Replies: 32
Views: 1,708 Re: Any feedback on this video salesletter?
It definitely isn't lacking in credibility. I believe what he's saying.
Problem is... it comes off as too technical. It's just not emotional
enough. And since he's targeting women, that's a MAJOR...
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Forum: Copywriting
2nd July 2013, 08:48 AM
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Replies: 22
Views: 1,261 Re: anyone ever try a Treadmill desk?
I have 2 herniated discs from football. Sciatic nerve damage in both legs.
Sitting any more than a few hours used to be torture...
Then I bought a theracane.
Now back pain isn't an issue for...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
12th April 2013, 10:56 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 2,175 Re: Self-defense affiliate programs?
I appreciate the responses, but if you read my post...
I said I was able to find private affiliate programs. I have a list of them already.
What I'm looking for is an affiliate NETWORK (like...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
12th April 2013, 01:30 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 2,175 Self-defense affiliate programs?
So I was going through the self-defense section of Clickbank and noticed that the pickings are pretty slim.
For any self-defense affiliates out there, where are you finding products to promote?
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Forum: Copywriting
11th January 2013, 09:12 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 2,009 Re: Self Defense - Brazilian Jiu Jitsu
Not sure why it has anything to do with his marketing...
But the story about his two students raping a girl in a parking lot IS current. As in, happened in 2013, and there is video evidence of it....
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Forum: Copywriting
9th January 2013, 01:43 PM
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Replies: 6
Views: 814 Re: Women's C-Section Scars
LOL, that was awesome.
Like an estrogen-filled Jon LaJoie (check out "Everyday Normal Guy" on Youtube if you haven't).
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Forum: Copywriting
9th January 2013, 12:15 AM
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Replies: 9
Views: 903 |
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Forum: Copywriting
17th December 2012, 10:23 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 1,935 |
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Forum: Copywriting
17th December 2012, 06:30 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 1,180 Re: vsl's + paid traffic?
Dave,
Here's an idea.
Go to cbengine.com.
Browse the top offers in your particular niches...
But instead of gravity, look at % referred. If the percentage is
low, this tells you that the...
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Forum: Copywriting
17th December 2012, 04:41 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 1,103 Re: Finding Quick Copywriting Work - Moving On
That was my point.
I wasn't saying I didn't care, as I obviously took the time to reply to you.
I was talking through the eyes of a potential client.
Which, by the way, you'll find plenty...
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Forum: Copywriting
17th December 2012, 04:12 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 1,103 Re: Finding Quick Copywriting Work - Moving On
Wrong forum, but I'll respond anyway.
Me, me, me...
Your post is all about you... instead of what you can do for clients.
Don't take this the wrong way...
But nobody cares about your...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
16th November 2012, 12:16 AM
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Replies: 41
Views: 1,042 Re: Why is my page not converting?
Lots of features... very little in the way of benefits.
Your copy seems like it was written more for SEO than to get prospects excited about your product.
Why should people buy this? What is it...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
14th November 2012, 11:08 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 662 |
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
13th November 2012, 03:13 PM
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Replies: 34
Views: 1,142 Re: So I finished my ebook, what now?
First of all, I love your angle. But I don’t think you have the concept anywhere near its potential.
Here’s why:
Your targeting is all wrong.
Your copy basically alienates everyone that...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
3rd February 2012, 03:22 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 1,146 |