Forum: Copywriting
22nd May 2012, 12:33 AM
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Replies: 11
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Forum: Copywriting
19th May 2012, 10:43 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 880 Re: Your Guarantee is *Not* a Selling Point
I will repeat the sentiments of the other people on this forum: you are wrong.
My favorite example of a great guarantee came from one of Dan Kennedy's books. The owner of a pest control business...
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Forum: Copywriting
12th May 2012, 04:08 PM
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Replies: 19
Views: 2,733 Re: Marie's Interesting Launch Sequence...
The 5-minute video on the email sign-up page is fine. But that 30 minute 'Six Pillars To Growing YOUR Online Business"....and another 25 minute 'Dirty Little Secret' video...they could have easily...
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Forum: Copywriting
12th May 2012, 06:26 AM
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Replies: 19
Views: 2,733 Re: Marie's Interesting Launch Sequence...
I was impressed, and plan to copy it one day. BUT, the big negative is that those videos are too long and not interesting enough. After the first 5 minutes, I got antsy for her to get to the actual...
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Forum: Copywriting
8th May 2012, 03:54 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 1,299 Re: Prospecting Email--Whadda' You Think?
Be careful not to teach, or use your own jargon. For example, the beginning struck me as odd because it feels like you're teaching the prospect how things work (list of 3 things), plus you're using...
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Forum: Copywriting
8th May 2012, 03:17 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 667 |
Forum: Copywriting
24th April 2012, 01:01 AM
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Replies: 14
Views: 1,085 Re: Please Critique My Posters
For some reason the second poster hurt my eyes and made it hard to read. I don't know anything about posters, but I figure the 1st scores best in readability.
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Forum: Copywriting
20th April 2012, 08:12 PM
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Replies: 43
Views: 2,204 Re: Long Copy Sales Letters-Do they really Work?
It's not "insulting" to point out that your opinions don't match your behavior. You are being defensive, though, which I understand.
This is not the first time I've had a conversation with a...
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Forum: Copywriting
19th April 2012, 10:52 PM
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Replies: 43
Views: 2,204 Re: Long Copy Sales Letters-Do they really Work?
Your logic fails:
You are the owner of a brick-and-mortar business.
Business owners are busy. Too busy to read long copy.
However, you DO have time to post on the Warrior Forum and wait for...
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Forum: Copywriting
14th April 2012, 12:01 AM
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Replies: 30
Views: 1,216 Re: The Middle Finger Sales Page....
Believe what you want.
I noticed the same things you did, and I am not persuaded by her style. But she's on her way to something better than the ideas spread in this forum.
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Forum: Copywriting
13th April 2012, 08:38 PM
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Replies: 30
Views: 1,216 Re: The Middle Finger Sales Page....
I think she's outsmarting all of us.
Too many people on this forum cling to old-hat ideas and then when they see anything that's different, they freak out and say it sucks.
-->Attention to...
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd March 2012, 09:43 AM
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Replies: 19
Views: 958 |
Forum: Copywriting
20th March 2012, 06:00 AM
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Replies: 6
Views: 706 |
Forum: Copywriting
19th March 2012, 01:37 AM
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Replies: 44
Views: 1,408 |
Forum: Copywriting
17th March 2012, 12:23 PM
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Replies: 17
Views: 1,037 |
Forum: Copywriting
17th March 2012, 11:53 AM
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Replies: 17
Views: 1,037 |
Forum: Copywriting
16th March 2012, 11:58 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 1,408 |
Forum: Copywriting
15th March 2012, 12:17 AM
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Replies: 9
Views: 671 |
Forum: Copywriting
13th March 2012, 09:14 PM
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Replies: 78
Views: 3,571 Re: Question about why women shop for clothes...
Most of the responses so far have ignored the fact that looking for clothes via Google search is different than wandering through a store and finding something you like.
The motivation is the same...
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Forum: Copywriting
12th March 2012, 10:31 PM
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Replies: 24
Views: 757 Re: What Would You Do If...
Also, beware of businessmen who think they can take devalue the work of female copywriters, or think that women are afraid of negotiating. I don't know how to fix situations like those, but someone...
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Forum: Copywriting
12th March 2012, 10:27 PM
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Replies: 24
Views: 757 Re: What Would You Do If...
HaHaHaHaHa. Never pay attention to a word this guy (or any other businessperson) says, only pay attention to his actions. In this case, he called you "the chosen one" and yet is claiming he has a...
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Forum: Copywriting
12th March 2012, 08:08 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 1,408 |
Forum: Copywriting
11th March 2012, 09:56 AM
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Replies: 5
Views: 708 Re: Writing an Amazon description for a friend...
That is very helpful. Thank you.
You think a short, 30 minute read (that's essentially just an argument) is something people would pay for? It does solve a problem, certainly, but I assume when...
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Forum: Copywriting
10th March 2012, 08:46 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 2,029 |
Forum: Copywriting
10th March 2012, 02:29 AM
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Replies: 5
Views: 708 |
Forum: Copywriting
9th March 2012, 10:38 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 708 Writing an Amazon description for a friend...
Hey Warriors,
I've seen a lot of helpful critiquing on this forum, and would love to get a little perspective on something I've been writing for a friend.
It's just the title and Amazon.com...
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Forum: Copywriting
9th March 2012, 08:26 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 1,008 |
Forum: Copywriting
9th March 2012, 08:21 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 838 |
Forum: Copywriting
9th March 2012, 08:16 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 1,408 |
Forum: Copywriting
9th March 2012, 06:32 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 690 Re: Taking It To The Next Level
True. Keep in mind that business owners NEED copywriting. It earns them tons of money, so don't be afraid of selling your abilities.
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Forum: Copywriting
9th March 2012, 06:27 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 1,408 |
Forum: Copywriting
9th March 2012, 02:22 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 993 |
Forum: Copywriting
9th March 2012, 02:10 AM
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Replies: 8
Views: 761 |
Forum: Copywriting
8th March 2012, 08:20 AM
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Replies: 26
Views: 3,002 |
Forum: Copywriting
5th March 2012, 09:21 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 1,609 |
Forum: Copywriting
5th March 2012, 07:27 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 1,408 |
Forum: Copywriting
5th March 2012, 07:20 PM
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Replies: 2
Views: 485 |
Forum: Copywriting
5th March 2012, 07:15 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 1,408 |
Forum: Copywriting
5th March 2012, 07:12 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 1,408 |
Forum: Copywriting
5th March 2012, 07:06 PM
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Replies: 47
Views: 1,990 Re: Ads, flyers and sites
Hundred-thousandaires don't make wild assumptions like you do.
If the OP only needs a few clients or customers to start, cold emails are perfectly fine. I never said email blasts. I never said...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th March 2012, 04:49 PM
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Replies: 47
Views: 1,990 Re: Ads, flyers and sites
Did you see me say that flyers are ALWAYS a waste of time? Maybe that six figure income makes you too lazy to read carefully.
The people on this forum are throwing a tizzy over my comment when it...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th March 2012, 04:38 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 1,408 |
Forum: Copywriting
5th March 2012, 04:29 PM
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Replies: 173
Views: 14,804 Re: $10,000 Prize To Beat This Control
Do you have the written transcript for that VSL? I'd love to have it for my swipe file.
By the way, why do you need a new VSL if this one is beating all the ones written by experts? Is it not...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th March 2012, 04:24 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 1,408 |
Forum: Copywriting
4th March 2012, 09:11 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 1,125 Re: DO NOT translate your sales copy in Spanish
I can't believe people actually do that.
I wonder if it's the same for English speakers who try to expand their market into the UK or Australia. Seems like there'd be some cultural differences...
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd March 2012, 06:48 PM
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Replies: 47
Views: 1,990 |
Forum: Copywriting
3rd March 2012, 03:09 PM
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Replies: 47
Views: 1,990 Re: Ads, flyers and sites
What are you selling?
Generally, flyers are a waste of time. They make you feel like you're working hard, but they rarely drum up business. If you're considering using flyers, it might be a sign...
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Forum: Copywriting
2nd March 2012, 02:23 PM
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Replies: 28
Views: 934 Re: Review Request: Critique My Headline Please
I was referring to your headline and intro copy.
Three separate people in this forum have pointed out that what you've written is too vague, has too much hype, and requires more fact. Spend a few...
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Forum: Copywriting
2nd March 2012, 01:38 AM
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Replies: 28
Views: 934 Re: Review Request: Critique My Headline Please
People like facts. Give them facts. Right now, the entire page is about hype. Here's an example of a very personal, short, and factual page: highrisehq.com
However, the main problem is you're too...
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