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Forum: Copywriting 23rd November 2013, 06:06 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 732
Posted By stevealtman
Re: What do you think about my new sales page?

Especially you TIM*

I thought max was the one who mentioned the hypnotica stuff lol. Thanks dude.
Forum: Copywriting 23rd November 2013, 05:29 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 732
Posted By stevealtman
Re: What do you think about my new sales page?

Like the mental picture idea. Instant self hypnosis lol. I gotta ask my subconscious "how can I make it so my sales message is irresistible from the first word all the way down to completing the...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd November 2013, 05:24 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 732
Posted By stevealtman
Re: What do you think about my new sales page?

And mark yeah I get what you're saying. I actually have a lot of amazing material in the actual product itself but I thought it might be a bit too much to put into a sales letter. But I guess I gotta...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd November 2013, 05:21 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 732
Posted By stevealtman
Re: What do you think about my new sales page?

Ahhhh I'm so happy I posted here you guys are brilliant. I'm taking a crap right now but you're giving me a LOT to think about. Especially max5ty you sound like you know alot about the niche.
Forum: Copywriting 23rd November 2013, 02:52 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 732
Posted By stevealtman
Re: What do you think about my new sales page?

Hmm okay you're giving me something to think about
Forum: Copywriting 23rd November 2013, 02:51 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 732
Posted By stevealtman
Re: What do you think about my new sales page?

Oh but there's an extremely specific list of outcomes the buyer will get as a result of buying, towards the end.

It's listed in bullets

Also the testimonials are an indirect way of letting...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd November 2013, 01:49 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 732
Posted By stevealtman
Re: What do you think about my new sales page?

Oh haha shit that's not good. Gotta put up a new video player.


And for the confidence thing, yeah I had a feeling too it was off, but I wanted to give them straight advice, and what I said is...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd November 2013, 01:39 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 732
Posted By stevealtman
Re: What do you think about my new sales page?

There are more than enough products out there telling men "how to get laid" "how to pick up women" "how to get your ex back"

My product is for men who have seen all these, failed, and want...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd November 2013, 01:31 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 732
Posted By stevealtman
Re: What do you think about my new sales page?

Hmm interesting. Yeah I've been more focused on competing with the inner game products of this specific market (pick up inner game development), which don't really mention the subconscious mind on...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd November 2013, 01:12 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 732
Posted By stevealtman
What do you think about my new sales page?

Limitless Alpha – The Subconscious Alpha Male (http://limitless-alpha.com/)

I've gotten sales and reviews already but I want to expand to a very high position in the market so I've been working to...
Forum: Copywriting 7th December 2012, 05:31 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 906
Posted By stevealtman
Re: Critics wanted: What's your opinion on this letter?

Damn, thanks.

Everything you said makes a lot of sense actually. I'm going into research on what other hypnosis sales letters look like. The erotic hypnosis one is great for what it's trying to...
Forum: Copywriting 7th December 2012, 01:26 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 906
Posted By stevealtman
Re: Critics wanted: What's your opinion on this letter?

Don't forget "This offer will end tonight 12am!! Get it now or it'll be gone forever!!"

...and then email the same offer with the same scarcity push to their list again the next day
Forum: Copywriting 7th December 2012, 01:24 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 906
Posted By stevealtman
Re: Critics wanted: What's your opinion on this letter?

Well, hell. That was great feedback.


I've already changed it to "psychological imbalance" instead of "biological imbalance".. Yeah I didn't mean to be deceptive, it was just an ignorant mistake...
Forum: Copywriting 7th December 2012, 01:16 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 906
Posted By stevealtman
Re: Critics wanted: What's your opinion on this letter?

I meant how can he judge that the whole letter is awful if he just read up to there? Maybe only that portion is awful in his opinion?

I don't mean to come off as ungrateful, because I am..I've...
Forum: Copywriting 7th December 2012, 11:29 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 906
Posted By stevealtman
Re: Critics wanted: What's your opinion on this letter?

lol how can you judge that it's awful if you stopped reading at the biological part?

You could have told me to change it to

"If so, it may not be your fault. It might simply be a psychological...
Forum: Copywriting 6th December 2012, 07:10 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 906
Posted By stevealtman
Re: Critics wanted: What's your opinion on this letter?

True. My only concern is that the headline will become wayy too long then.

I changed it to

How Almost Any Man Can Get Non-Stop Sex... While... He Is Waiting To Meet His Dream Lover! No Matter...
Forum: Copywriting 6th December 2012, 06:11 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 906
Posted By stevealtman
Re: Critics wanted: What's your opinion on this letter?

For the sub-headline, I kinda stole that from Gary Halbert himself. His ad pulled like crazy. His logic is that it's targeting both your wild, untamed sex craved side, and the side of you that's...
Forum: Copywriting 6th December 2012, 03:45 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 906
Posted By stevealtman
Critics wanted: What's your opinion on this letter?

I've written a sales letter before, but it had no format, I had no idea what I was doing, and it was a disaster in terms of logical flow of selling.

This is my first official sales letter after...
Forum: Copywriting 16th October 2012, 04:43 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 933
Posted By stevealtman
Re: My New "Outside The Box" Squeeze Page. What Do You Think? (Need critiques)

lol yeah, the traffic is cheap don't worry. It's just to test the conversions, I'll set up my sales funnel after I get the squeeze page that works best.
Forum: Copywriting 16th October 2012, 04:40 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 933
Posted By stevealtman
Re: My New "Outside The Box" Squeeze Page. What Do You Think? (Need critiques)

Ah but Bill Gates thought differently too, he just wanted to make it look like everything he did was easy.


And woah, thanks man, didn't notice that. I'll get right onto fixing that.
Forum: Copywriting 16th October 2012, 11:32 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 933
Posted By stevealtman
Re: My New "Outside The Box" Squeeze Page. What Do You Think? (Need critiques)

I'm not arguing. I've listened to all of your advice (the ones who actually gave advice instead of just telling me my page sucks) and even set up multiple split tests. I just wanted to let you know...
Forum: Copywriting 15th October 2012, 10:44 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 933
Posted By stevealtman
Re: My New "Outside The Box" Squeeze Page. What Do You Think? (Need critiques)

Maybe I'm just mad because I hired a copywriter for a lot of money and while everything he wrote seemed great on the surface, it wasn't producing any results.

And by the way, I'm not refusing to...
Forum: Copywriting 15th October 2012, 10:37 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 933
Posted By stevealtman
Re: My New "Outside The Box" Squeeze Page. What Do You Think? (Need critiques)

lol yeah I am a noob on this forum, I don't know how to delete this post so I had to keep it up :P I asked for the advice but then I realized that I wouldn't get any constructive criticism, only...
Forum: Copywriting 15th October 2012, 08:02 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 933
Posted By stevealtman
Re: My New "Outside The Box" Squeeze Page. What Do You Think? (Need critiques)

LOL I didn't expect this but a few people from THIS forum are actually opting in to my squeeze page according to my tracking software. Sorry to you guys who have opted in, I haven't uploaded the...
Forum: Copywriting 15th October 2012, 07:55 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 933
Posted By stevealtman
Re: My New "Outside The Box" Squeeze Page. What Do You Think? (Need critiques)

Also, if a headline captures the readers attention, white space doesn't matter too much. If you can REALLY pull someone in with your headline, you don't need to be so insecure about the fact that...
Forum: Copywriting 15th October 2012, 07:46 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 933
Posted By stevealtman
Re: My New "Outside The Box" Squeeze Page. What Do You Think? (Need critiques)

That's true, but the headline isn't saying they're chick magnets, it's saying the "secret trick" helped them get what they wanted.

Sort of like how a genie could grant all of your wishes, the...
Forum: Copywriting 15th October 2012, 07:37 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 933
Posted By stevealtman
Re: My New "Outside The Box" Squeeze Page. What Do You Think? (Need critiques)

I haven't surveyed my list but I'm a "pick up artist" myself and I live and breathe this niche. I know it inside out and I've read countless books on it.

And lol I got 12 more subscribers since...
Forum: Copywriting 15th October 2012, 07:30 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 933
Posted By stevealtman
Re: My New "Outside The Box" Squeeze Page. What Do You Think? (Need critiques)

lol trust me man, I've tried everything. The big "gurus" of the niche like david deangelo (Eben Pagan) and so on are all doing the things you guys are recommending, and so people in this niche are...
Forum: Copywriting 14th October 2012, 03:26 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 933
Posted By stevealtman
Re: My New "Outside The Box" Squeeze Page. What Do You Think? (Need critiques)

Hmm but the download IS visible on the landing page. It says "download below free" and then they click the book cover to download since it's the only visible way to download the book.
Forum: Copywriting 14th October 2012, 03:24 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 933
Posted By stevealtman
Re: My New "Outside The Box" Squeeze Page. What Do You Think? (Need critiques)

That's true, I'll have to change that. Thanks for pointing that out
Forum: Copywriting 14th October 2012, 01:57 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 933
Posted By stevealtman
Re: My New "Outside The Box" Squeeze Page. What Do You Think? (Need critiques)

Oh this is in the pick up niche, so these guys are fimiliar with people promising them "all the women in the world".. so it's not TOO far fetched.
Forum: Copywriting 14th October 2012, 02:31 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 933
Posted By stevealtman
My New "Outside The Box" Squeeze Page.

Edit:

To those of you that gave me good feedback, thanks. I won't be needing anymore feedback as I've realized the only way to really succeed is to test everything yourself.

Here's the page:...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 12th October 2012, 01:07 AM
Replies: 60
Views: 2,121
Posted By stevealtman
Re: Give Me Your Best Tips for Traffic

Okay, here's my secret:

PPC is definitely the way to go. (PPC = pay per click, and it's how most big guru marketers and companies like Apple and Ebay and Amazon advertise)

Yes, you need money...
Forum: Copywriting 19th August 2012, 07:57 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 772
Posted By stevealtman
Re: My First Real Squeeze Page. Let me know what you think

Actually, can't message yet. Natas could you give me your email address so I could respond?
Forum: Copywriting 19th August 2012, 07:55 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 772
Posted By stevealtman
Re: My First Real Squeeze Page. Let me know what you think

Wow, extremely useful stuff guys. I'm definitely making some huge changes to this page. And woah Charasmatic thanks, you mind if I message you? It would be absolutely amazing if I had someone in the...
Forum: Copywriting 18th August 2012, 09:21 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 772
Posted By stevealtman
Re: My First Real Squeeze Page. Let me know what you think :)

This is why I'm glad I posted here, I never really considered the resolution since it looks perfectly fine on my screen. Thanks Alex
Forum: Copywriting 18th August 2012, 07:23 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 772
Posted By stevealtman
My First Real Squeeze Page. Let me know what you think

Hey guys. I've just fully set up my first ever squeeze page which I'm ready to bring traffic to (Unless you guys point out some major flaws and help me out)

Let me know how it is and if you think...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 20th June 2012, 09:28 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,058
Posted By stevealtman
Re: Will my pants be sued off?

There's no problem with that, just link back to the original source

It's called curation and it's perfectly legal.

If you're using a picture, make sure it clicks through to the place you...
Forum: Copywriting 20th June 2012, 09:04 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 908
Posted By stevealtman
Re: My first ever sales letter [Video] Please critique to your best ability

Thanks Mark, what you said really resonated with me because that's exactly what I thought when I heard all of this feedback.. and maybe if Andrew wasn't so harsh with me, I would have thought it...
Forum: Copywriting 20th June 2012, 08:40 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 908
Posted By stevealtman
Re: My first ever sales letter [Video] Please critique to your best ability

Actually yes, I have had a change of heart.

Honestly, I probably misunderstood what the copywriting books were telling me.. they told me to present huge claims and whatnot, but never mentioned...
Forum: Copywriting 20th June 2012, 07:08 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 908
Posted By stevealtman
Re: My first ever sales letter [Video] Please critique to your best ability

I mean technically I'm not lying, the product I'm selling is an updated version of a plr I bought.. which other people have used to make a lot of money. I never said people used my product to make...
Forum: Copywriting 20th June 2012, 05:44 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 908
Posted By stevealtman
Re: My first ever sales letter [Video] Please critique to your best ability

It's not junk, it'll make them money. And it has a money back guarantee.. sure I'm not telling the truth (yet, because I haven't sold my product yet) but if they make money, what's the difference? If...
Forum: Copywriting 20th June 2012, 05:20 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 908
Posted By stevealtman
My first ever sales letter [Video] Please critique to your best ability

Hey guys

First off,

I've never written a sales copy before but I've been through enough to know what sounds good to me and what doesn't

I also studied a few copy writing books, and took a...
Forum: Mind Warriors 20th June 2012, 05:17 PM
Replies: 36
Views: 1,402
Posted By stevealtman
Re: Never Give Up When Trying To Earn Money

I agree, if hundreds of thousands of other people can make money on the internet, why can't you?
Forum: Mind Warriors 20th June 2012, 05:12 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 726
Posted By stevealtman
Re: Books? Suggestions?

No problem,

once you read through it, a five/six figure income from IM will seem like nothing in the long run
Forum: Mind Warriors 20th June 2012, 05:10 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,288
Posted By stevealtman
Re: Do You Have A Millionaire Mentality? Check Yourself Here.

That's exactly what I think..

you can work hard 12 hours a day, pushing yourself to pay your rent and put food on the table..

or you can enjoy building a business and making money doing it,...
Forum: Mind Warriors 20th June 2012, 05:06 PM
Replies: 52
Views: 2,600
Posted By stevealtman
Re: Influential Movies; What Movies Motivated you?

I know this is a movie thread but if you don't mind me including a TV show here,

Entourage really inspires me to do what we're all here to do.. make a lot of money
Forum: Mind Warriors 20th June 2012, 05:04 PM
Replies: 52
Views: 1,853
Posted By stevealtman
Re: If 99% of IMers fail - this is GREAT news!

Great post. I think most people (newbies) think that making money online is easy, and that all the people who are at the top got there by using "fast and easy automated system"s which is why they...
Forum: Mind Warriors 20th June 2012, 04:52 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 726
Posted By stevealtman
Re: Books? Suggestions?

Have you read millionaire fastlane?

It's the first book I ever read that catapulted me into action

most people start with books like Think and grow rich

but I'm a bit younger, and...
Forum: Mind Warriors 19th June 2012, 01:23 PM
Replies: 288
Views: 95,821
Posted By stevealtman
Re: Can you survive with 3 hours sleep?

The reason I think that someone with 8 hours of sleep as opposed to 3 hours of sleep may be more successful

is because a rested mind is more powerful and active than a dull mind living on minimal...
Forum: Mind Warriors 5th June 2012, 08:44 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,837
Posted By stevealtman
Re: The REAL reason you're not succeeding. It goes much deeper than you think

hmm.. interesting but do you think such deep understanding is necessary? With BSFF, you just notice that there's a problem, apply the BSFF treatment on it, and within minutes you're cured. It's just...
Forum: Mind Warriors 5th June 2012, 06:41 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,837
Posted By stevealtman
Re: The REAL reason you're not succeeding. It goes much deeper than you think

virtue

I've checked out the table of contents for Inner Medicine and it seems similar to BSFF, whatever it is that you use.. just make sure to take care of these blocks
Forum: Mind Warriors 5th June 2012, 02:01 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,837
Posted By stevealtman
Re: The REAL reason you're not succeeding. It goes much deeper than you think

Hmm Jason, what's worked best for you and has been the most consistent?

And Jessica the reason you're not focused is definitely because of a subconscious block.. you should remove of it as soon...
Forum: Mind Warriors 5th June 2012, 12:46 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,837
Posted By stevealtman
Re: The REAL reason you're not succeeding. It goes much deeper than you think

I've actually had great success with BSFF because I've failed with everything up to this point, which made me put extra effort into making this work.. and it did!

Maybe I could help you out and...
Forum: Mind Warriors 4th June 2012, 11:24 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,837
Posted By stevealtman
Re: The REAL reason you're not succeeding. It goes much deeper than you think

no problem guys

and no affiliate links or anything like that, so ofcourse I'm posting this with only one intention.. that you guys will benefit as greatly from this as I have

In fact, I've been...
Forum: Mind Warriors 3rd June 2012, 01:13 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,837
Posted By stevealtman
The REAL reason you're not succeeding. It goes much deeper than you think

Why aren't you succeeding online? And if you are, why aren't you at the level you want to be?

Since you're on mind warriors, I'm sure you've heard of things like


you're not focused enough
...
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