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Forum: Copywriting 9th August 2012, 03:56 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,465
Posted By SynapticWave
Re: Rate my press release, please

Hi,

I know that ordinary people don't read press releases. Personally, when I want to find out anything I stick to the news sites or forums. And I don't know anyone who would prefer a press...
Forum: Copywriting 9th August 2012, 03:45 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,465
Posted By SynapticWave
Re: Rate my press release, please

Ken, thank you. I've got a copy of Associated Press Stylebook now.

I'm revising my release according to your advice.

Finally, I knew that I should've put a smile in my previous answer. I'm not...
Forum: Copywriting 8th August 2012, 04:39 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,465
Posted By SynapticWave
Re: Rate my press release, please

Hi Ken,

I'm afraid that I didn't really get your point. Is this press release too bad to be improved with some redacting? I could definitely write a new one.

Should I give up on writing press...
Forum: Copywriting 8th August 2012, 04:05 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,465
Posted By SynapticWave
Re: Rate my press release, please

Thank you for adding an example to your advice. I've read so many Someone is glad to anoounce... releases, and now I suddenly see that I don't have to follow this pattern and can think outside the...
Forum: Copywriting 8th August 2012, 04:00 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,465
Posted By SynapticWave
Re: Rate my press release, please

Hi Kyle,

My name is Kate, nice to meet you. No offense, I just don't like to be called 'he'.

I don't think that our game is prestigious. It's a little different from many zombie games as it has...
Forum: Copywriting 8th August 2012, 03:49 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,465
Posted By SynapticWave
Re: Rate my press release, please

You're my hero. Thank you a lot for sharing this in a few concise points. It seems that I've read too much about press releases and was overwhelmed with the new information. And now it starts making...
Forum: Copywriting 7th August 2012, 07:35 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,465
Posted By SynapticWave
Re: Rate my press release, please

It's the game name, so I cannot change it. Thank you for advising to skip the summary out of the body part. I've read several How-to's on press releases and sometimes these advised contrary things...
Forum: Copywriting 7th August 2012, 01:37 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,465
Posted By SynapticWave
Re: Rate my press release, please

Angie and Brad, thank you for sharing your knowledge with me and for being so friendly.
Forum: Copywriting 6th August 2012, 06:54 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,465
Posted By SynapticWave
Rate my press release, please

Hello, warriors!

My name is Kate and I am a part of Synaptic Wave iOS dev team. We plan to release a new game in a week or two and to issue a press release about it. Please, read it and post your...
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