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Forum: Copywriting 28th November 2009, 02:04 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,006
Posted By wrcato
Re: Sales Copy Complete ...Would Love Feedback

Turn off the auto play feature on the video. then I will look at your site. I am on satalight internet and band width is limited.
Forum: Copywriting 28th November 2009, 01:57 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,319
Posted By wrcato
Re: Sub-Headline Ideas

Do you have copy written already? You might find the 'gem' is sitting in your copy.
Forum: Website Design 18th May 2009, 12:07 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,204
Posted By wrcato
Re: Squeeze Page in Wordpress?

@RKCastillo
Check this out for squeeze pages in word press: WordPress Letter: Create a point-and-click sales letter in minutes with nothing but a simple WordPress blog...
Forum: Copywriting 18th May 2009, 09:50 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 571
Posted By wrcato
Re: Need some guidence on my sign up page

@magic456, Thanks, On my screen it looks a lot smaller. I will adjust it. I knew something look off. On the splash page, you are 100% right. I will be removing the " pay attention part, that was...
Forum: Copywriting 18th May 2009, 09:33 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 571
Posted By wrcato
Re: Need some guidence on my sign up page

@ Iceing87, Thanks for your reply. I guess "future Heavy Hitters' may not be the best? How about
future marketing mavericks?

Thanks for your advice. I will take it into consideration.
Forum: Copywriting 16th May 2009, 12:17 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 808
Posted By wrcato
Re: Hi Guys. I would like to take some help from you guys, cos i suck in copywriting!

The sales page needs a little tweeking. You really need your subscribe form towards the top of the page. Most people may not make it that far down. the sales message is better than you think.
There...
Forum: Copywriting 16th May 2009, 11:17 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 571
Posted By wrcato
Lightbulb Need some guidence on my sign up page

Hello Copy warriors. I have written my sign up page letter and created a splash page.
I think the splash page is fine Discover How To Generate Targeted Free Traffic and Build Your Own Responsive...
Forum: Copywriting 16th April 2009, 03:05 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 603
Posted By wrcato
Re: Can You Help Me With My Sales Page?

Get rid of the highlights and place your testimonial in a box. Plus your bullets are all over the place. they need to be aligned properly. Use spell check or a dictonary some words are misspelled....
Forum: Copywriting 16th April 2009, 02:56 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,338
Posted By wrcato
Re: What's the Best Copy to Copy?

It really doesn't matter as long as the copy has a proven track record for sales. John Carlton is really good. The whole reason for this short cut is to get good at copy quickly.
Novelist have even...
Forum: Copywriting 16th April 2009, 02:41 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 809
Posted By wrcato
Re: Searching someone who wants to take a look at my salespage

Howdy biek81,
You know what your sale message lacks... A good story.
tell your prospects your story in a way that they will relate there situation with yours.
It doesn't have to be long just two...
Forum: Copywriting 16th April 2009, 02:28 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 728
Posted By wrcato
Re: I Know This Is EXTREMELY Cheeky But...

What do you do when your computer Starts showing symptoms like these...
wheezing, whinning, your screen begins to flicker unccontrolably? Suddenly alarms begin to go off! You don't know where they...
Forum: Copywriting 15th April 2009, 02:52 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 728
Posted By wrcato
Re: I Know This Is EXTREMELY Cheeky But...

Why not use video with audio testimonials. In the video educate your customers about data base back up. Show them the process of all the effort that your company takes to secure there data and...
Forum: Copywriting 14th April 2009, 04:32 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 561
Posted By wrcato
Re: A Formula for Copywriting Success

My first rule is, to research my product. then I spend a lot of time on the offer.
Then I write the copy. Then I spend a lot of time on the headline and subheads.

As far as marketing goes, what...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 14th April 2009, 04:25 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,701
Posted By wrcato
Re: Where do you do you find Quality Direct Mail Lists?

When I need a hot list I always look in my niche. Let's say that I am selling an info product for plumbers. I will go to the srds list book and look up plumbing magazines.
I will then rent a current...
Forum: Copywriting 14th April 2009, 04:14 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 844
Posted By wrcato
Re: Under-Hyping To Win More Sales

Great and true message Ray. I can't think of anything to add... oh ya, "Give and it shall be given to you.

Paul was such a "perfect" Christian that he needed something to
remind him that he was...
Forum: Copywriting 13th April 2009, 12:48 PM
Replies: 49
Views: 1,642
Posted By wrcato
Re: Accelerated List Building - Rip My Copy To Shreds

Hey james,
I know that there have been a lot of opinions here... your copy is good. You will make sales. However, when the price goes up what makes your salepage any diffrent from Jimmy D. Brown,...
Forum: Copywriting 13th April 2009, 12:26 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 832
Posted By wrcato
Re: Is a 2% Conversion Too Much to Ask?

pm a link over to me. I won't steal any of your stuff. That is just wrong. It is impossible to say what is not converting with out seeing your copy.
Forum: Copywriting 13th April 2009, 12:17 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 792
Posted By wrcato
Re: Attention Critics - Would You Mind Crtiquing...

The sales letter isn't to long, though the stroy is to in-depth which means boring.
You need to think in these terms:
A= attention
I= Interest
D= desire
A = Action

This is the formula for a...
Forum: Copywriting 13th April 2009, 11:19 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 865
Posted By wrcato
Re: How Long Does It Take You to Write Copy?

Once the research is out of the way, I work on my offer which could take about two days. From creation to completion. Then I sit down and write the copy. That alone probably takes two hours.

So I...
Forum: Copywriting 11th April 2009, 11:30 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 1,010
Posted By wrcato
Re: magicians' software: Please critique my sales letter

it looks like you used Harry Tarbells course in magic. The copy isn't very good. The headline is hard to read and by that I mean it doesn't motivate me to keep reading it.
Scanability is not there....
Forum: Copywriting 11th April 2009, 11:16 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,095
Posted By wrcato
Re: Looking for Copywriter - $5000 budget

Everyone over the age of 18 should be an expert at dating. $5000.00 budget?
thats it. Come on give me a break. Tell me how many fish have you caught with that bobble in this forum?
Forum: Copywriting 11th April 2009, 11:11 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 563
Posted By wrcato
Re: Writing Sales Pages

Is your sales letter live?
If not, then how do you know whether it is good.
Give us a link.
Forum: Copywriting 11th April 2009, 11:02 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,002
Posted By wrcato
Re: Is it really all about the Copywriting?

What is the diffrence between the adverage internet marketer and that of Dan Kennedy, Joe sugarman, Frank Kern and Jay Abraham? Besides there success. They all learn the art of copywriting, first.
...
Forum: Copywriting 11th April 2009, 10:50 AM
Replies: 36
Views: 1,183
Posted By wrcato
Re: Which Copy Is The Best Copy? Please Advise :)

Sorry missed the third sales copy. Better than the first. Still the money winner is on the second copy for the same reasons.
Let us know the results.
Forum: Copywriting 11th April 2009, 10:43 AM
Replies: 36
Views: 1,183
Posted By wrcato
Re: Which Copy Is The Best Copy? Please Advise :)

Opinions are like a whales blow hole, all whales have them. So, in response, here is mine.
the first sales copy is pretty good. It has a few typos and grammer problems. I can almost Guarantee a 1 to...
Forum: Copywriting 9th April 2009, 03:31 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 726
Posted By wrcato
Re: Please review my landing page?

The headline isn't a headline it's a statement. Your potential customer is not going to care whether or not you are ready to give something away. It's all about them and what's in it for them. Leave...
Forum: Copywriting 9th April 2009, 03:18 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 764
Posted By wrcato
Re: Can some warriors kindly review my sales page

Oh ya, I forgot to mention don't forget to come back and share your results with us.
Forum: Copywriting 9th April 2009, 03:17 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 764
Posted By wrcato
Re: Can some warriors kindly review my sales page

I think the site looks great. The headline is also great, but wouldn't you want your own headline that you din't swipe from a file? or headline creator. that headline has been used and abused by so...
Forum: Copywriting 9th April 2009, 02:55 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 641
Posted By wrcato
Re: Postcard Campaign - Need Advice

I don't know if your country uses a list mailing resource like the United States. We have what is called the SRDS List book. This is the "holy grail" of the direct marketing industry.
SRDS Media...
Forum: Copywriting 8th April 2009, 11:09 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 559
Posted By wrcato
Re: How to Make This Site Convert Better?

Your letter is adverage. It did not make me want to whip out my wallet. You need more bonuses. Or at least the promise of more bonuses after the launch. And that brings up another problem with the...
Forum: Copywriting 8th April 2009, 09:58 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 789
Posted By wrcato
Re: How To Get More Sales Than You're Getting Now

The link doesn't work. Didi you take the site down?
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 8th April 2009, 09:47 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 950
Posted By wrcato
Re: Plagiarism....

Are you sure that the "writer" isn't using PLR? If she is then it isn't plagerizism.
PLR is really popular among article writers right now. Heck I get at least twenty emails a day for new PLR...
Forum: Copywriting 7th April 2009, 04:01 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 656
Posted By wrcato
Re: Will these techniques work for a Realtor

You bet. It will work very well with the real estate market, Especially with the market the way it is now. Do you plan on writing your own copy?

I’ll Write Your Sales Letters. Your Auto-Responder...
Forum: Copywriting 7th April 2009, 12:06 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 816
Posted By wrcato
Re: Constructive Criticism Please :)

Your headline needs pimping. Try some power words before the benefit.
I think the most constructive critisism I could give is... you are giving to much away in your bullet points. I would take the...
Forum: Copywriting 7th April 2009, 11:47 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,097
Posted By wrcato
Re: The "read great copy" MYTH ...

I always thought great copy is in the trmendous sales it makes and bad copy didn't make much if any sales. That is what copy is all about any way... sales?

I have re-written by hand every sales...
Forum: Copywriting 6th April 2009, 03:45 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 837
Posted By wrcato
Re: My first sales letter - constructive criticism needed please.

Howdy Sandy,
Just took a glimpse of your sales letter. One thing I found is that you use the word "Hard" or hardest to many times. I don't think hardest is a word as much as slang. Regardless, It...
Forum: Copywriting 28th March 2009, 10:52 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,107
Posted By wrcato
Re: Want to Become A World-Class Copywriter?

This is a great post.
A.I.D.A
Forum: Copywriting 28th March 2009, 10:42 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 1,107
Posted By wrcato
Re: Want to Become A World-Class Copywriter?

If your copy is good... then why?
Forum: Copywriting 28th March 2009, 10:18 AM
Replies: 311
Views: 190,753
Posted By wrcato
Re: Top Copywriting Books... Ever

Maximillion_Z,
In my opinion anyone serious about copywriting needs to read "Scientific Advertising". It's a classic. Claude Hopkins is considered the "Father" of modern day advertising. If you...
Forum: Copywriting 28th March 2009, 10:10 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,093
Posted By wrcato
Re: Copywriters: Want to tap into a BOOMING copywriting market?

Thanks Jay,
I look forward to the call on April 2nd.
Always learning, always playing.
Forum: Copywriting 28th March 2009, 09:27 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,277
Posted By wrcato
Re: Fired! 50% (or less) up front ONLY - no matter who it is.

"I had been used to chasing him down and reminding him of what stage of progress we were at".

Marty, I think you did the right thing in firing your copywriter.
He should have been on task. You...
Forum: Copywriting 28th March 2009, 09:21 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 1,277
Posted By wrcato
Re: Fired! 50% (or less) up front ONLY - no matter who it is.

The Copywriter is the guy who brings in the money.

Anyway it doesn't surprise me in the least bit that most Copywriters gravitate towards writing exclusively for their own products.

That is my...
Forum: Copywriting 9th December 2008, 12:11 PM
Replies: 36
Views: 1,525
Posted By wrcato
Re: How to still write great copy if you have NO proof

Through your sales copy.
You do not have to have testimonials on your sales page to sell a product.
Forum: Copywriting 7th December 2008, 01:33 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 626
Posted By wrcato
Re: Review and critique my salespage please? Christmas Burnout has me in it's grip!

Headline probably needs to be tighten up
Like from this:Discover 82 ways To Give Meaningful Christmas Gifts That Your Loved Ones Will Treasure For A Lifetime

to this: Discover 82 ways To Give...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 7th December 2008, 11:49 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,375
Posted By wrcato
Re: Offline Cash Cow - Business Card Offer?

I use business cards with my picture on it. (Branding me). On the back of the card I have a headline that says: Free report 22 tips to ensure you may never need a plumber again.
Go To...
Forum: Copywriting 7th December 2008, 11:35 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 7,403
Posted By wrcato
Re: What is the BEST QUALITY Copywritting course out there

I got started in copywriting about three years ago because I love to write and share my experiences with others. I also like to sell. So copywriting is a match for myself.

I started out by...
Forum: Copywriting 7th December 2008, 10:34 AM
Replies: 36
Views: 1,525
Posted By wrcato
Re: How to still write great copy if you have NO proof

Testimonials are great to have. Allways opt for the "proof"
But if you don't have the proof you want for your sales copy get your page live first and get sales. After your customer has clicked the...
Forum: Copywriting 7th December 2008, 09:14 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 595
Posted By wrcato
Re: Would you like to be my partner in a Copywriting Services Business?

I think that is great. Are you going to use direct mail?
As sure as you are about the spanish markets, how do you really know?
Did you test this?
Have you tried a one page add in a newspaper or...
Forum: Copywriting 6th December 2008, 02:05 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 831
Posted By wrcato
Re: Critique my site please

Pull them in, prove your case and push them back.
Your copy is a little sloppy.
Write out as many features your product has. Then create the benefits to the features.

"No longer having to feel...
Forum: Copywriting 6th December 2008, 01:43 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 595
Posted By wrcato
Re: Would you like to be my partner in a Copywriting Services Business?

tell me more about your market. Are you only focused in the spanish market? or are you going international?

I don't know a lick of spanish but... I have spanish speaking freinds.

How good of a...
Forum: Ad Networks (CPM/CPL, Display) 30th November 2008, 12:51 PM
Replies: 42
Views: 2,918
Posted By wrcato
Re: Traffic swarm - how effective

I am a free member of traffic swarm, but I only use it to test headlines.
Forum: Copywriting 30th November 2008, 10:49 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 671
Posted By wrcato
Re: The term "copywriting"

Copy is a journalistic term. Copy, rag, etc.
Forum: Copywriting 30th November 2008, 10:39 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,202
Posted By wrcato
Re: Affiliate Landing Pages: NO ONE Talks About This & Its Pissing Me OFF!

Write your presell from your exsperiance with the product.
We cannot format for you. just write it using the formula that you already know.

Write out as many headlines as you can and test each...
Forum: Copywriting 30th November 2008, 10:15 AM
Replies: 51
Views: 1,796
Posted By wrcato
Re: If you have a sec, could you help with my first squeeze page?

"If You've Got An Email Address, You're About To Learn ' Most people have an email address.

Secrets' That Most People Will Never Know About Making Money Online..."
Work on this portion there is a...
Forum: Copywriting 30th November 2008, 09:56 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 687
Posted By wrcato
Re: Most important rule to effective copywriting

Customers and clients do not give a rats *** about you! they only care about what you can do for them.
Forum: Copywriting 30th November 2008, 09:54 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 687
Posted By wrcato
Re: Most important rule to effective copywriting

I disagree, any good marketer knows that the feature is what bring the customer into the copy and sells. the benefits are just icing on the cake.
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