Forum: Copywriting
2nd April 2012, 09:25 AM
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Replies: 21
Views: 926 |
Forum: Copywriting
1st April 2012, 04:11 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 926 Re: Please Review Revised Sales Page
He already admitted that he doesn't know who his prospect is. How's he going to talk to his prospect if he doesn't know who he's talking to?
He's already clear on his offer: He has a system that...
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Forum: Copywriting
1st April 2012, 10:59 AM
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Replies: 21
Views: 926 Re: Please Review Revised Sales Page
"The aim of marketing is to know and understand the customer so well the
product or service fits him and sells itself."
— Peter F. Drucker: was an influential writer and management consultant
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Forum: Copywriting
31st March 2012, 10:41 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 926 Re: Please Review Revised Sales Page
What Ewan said ^^:
"I'm trying to steer you in the direction of one problem, one solution."
When you try to speak to everyone, you speak to no one. You need to focus your letter to a specific...
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Forum: Copywriting
31st March 2012, 10:04 AM
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Replies: 21
Views: 926 Re: Please Review Revised Sales Page
Who are you talking to? Because your copy describes someone with ADD. And there's a pill for that.
If the prospect reader has been diagnosed with ADD, then they're either taking, or not taking,...
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Forum: Copywriting
30th March 2012, 06:11 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 850 Re: Sales Copy Please
My post wasn't scolding you, Luke. It was a template for you - and anyone else who makes a similar request - to use.
While I appreciate that you might not want to reveal the exact details of your...
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Forum: Copywriting
29th March 2012, 07:09 PM
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Replies: 20
Views: 850 Re: Sales Copy Please
Here you go, Luke; just fill in the blanks:
Greetings Warrior Copywriters! I am looking for a copywriter to help me with a project.
I plan on selling my [PRODUCT] about [SUBJECT] using a...
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Forum: Copywriting
9th November 2011, 01:36 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 614 |
Forum: Copywriting
8th November 2011, 01:39 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 882 |
Forum: Copywriting
8th November 2011, 01:36 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 1,812 |
Forum: Copywriting
7th November 2011, 02:31 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 1,812 |
Forum: Copywriting
7th November 2011, 02:01 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 1,812 |
Forum: Copywriting
7th November 2011, 01:44 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 1,812 |
Forum: Copywriting
7th November 2011, 01:36 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 1,812 |
Forum: Copywriting
7th November 2011, 01:28 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 1,812 |
Forum: Copywriting
7th November 2011, 12:52 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 882 Re: Time to take it. Criticism appreciated.
IMHO, it needs a rewrite.
Not wild about the headline. It's pretty bland, and implies that the course only takes 9 minutes to complete. If that's my motivation for reading on (that I can become a...
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Forum: Copywriting
7th November 2011, 12:28 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 1,812 |
Forum: Copywriting
16th April 2011, 12:33 PM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,257 Re: Crossing The FTC? Priceless
As far as I can make out from the language, that only applies if you're offering the product at a "reduced" price. So this would mostly affect those sellers alleging that the product is "usually"...
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Forum: Copywriting
15th April 2011, 03:39 PM
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Replies: 29
Views: 1,257 Re: Crossing The FTC? Priceless
I'm not sure how this affects information products, particularly bonus items. The FTC example is of a physical product, and it's pretty easy to source the actual cost of the item for a physical...
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Forum: Copywriting
6th March 2011, 06:00 PM
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Replies: 7
Views: 613 Re: Sales page feedback, please?
Couple of quick comments:
- Visually, the page looks like one long block of text. This makes the copy look dense and intimidating. I suggest you find some appropriate graphics to break up the...
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Forum: Copywriting
6th March 2011, 05:18 PM
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Replies: 53
Views: 3,447 |
Forum: Copywriting
6th March 2011, 05:08 PM
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Replies: 53
Views: 3,447 |
Forum: Copywriting
22nd February 2011, 12:36 AM
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Replies: 23
Views: 855 |
Forum: Copywriting
21st February 2011, 02:50 PM
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Replies: 23
Views: 855 |
Forum: Copywriting
21st February 2011, 12:15 PM
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Replies: 23
Views: 855 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
18th February 2011, 01:54 PM
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Replies: 570
Views: 30,350 |
Forum: Copywriting
18th February 2011, 01:02 PM
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Replies: 17
Views: 763 Re: Could you give me your opinion on this?
Re: PLPro:
The software appears to harvest emails.
How is this not spam? I ask, because the website doesn't answer.
Re: Nathan: Go to the end of your sales funnel. Why do you want these...
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Forum: Copywriting
18th February 2011, 12:43 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 681 Re: Sales Page Critique please?
Not being authentic will always limit you.
Stories are powerful selling tools. Look up "Wall St. Journal letter". One of the best-selling sales letters of all time. Tells a story to a crowd of...
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Forum: Copywriting
18th February 2011, 12:16 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 898 Re: Review my sales letter please!
Have you asked dog owners? It's all very well asking a bunch of Internet marketers to give random opinions, but the only opinions that matter are those of your target market.
As an Internet...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
18th February 2011, 11:56 AM
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Replies: 570
Views: 30,350 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
17th February 2011, 01:40 PM
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Replies: 570
Views: 30,350 |
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
15th February 2011, 09:58 AM
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Replies: 38
Views: 1,230 Re: Dear WSO and other product creators
@Edlewis: I second the suggestion to separate out your content if you feel you have to cover basic stuff. I've bought several products that did that, and it was a real time-saver. Plus, I really...
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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum
13th February 2011, 01:42 PM
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Replies: 230
Views: 12,922 Re: Product Launches Bombing
You don't think the name and reputation behind the product makes a difference in perception?
I do.
Let's say I have $100 to spend on a formal gown. I find a Vera Wang, in my size, for $97...
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Forum: Copywriting
11th February 2011, 07:58 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 963 |
Forum: Copywriting
11th February 2011, 07:56 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 963 |
Forum: Copywriting
11th February 2011, 07:36 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,082 |
Forum: Copywriting
10th February 2011, 05:25 PM
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Replies: 22
Views: 901 |
Forum: Copywriting
10th February 2011, 04:24 PM
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Replies: 22
Views: 901 |
Forum: Copywriting
10th February 2011, 04:14 PM
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Replies: 22
Views: 901 |
Forum: Copywriting
10th February 2011, 03:57 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 964 Re: Causing pain in the reader
That's the problem with taking one guy's approach and using it as a hard-and-fast guideline.
Kennedy has never written to affluent liberals. Kennedy is about as far from liberal as you can get....
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Forum: Copywriting
10th February 2011, 03:16 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 964 Re: Causing pain in the reader
Gonna have to disagree with you here:
On the whole, it is political suicide for an incumbent President to spread a message of doom and gloom. It is WAY too easy for the opposing side to...
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Forum: Copywriting
8th February 2011, 06:03 PM
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Replies: 23
Views: 1,510 |
Forum: Copywriting
8th February 2011, 05:38 PM
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Replies: 23
Views: 1,510 |
Forum: Copywriting
8th February 2011, 05:34 PM
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Replies: 23
Views: 1,510 |
Forum: Copywriting
8th February 2011, 02:35 PM
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Replies: 23
Views: 1,510 |
Forum: Copywriting
7th February 2011, 10:58 PM
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Replies: 23
Views: 949 |
Forum: Copywriting
7th February 2011, 10:51 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 964 Re: Causing pain in the reader
Think of it this way:
Your sales copy is a "story" you're telling the reader.
Every good story requires a conflict to drive the action towards the story's conclusion. Without conflict, there...
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Forum: Copywriting
7th February 2011, 10:27 AM
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Replies: 23
Views: 925 Re: When do I bring in the pros?
Whut he said. Plus:
Most important, in a high-competition niche, is to look at what you're selling. John Carlton, Dan Kennedy, Gary Bencivenga calibre 'ain't writing high-dollar sales letters for...
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Forum: Copywriting
7th February 2011, 09:06 AM
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Replies: 44
Views: 1,414 |
Forum: Copywriting
6th February 2011, 01:10 PM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,210 Re: Tattooholic site sales copy
One reason that immediately jumps out at me (after a quick scan of your competitors) is that I can't browse the designs. Tattoo people are visual types. They're going to want to see the goods.
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Forum: Copywriting
6th February 2011, 12:46 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 1,414 |
Forum: Copywriting
5th February 2011, 02:01 PM
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Replies: 35
Views: 2,090 |
Forum: Copywriting
5th February 2011, 01:59 PM
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Replies: 72
Views: 3,622 |
Forum: Copywriting
5th February 2011, 01:37 PM
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Replies: 37
Views: 1,245 Re: Oooh! It makes me MAD! (Rant)
You make some good points about ranting on a client publicly. And the general wimpiness trend. Still, vis a vis posting the work in question here:
To be a valid comparison, asafaria would have to...
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Forum: Copywriting
4th February 2011, 02:33 PM
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Replies: 37
Views: 1,245 Re: Oooh! It makes me MAD! (Rant)
Gotta disagree with the premise here.
As a professional copywriter, you SHOULD give a **** if your client sells 10 bananas or 10,000,000 as a result of your copy.
It's a matter of...
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Forum: Copywriting
4th February 2011, 02:12 PM
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Replies: 35
Views: 2,090 |