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Forum: Copywriting 28th September 2015, 03:32 AM
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Posted By Jason Kanigan
Re: 2nd Attempt At Copy. Can you Critique?

Headline:

Better to display (and force the reader to mentally spell out) the full "10,000" homes.

The headline doesn't speak directly to anyone. "Exposure"? Of what? To whom?

The penny looks...
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