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Forum: Copywriting 14th May 2013, 04:02 PM
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Forum: Copywriting 14th May 2013, 03:48 PM
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Re: Please Critique Sales Copy - Copy Edited May 14th

Where do you see sheet rock in Dude's copy?
Forum: Copywriting 14th May 2013, 03:11 PM
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Posted By Mr. Subtle
Re: Please Critique Sales Copy - Copy Edited May 14th

Dude... you're "Skilled Labour Leasing; Specializing in Concrete Construction" headline is so boring. Put a little spark of attention-getting energy into it...

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