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Forum: Copywriting 7th July 2010, 08:35 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,356
Posted By Collette
Re: First sales page - needs a critique from the experienced

No offense taken; personally, that is.

I didn't make that point in my posts because others before me had already done so. And I think credit should be given where credit is due.

All too...
Forum: Copywriting 7th July 2010, 08:22 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,356
Posted By Collette
Re: First sales page - needs a critique from the experienced

This here, below, from gamehaunt... this right here...

This. Is. PURE. GOLD.

You could write ALL the copy just using this comment ALONE.

I say this over and over again until I'm blue in...
Forum: Copywriting 6th July 2010, 10:11 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,356
Posted By Collette
Re: First sales page - needs a critique from the experienced

Brand only conveys trust if the trust has already been built.

So, for example, an Apple logo conveys a certain level of performance. Ask the thousands of die-hard Apple users. Why so?

Years...
Forum: Copywriting 6th July 2010, 10:06 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,356
Posted By Collette
Re: First sales page - needs a critique from the experienced

So did several other posters. Long before.

I'm just sayin'.
Forum: Copywriting 4th July 2010, 10:31 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,356
Posted By Collette
Re: First sales page - needs a critique from the experienced

Then your copy is confusing to the reader. Worse, you're setting yourself up for poor conversions/instant refund requests. Here's why:

In this day and age, when you say, "audiobook" on a web...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd July 2010, 11:38 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,356
Posted By Collette
Re: First sales page - needs a critique from the experienced

Here's your first problem:

[copy taken from your site]



Problem:
Your letter copy is about one thing; your product contents are about another; and - the killer - your product name...
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