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Forum: Copywriting 24th January 2018, 10:19 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 286
Posted By JohnMcCabe
Re: Which names do you like the most?

Then I would listen to those people and ignore the PickFu and AMT answers.

You may want to do a follow-up and ask them WHY they chose Talkyard.
Forum: Copywriting 23rd January 2018, 12:45 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 286
Posted By JohnMcCabe
Re: Which names do you like the most?

Quick question?

You mention online polls several times. Who is answering your poll questions?

Is it your ideal customers? Other marketers? Random strangers?

If it's the last two, just how...
Forum: Copywriting 13th January 2018, 12:29 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 286
Posted By JohnMcCabe
Re: Which names do you like the most?

You're worried that people will mistype a string of common words, but have no problem remembering to change an s to a z? I'd be worried, too, but the other way around.

Talkyard isn't bad,...
Forum: Copywriting 13th January 2018, 09:44 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 286
Posted By jessegilbert
Re: Which names do you like the most?

I like talkyard but I don't like the io.

I agree what you say about snobbish and words like top, elite etc...

But the whole theme of 'Creme of the crop' has it's origins in elitist mindset even...
Forum: Copywriting 13th January 2018, 08:58 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 286
Posted By jessegilbert
Re: Which names do you like the most?

I'd suggest exploring archetypes and appealing to your ideal user.

Polarizing or magnetically drawing in the people you want, based on some specific character trait, type or ideal.

There are a...
Forum: Copywriting 11th January 2018, 05:42 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 286
Posted By JohnMcCabe
Re: Which names do you like the most?

KajMagnus,

Why are you obsessing over finding a clever name?

I believe that you would be better off with a name that speaks to your ideal users. Effective Discussions is not bad....
Forum: Copywriting 11th January 2018, 05:20 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 286
Posted By Princess Balestra
Re: Which names do you like the most?

tbh I came over all aspirational — "rise to the top" ... "rise to the top" — an' I licked my creative lips over

CREAM

mmmm, yeah, that is how we wannit —easy expertisy, drippin' on in all over...
Forum: Copywriting 11th January 2018, 04:07 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 286
Posted By DABK
Re: Which names do you like the most?

I am biased, of course, but sunnysideup seems much better to me than any of yours. Of yours, the ones with z in them, are just atrocious to me.

squeezethelemon
monkeygab
yahoo (wait, that one's...
Forum: Copywriting 27th October 2017, 02:29 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
Posted By DABK
Re: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

So, it helps ensure good answers are not buried? that they are visible, and therefore, make the whole thing more attractive to potential members?

Then say so.

Yes, explain how it does it, but...
Forum: Copywriting 26th October 2017, 04:51 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
Posted By JohnMcCabe
Re: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

This is a good idea. You have additional data that your subconscious will keep working on as you attend to other things.

Even when writing copy, I usually do the final headline last. I'll have a...
Forum: Copywriting 19th October 2017, 08:37 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
Posted By DABK
Re: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

What do you mean, the software finds the good answers?

How does it do that?

Why is it better than me or you or some other person finding the good answers?

Who lost the good answers? ...
Forum: Copywriting 16th October 2017, 08:47 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
Posted By Zack Zeller
RE: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

Seems like a good idea...

1. Make it more specific. Shape the future is vague. Starting out with something specific will be more powerful. Maybe Shape The Future Of ____ (energy, homelessness,...
Forum: Copywriting 28th September 2017, 12:33 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
Posted By Alangile
RE: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

Before you start the project, you need to determine the target audience, build the content plan, determine what you want from the project, what benefits will your client receive? And remember ......
Forum: Copywriting 28th September 2017, 06:06 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
Posted By Eden A
Re: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

Hey,
I loved your Idea.
To give to the community.

But what exactly do you want to give?

How it will help others?

What exactly do you want to achieve with it?
Forum: Copywriting 28th September 2017, 04:27 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
Re: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

Now then...

You mentioned naming the software.

The "name" could tell the story highlighting the big benefit.

I appreciate you might not want to reveal the title.

But whatever you do -...
Forum: Copywriting 27th September 2017, 08:00 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
Posted By SARubin
Re: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

Good points John,

I was looking at it from a similar, albeit slightly different angle. Which brings us back to trying to figure out exactly what he wants to accomplish here.

I think the OP...
Forum: Copywriting 27th September 2017, 10:39 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
Posted By SARubin
Re: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

Well, Kaj Magnus, as helisell already mentioned, you might want to try focusing a little more on the benefits to your target audience. Have you even researched your target market yet? And learned...
Forum: Copywriting 26th September 2017, 06:44 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 397
Posted By helisell
Re: Critique this title & tag line? (online discussion platform)

Forget 'shape the future'

Just stick to the single biggest benefit you'll be giving.

What IS the biggest benefit you'll be giving?
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