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Forum: Copywriting 10th June 2010, 11:15 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 3,109
Posted By dtendrich
Re: Dan Kennedy's Ultimate Sales Letter book

I have trouble reading the Robert Collier Letter Book and going 2 pages without rushing to whatever project I'm working on, knee-deep in inspiration - whether it's an on-line or off-line project.
Forum: Copywriting 8th June 2010, 11:07 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 1,381
Posted By dtendrich
Re: My first copy attempt - would you please critique?


Your e-mail seems to really start here:

"Your talents are in very high demand. In fact, there are few professions available today that are so widely needed by almost every business in...
Forum: Copywriting 30th May 2010, 09:34 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,264
Posted By dtendrich
Re: Any chance of having a peek...

Hey there idb,

My first thoughts on your page are that it's a really great start. It doesn't have the feeling that so much copy does of trying to "cram" the message down my throat. It feels really...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th May 2010, 03:06 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 736
Posted By dtendrich
Re: What Happens When Your Passion Is In A Very Competative Niche


Go for it! If you're passionate, then it'll come through, and you'll be ahead of the curve with your content (which will be a step up from the 99% of people who are in that niche just to make...
Forum: Copywriting 17th April 2010, 12:53 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,652
Posted By dtendrich
Re: Not sure how much to charge client


I think you misunderstood me...

You're not doing it for free because you're afraid "the copy is no good."

You're giving it to him for free to generate the good will for him to give you...
Forum: Copywriting 13th April 2010, 10:24 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 856
Posted By dtendrich
Re: Critique my very first sales page ever......


The main benefit you describe here is "get more compliments and the feeling that comes with them."

I'd either drive this home even further - and paint some word images of situations people...
Forum: Copywriting 1st April 2010, 01:50 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,005
Posted By dtendrich
Re: Image -vs- Text Heading


Using a flash coding technique called "SIFR" you can have an image that is selectable as text. So you can have an h1 tag on your headline, but it shows up on the site as the cool font of your...
Forum: Copywriting 31st March 2010, 03:23 PM
Replies: 29
Views: 1,544
Posted By dtendrich
The "Thank You" Page That Gave Me a 25% Boost In Opt-Ins


I recently switched back to double opt-in, and was a little discouraged by the drop in retention.

And then...

I stumbled upon a warrior post about adding a "bonus" on your thank you...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 27th March 2010, 03:43 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 826
Posted By dtendrich
Re: Young Marketers...


As a young marketer myself, I've found that when you present yourself in a way that shows you really know your s*** and that you really care - people respect you and pay you what you're...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 27th March 2010, 03:24 PM
Replies: 78
Views: 2,675
Posted By dtendrich
Re: Which Niches Would You Refuse On Moral Grounds - No Matter How Profitable And Why

Prostitution - because I don't write copy for my competitors ;)

Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 27th March 2010, 03:20 PM
Replies: 79
Views: 3,319
Posted By dtendrich
Re: Illegal: Free Stuff to Collect Email Addresses for Undisclosed Sales Pitches

After someone joined my list I got the idea to pitch them a product.
Forum: Copywriting 26th March 2010, 07:02 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,016
Posted By dtendrich
Re: Selling the dream to the 'average joe'


I think the key to a product like this is either build a relationship via a blog/newsletter (so they trust you before seeing this over-the-top sales message)...


Take the road...
Forum: Copywriting 20th September 2009, 10:07 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 4,422
Posted By dtendrich
Re: Best swipe file collection of headlines, bullet points, transitions, closing ?

...I'm personally not a big fan of Lawrence's e-mails...

I'm on his list, because he has great content from time to time, but his e-mail headlines and content never really grab my attention. But I...
Forum: Copywriting 14th September 2009, 09:31 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 891
Posted By dtendrich
Re: Selling a Necessity but not a Commodity

According to David Garfinkel (and I'm sure he's not the first person to say this), the 7 reasons people buy are (not in order):

1. To save time
2. To save money
3. To save effort
4. To enhance...
Forum: Copywriting 14th September 2009, 03:05 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 781
Posted By dtendrich
Re: Ignoring the subject matter, if you can...


I think this person would make a great writer for charitable organizations, or for activist movements. The intro is very captivating, but I would just take out the line "I thought about you...
Forum: Copywriting 8th September 2009, 03:39 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 878
Posted By dtendrich
Tip My Simple Method for Getting New Clients

Hey there,

So this post is all about getting new clients. And you can do it right here, at your home computer, any time of day. It's worked for me with about a 40% conversion rate. Any time things...
Forum: Copywriting 6th September 2009, 06:54 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,301
Posted By dtendrich
Re: Critique Request: Unlocking Writer's Block (Hypnosis Product)

Hey P,

I think your headline is very benefit-driven, and for that it's great, but at the very end of your sales letter you have a sub-head that I think would make an even more powerful headline:
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