Forum: Copywriting
19th November 2012, 10:07 PM
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Replies: 44
Views: 38,384 |
Forum: Copywriting
17th October 2012, 06:59 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 1,308 |
Forum: Copywriting
17th October 2012, 05:35 PM
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Replies: 11
Views: 1,308 |
Forum: Copywriting
16th October 2012, 09:09 AM
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Replies: 26
Views: 1,196 Re: What do you think about my sales page...
I think your copy's pretty bad... but at $137, you don't need to be able to write well to get clients.
If you ever want to make real money you're going to have to get a lot better. But the clients...
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Forum: Copywriting
9th October 2012, 12:34 PM
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Replies: 22
Views: 1,779 Re: Ramblings
Marcus, you sound more washed up than the people you describe.
Fact is, whether you agree with me or not, it matters not which to me as a good old friend of yours your hard and fast opinions don't...
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Forum: Copywriting
9th October 2012, 02:48 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 975 |
Forum: Copywriting
4th October 2012, 06:37 AM
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Replies: 40
Views: 2,882 Re: Disturbing trend in the copywriting world
I met John in Florida last year. From what I remember, he co-owns a fast growing financial publisher and doubt he's hurting for money... so it wouldn't make sense that this article is a sales piece...
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Forum: Copywriting
2nd October 2012, 08:04 AM
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Replies: 18
Views: 1,183 |
Forum: Copywriting
2nd October 2012, 03:10 AM
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Replies: 18
Views: 1,183 |
Forum: Copywriting
20th September 2012, 06:09 AM
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Replies: 68
Views: 2,893 |
Forum: Copywriting
13th September 2012, 08:30 AM
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Replies: 20
Views: 7,211 |
Forum: Copywriting
18th August 2012, 08:41 AM
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Replies: 40
Views: 2,882 Re: Disturbing trend in the copywriting world
@ Joe Ditzel - i JUST hired some writers... waiting for them to finish the copy....so not sure...
did work with one writer in the past who killed it for me, but i think my copy was SO bad back...
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Forum: Copywriting
17th August 2012, 07:43 AM
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Replies: 40
Views: 2,882 Re: Disturbing trend in the copywriting world
this was an awesome article.
finally you get to see things from our side (the customer who's shelling out all this money).
Of course, many copywriters are going to disagree, but the article...
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Forum: Copywriting
29th June 2012, 11:28 AM
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Replies: 43
Views: 4,560 Re: Opportunity: $25,000 plus royalties!
Well the AWAI/NewMarket challenge is for health, so it wouldn't work at all. I think Rick was just posting it as a good example of an acquisition package.
Apocalypse was written at least year and...
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Forum: Copywriting
27th June 2012, 06:08 PM
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Replies: 43
Views: 4,560 |
Forum: Copywriting
10th November 2011, 10:37 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 968 Re: Magalog received today
You can be sure the target group isn't nearly as worried about tasteless advertising as they are about moving their bowels regularly.
It's a 20-page magalog. How can you make a statement like...
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Forum: Copywriting
10th November 2011, 09:42 PM
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Replies: 10
Views: 671 |
Forum: Copywriting
9th November 2011, 11:08 PM
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Replies: 14
Views: 968 Re: Magalog received today
Hey Alex,
It's a control by Carline Anglade-Cole.
There was another thread about it a while ago:
http://www.warriorforum.com/copywriting-forum/235035-wanna-go-poop-every-day.html
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Forum: Copywriting
8th November 2011, 03:46 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 1,158 |
Forum: Copywriting
7th November 2011, 02:31 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 1,833 |
Forum: Copywriting
7th November 2011, 02:30 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 1,833 |
Forum: Copywriting
7th November 2011, 02:06 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 1,833 |
Forum: Copywriting
7th November 2011, 01:34 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 1,833 |
Forum: Copywriting
7th November 2011, 01:16 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 889 Re: Time to take it. Criticism appreciated.
Same thing Angel said, glaring issues are ZERO proof or credibility. Weak overall though IMO.
Although I think I'm a fairly experienced copywriter, and therefor have a snobbish attitude toward...
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Forum: Copywriting
7th November 2011, 12:52 PM
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Replies: 18
Views: 889 Re: Time to take it. Criticism appreciated.
IMHO, it needs a rewrite.
Not wild about the headline. It's pretty bland, and implies that the course only takes 9 minutes to complete. If that's my motivation for reading on (that I can become a...
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Forum: Copywriting
7th November 2011, 12:28 PM
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Replies: 50
Views: 1,833 |
Forum: Copywriting
7th November 2011, 08:55 AM
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Replies: 18
Views: 889 |
Forum: Copywriting
4th November 2011, 02:01 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 766 Re: ebook and sales page
Here's "Read This Or Die"
http://www.directresponsemarketingforum.com/images/jim_rutz_ad.pdf (not my link and it's a 23Mb file...)
And here's "For Every Illness, There Is A Country Where It...
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Forum: Copywriting
4th November 2011, 11:46 AM
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Replies: 46
Views: 1,027 |
Forum: Copywriting
4th November 2011, 11:35 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 736 Re: How Do YOU Write Copy?
After I have completed my research and I have given my subconscious mind time to digest the research material, I spend a fair amount of time looking over my relevant swipe files.
As I review my...
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Forum: Copywriting
4th November 2011, 11:18 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 736 Re: How Do YOU Write Copy?
Or have another cup of coffee.
Go back to the desk and see if it's all brilliantly written.
No?
Dammit.
Ahh well you've just got to bang away on the keyboards.
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Forum: Copywriting
4th November 2011, 11:08 AM
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Replies: 7
Views: 761 If you need a little inspiration of...
The Truth About Abs: How To Make $1,000,000 Profit Per Month with Digital Products (Plus: Noah Kagan results) (http://www.fourhourworkweek.com/blog/2011/11/02/the-truth-about-abs-mike-geary/)
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Forum: Copywriting
4th November 2011, 10:18 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 736 Re: How Do YOU Write Copy?
Like Steve, I use a combination of both processes...
but I still haven't figured out how to get the copy to write itself!...:rolleyes:
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Forum: Copywriting
4th November 2011, 09:59 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 736 Re: How Do YOU Write Copy?
Ah yes!!
I nearly forgot about that - will have to edit my post as I forgot to mention about creating an avatar - thanks for reminding me :o
I write a lengthy one and then write to this...
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Forum: Copywriting
4th November 2011, 09:18 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 736 Re: How Do YOU Write Copy?
Well I was trying to type up how I write copy.
But thank goodness Arfa and Angel have done it for me.
I basically do what they both do.
Steve
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Forum: Copywriting
4th November 2011, 07:49 AM
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Replies: 13
Views: 736 How Do YOU Write Copy?
This is more for the benefit of newbies...
A discussion the other day with a fellow copywriter got me thinking. We were talking about how we write copy and I realized we both had extremely...
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Forum: Copywriting
4th November 2011, 07:38 AM
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Replies: 46
Views: 1,027 |
Forum: Copywriting
4th November 2011, 06:30 AM
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Replies: 46
Views: 6,340 Re: The Ideal Copywriting Book For Beginners?
I just finished reading Ray Edwards' Writing Riches...an excellent book for a copywriter.
His chapter on writing bullets is worth the price of the book.
Some good insights on email marketing...
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Forum: Copywriting
4th November 2011, 12:48 AM
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Replies: 46
Views: 1,027 |
Forum: Copywriting
3rd November 2011, 10:39 AM
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Replies: 14
Views: 707 Re: I Changed My Copy!
I share Angel's first reaction. And his fear of clowns.
The Rich Jerk was a marketing insult comic.
Your insults simply offend, without the comic sub-text.
--- Ross
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd November 2011, 09:54 AM
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Replies: 4
Views: 594 |
Forum: Copywriting
3rd November 2011, 08:14 AM
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Replies: 46
Views: 6,340 |
Forum: Copywriting
2nd November 2011, 08:18 PM
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Replies: 21
Views: 948 |
Forum: Copywriting
2nd November 2011, 02:07 PM
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Replies: 42
Views: 9,609 |
Forum: Copywriting
26th October 2011, 02:02 PM
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Replies: 42
Views: 9,609 |
Forum: Copywriting
26th October 2011, 10:48 AM
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Replies: 42
Views: 9,609 |
Forum: Copywriting
26th October 2011, 06:06 AM
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Replies: 11
Views: 700 Re: How can I improve my Slaes Page?
Your copy isn't good... but that's not why it's bombing.
It's converting poorly because the title is about $5k - $7k per month...
And the WSO is about outsourcing.
You're attracting people...
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Forum: Copywriting
26th October 2011, 06:04 AM
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Replies: 22
Views: 800 Re: What Kind of Proof Factors Work The Best?
A lot of these are, as your sleeve reference suggests, just tricks.
Testimonials are notoriously poorly done. Don't count testimonials out as undiscovered territory. Even using first and last...
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Forum: Copywriting
25th October 2011, 09:56 AM
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Replies: 14
Views: 816 Re: Practice
To improve your skills, Gary Bencivenga ,one of the greatest copywriters now retired, says that you spend a minimum of 3 hours daily practicing your skill.
I guess you can start by...
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Forum: Copywriting
22nd October 2011, 10:09 PM
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Replies: 19
Views: 684 Re: critique my site
You have a chance.
First, though, you must understand the level of sophistication the weight loss market is in and tailor your message appropriately.
(Weight loss is at the 4th level, and I...
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Forum: Copywriting
22nd October 2011, 07:58 PM
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Replies: 12
Views: 2,097 |
Forum: Copywriting
15th October 2011, 05:50 AM
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Replies: 10
Views: 1,173 |
Forum: Copywriting
10th October 2011, 11:21 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 2,842 |
Forum: Copywriting
10th October 2011, 01:22 PM
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Replies: 15
Views: 2,555 Re: Free Copywriting?
Horizon,
We all started with zilch experience but a huge desire to get good at copywriting.
Try and not offer "free" copywriting.
Although the client wont be paying you - they have the costs...
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Forum: Copywriting
8th October 2011, 10:09 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 2,842 |
Forum: Copywriting
30th September 2011, 12:43 AM
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Replies: 15
Views: 976 Re: My first sales copy: wish me luck
Big problem #1: No credibility... no reason why I should listen to you... and no reason to buy this course over any of the thousand similar offers out there.
What makes YOU qualified to teach me...
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