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Forum: Copywriting 19th May 2011, 01:49 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 638
Posted By Sebastion
Re: Please review my salespage

I think it's well written. Didn't make me wanna buy anything and I didn't finish reading because, "Looks like spam." But all sales pages look like spam when it's not something "I" want, or need...
Forum: Copywriting 16th February 2011, 02:20 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 671
Posted By Sebastion
Re: Sales Page Critique please?

I'm pretty new to copywriting, but here are my concerns.

Your headline screams...Bull****. People aren't that dumb. I mean..they are. But...why wouldn't the weight loss industry want me to know?...
Forum: Copywriting 13th February 2011, 12:32 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 732
Posted By Sebastion
The terror of being new. What I've learned from my first sales page

Research, notes, research, notes, research, coffee...Joy!!! $$$

You write 4000 words in one day and go "Yes!" Rest for the night...peacefully.

You get up, read the first 400 words and...
Forum: Copywriting 17th January 2011, 07:25 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 625
Posted By Sebastion
Re: I got a copy writing job!

Closed the deal. Plus commission. Rent is covered. Thanks warrior forum!

BTW all my money is going back into training. I'll share what I learn.
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