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Forum: Copywriting 23rd February 2010, 04:49 AM
Replies: 36
Views: 1,875
Posted By David Raybould
Re: A Copywriter Turns 40...

Brian I love this post.

Happy belated birthday my mainest
man in Miami...

-David Raybould

PS- Does anyone else wish we had more
well-written, thoughtful posts like that
in here,...
Forum: Copywriting 23rd February 2010, 01:25 AM
Replies: 36
Views: 1,875
Posted By BrianMcLeod
A Copywriter Turns 40...

My friend and fellow copywriter Kevin Rogers
was born one day after I was, on Feb. 23rd.

He sent me a funny happy birthday message
that said, "40... is the new 39."

Now, Kevin's a riot - and...
Forum: Copywriting 22nd September 2009, 03:08 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,055
Posted By csgcsg
How to Write a Million Dollar Sales Letter

I have listened to many professionals and attended seminar on sales letter writing and will be sharing 23 tips that will skyrocket your products or services you are promoting.

1.Use no more...
Forum: Copywriting 25th July 2009, 10:23 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,568
Posted By Collette
Before You Ask For A Critique *rant*

Please spend some time on your copy. Do not waste other people's time by asking for critiques on copy that you've "just thrown together".

I've noticed quite a few threads asking for critiques of...
Forum: Copywriting 9th June 2009, 04:09 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 703
Posted By David Raybould
Re: My first launch and salesletter , please give me your feedback

Hi Tom...

The main issue here isn't going to
be the copy... it's the language.

Make sure you get your next draft
proof-read by a natural English
speaker.

Also, for your next headline,...
Forum: Copywriting 8th June 2009, 11:39 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 703
Posted By Hesster
Re: My first launch and salesletter , please give me your feedback

I agree about the headline. It's way too wordy and doesn't flow well. It made me tired just reading it. The reader probably has no idea who this Lacatus guy is, or why they should care. It would be...
Forum: Copywriting 8th June 2009, 08:28 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 703
Posted By procopywriter
Re: My first launch and salesletter , please give me your feedback

I get the sense you're not really comfortable with English. Is English your second language?

I say that because there are a lot of little things that just don't make sense and are going to leave...
Forum: Copywriting 8th June 2009, 07:40 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 703
Posted By travlinguy
Re: My first launch and salesletter , please give me your feedback

I'm not sure that insider secrets are something dog people relate to. It works well for money, marketing, gambling, and lots of other stuff, but dogs, I'd say not. I realize you're invested in a...
Forum: Copywriting 8th June 2009, 03:55 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 703
Posted By Chris Ramsey
Re: My first launch and salesletter , please give me your feedback

Before I get too far into this... Your headline needs serious work. It's far too long and doesn't create emotion at all.

1. Don't use the word ebook. People don't trust them.
2. Why should I care...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 7th June 2009, 07:15 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 946
Posted By Loren Woirhaye
Re: Warrior Special Offers Forum - WHY?

There is gold in the WSO forum. You need to get clear with
yourself about what direction you want to go with your activity.

I seldom buy "money making plans" anymore. Been there, done
that. ...
Forum: Search Engine Optimization 25th May 2009, 11:04 AM
Replies: 59
Views: 5,714
Posted By Muhammad Hassan
Here's how to use a * (asterisk) to find hot niches in seconds - step-by-step

Google has a search feature where you can use a * (asterisk). This is known as a wild card. It represents one or more words.

For example, a search for dog training * tells Google to search for any...
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