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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th November 2010, 02:05 PM
Replies: 14
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Posted By Oxbloom
Re: Sales Page Critique - Drum.com - PLZ Help!

Hey George,

I don't know how familiar you are with the subforums of this site. But there is a copywriting forum here where plenty of talented copywriters hang out.

But more importantly,...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th November 2010, 02:02 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 543
Posted By cindybidar
Re: Sales Page Critique - Drum.com - PLZ Help!

I have to agree with Oxbloom on this one. If you spent six figures on the domain name, why, oh why, are you writing your own copy? Seriously. Hire a pro. There are plenty of talented copywriters...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th November 2010, 12:56 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 543
Posted By Oxbloom
Re: Sales Page Critique - Drum.com - PLZ Help!

Even with the missing words in the headline forgiven for the moment, that's still maybe the worst headline I've ever seen.

A headline ought to grab a reader who opens the fricking page by accident...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th November 2010, 12:26 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 543
Posted By FrankieTP2
Re: Sales Page Critique - Drum.com - PLZ Help!

I'm no sales letter expert... but right off the bat I can spot a big mistake "Before we start, let me what this course is not..."

It should say something like "Before we start, let me tell you...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th November 2010, 12:21 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 543
Posted By chino007
Re: Sales Page Critique - Drum.com - PLZ Help!

I see a very proffesional graphic desing, good for you.
I have not reviewed in detail but i don't see you saying how long does it take your program, how many steps, techniques are you offering,...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 30th November 2010, 11:31 AM
Replies: 14
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Posted By getsmartt
Re: Sales Page Critique - Drum.com - PLZ Help!

Great Domain!

I assume you are still testing this as it says at the bottom
"Sorry, We're Closed to New Members!"

yet you have only sold 67 of your 500 courses.

I would also like to see some...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 4th June 2009, 01:07 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 939
Posted By Droopy Dawg
Re: New Internet Marketing Magazine!

I can send you a different "page turn" sound effect if you'd like... like this one.

Digital Media (http://www.clever-web-solutions.com/PageTurn/PageTurn.cfm)

The mag looks great BTW :)
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