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Forum: Copywriting 10th March 2012, 09:30 PM
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Posted By debml
Re: Ski Champion game app description

I don't feel like your copy illustrates that you are familiar with ski racing.

One way you can draw me in... make me feel like I'm a racer. Regardless of the type of race - downhill, slalom, or...
Forum: Copywriting 10th March 2012, 12:04 PM
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Posted By weheartcontent
Re: Ski Champion game app description

This was what I was going to say. I think it would be a good idea to add something like you know, how some people have failed to beat this level or reach a certain amount of points and you challenge...
Forum: Copywriting 9th March 2012, 03:08 PM
Replies: 11
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Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: Ski Champion game app description

Nicholas, this is NOT the language of snowboarders and hard-core skiers. The cool kids speak lingo similar to surfers - "Fully sick"..."Gnarly"..."bad"..."ripping"..."white off" etc.

Visit some...
Forum: Copywriting 9th March 2012, 01:03 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,969
Posted By JoshClick
Re: Ski Champion game app description

nicolasgb,

Actually I think this is a pretty decent piece of copy. It just needs some minor tweaking. I would pay especially careful attention to word choice since you have a very short amount...
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