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Forum: Copywriting 27th September 2012, 06:39 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 1,057
Posted By nicolasgb
Re: Which Among These Is The Best Title In Your View ?

I voted #1 because I like the words "My power strategy".
Forum: Copywriting 27th September 2012, 06:36 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 638
Posted By nicolasgb
Re: Square Planet game AppStore description

Hi again everyone, could you help me improve my copy?
Do let me know if there is something wrong with my post, or if there's anything I can do to help in return.
Thanks in advance !
Nicolas
Forum: Copywriting 25th September 2012, 11:29 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 638
Posted By nicolasgb
Square Planet game AppStore description

Hi everyone !

Could you help with a critique for my copy? It is the App Store description of Square Planet, my company's latest iPhone game.

Some context first :
Earlier this year, the forum...
Forum: Copywriting 11th March 2012, 01:44 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,969
Posted By nicolasgb
Re: Ski Champion game app description

Thanks, Deb ! I'll make sure to include that.

Can you think of other examples of language that would draw you in ? As a former racer your advice would be extremely valuable.

I feel like the...
Forum: Copywriting 10th March 2012, 02:24 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,969
Posted By nicolasgb
Re: Ski Champion game app description

Hi everyone, and thanks again for the truly helpful feedback. I'm quite impressed.

I reworked my copy accordingly and updated the original post.

Would you mind giving me your opinion ?

Do...
Forum: Copywriting 10th March 2012, 09:44 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,969
Posted By nicolasgb
Re: Ski Champion game app description

Hmm that's really strange I only see 3 buttons
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Maybe I need more mileage on the forums until I get access to this feature
Forum: Copywriting 10th March 2012, 08:36 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,969
Posted By nicolasgb
Re: Ski Champion game app description

Josh and "The Copy Nazi", thanks a lot !
With your feedback, I will now be able to rework the weak bits pointed out by Josh, and add some skiing lingo -great suggestion.
I'll be sure to post an...
Forum: Copywriting 9th March 2012, 10:42 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,969
Posted By nicolasgb
Ski Champion game app description

Hello everyone!

This is my first post on these forums, although I have been lurking in the shadows for a while.

Could you help with a critique for my copy?

I need to write a description for...
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