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Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 10th September 2021, 10:45 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 308
Posted By Bkelly301
Re: How to sell LARGE downloadable items from a WordPress site?

This is great stuff!! Thank you
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 17th October 2018, 07:00 PM
Replies: 68
Views: 1,434
Posted By nicheblogger75
Re: Be Smart .Take an office or public place .

Unless you do a lot of local business marketing, there is no need to have an outside office. Even most local business marketers work out of their homes.

Why would you want to straddle yourself...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 17th August 2018, 08:30 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 650
Posted By ryanbiddulph
Re: To all Newbies - This forum is for marketing to you. You are a dollar sign and nothing else

One of the best lessons you will learn in life wEo8456cAm: you have all the help you could ever need around you, when you open up to it :)

Ryan
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 5th June 2018, 05:23 PM
Replies: 134
Views: 5,344
Posted By webbie
Re: Giving up after 11 years

"I have watched countless YouTube videos, read hundred of articles, and done hours upon hours of research"

If that's what you thought you needed to do to make money then I'm sorry for you.
...
Forum: Copywriting 8th September 2017, 11:34 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 576
Posted By GordonJ
Here is YOUR problem George...

You seem to want validation. Why not use what you have, pick one, and test it out? How much more input/feedback do you want/need?

The PROBLEM as you state it is: CONFUSION, and your target...
Forum: Copywriting 8th September 2017, 10:35 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 576
Posted By yukon
Re: [Copy critique] Give me your expert opinion

Dump the confusing image/questions in the header and move the bullet points above the fold.
Change Try [PRODUCT NAME] for 7 Days, for $1 to a checkout form or subscription form (above the fold).
...
Forum: Copywriting 31st August 2017, 07:29 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 576
Posted By ryanbiddulph
RE: [Copy critique] Give me your expert opinion

Looks solid to me George.

I love the layout.

As for the copy, I'd say, you hit on all key pointers. Just re-read and get clearer and clearer on your copy, and you'll either keep as is, or make...
Forum: Copywriting 31st August 2017, 04:55 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 576
Posted By Ellaa
RE: [Copy critique] Give me your expert opinion

I Like For The Headline To Start Out..
Sort of Like...
Need A Fast Profitable Wordpress Site In Minutes
Get Fast Profitable Wordpress Websites In Minutes
Or Try ( )...
Forum: Copywriting 30th August 2017, 06:25 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 576
Posted By drmani
Re: [Copy critique] Give me your expert opinion

Hey George

It looks nice - and sounds quite an interesting product. And yes, your description is easy to understand.

Just thought up some copy you might like for the headline and lead...

.
...
Forum: Copywriting 30th August 2017, 05:09 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 576
Posted By helisell
Re: [Copy critique] Give me your expert opinion

OK Number One

The headline is very weak.

'Build profitable wp sites faster'

So What?

How much faster?
Forum: Mind Warriors 24th September 2015, 01:38 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 934
Posted By ryanbiddulph
Re: Rejection Sucks

Hi CJ,

We live in abundance, so rejection is not rejection, but preference. Meaning on a deeper level, you prefer better matches....and the individual who doesn't buy from you, feels this belief....
Forum: Copywriting 8th July 2015, 10:57 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,910
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: Give me your expert opinion on these two headlines

Allow me to be The Grammar Nazi for a moment. Correct English is "Newbie-Friendly WordPress Plugin Creates Amazon Money Sites in 49 Seconds"
Forum: Copywriting 8th July 2015, 10:12 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,910
Posted By Raydal
Re: Give me your expert opinion on these two headlines

"Newbie Friendly WordPress Plugin Creates Amazon Money Sites in 49 Seconds"

-Ray Edwards
Forum: Copywriting 8th July 2015, 09:46 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,910
Posted By GomerMagtibay
Re: Give me your expert opinion on these two headlines

Using the headline checker at Advanced Marketing Institute (http://www.aminstitute.com/headline), I have found out that the first headline is the best. It has an Emotional Marketing Value of 60%,...
Forum: Copywriting 8th July 2015, 08:10 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,910
Posted By chrisnos
Re: Give me your expert opinion on these two headlines

Your headline itself is good, the only problem with it is that it's vague. People want to know when they land on the page exactly what benefits they're going to get from reading it, and why it's...
Forum: Copywriting 7th July 2015, 08:55 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,910
Posted By mikhailblaze
Re: Give me your expert opinion on these two headlines

Dude, those are wayyyy too long and pretty complicated. I suggest editing them to make them sound simpler and easy to understand. Remember, users love shorter and easy to digest content nowadays.
...
Forum: Copywriting 7th July 2015, 02:19 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,910
Posted By Paul Hooper-Kelly
Re: Give me your expert opinion on these two headlines

Hi Guys,

Despite what's been said here, it's educational to see the real heavy hitters in the copy writing world, such as Dan Kennedy and John Carlton, both use long headlines.

Dan Kennedy's...
Forum: Copywriting 2nd July 2015, 06:57 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,910
Posted By yragcom1
Re: Give me your expert opinion on these two headlines

Yeah, I like #2, but I'd change the word "autopilot" to "automatic". My two cents.
Forum: Copywriting 29th June 2015, 10:31 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,910
Posted By The IM Institute
Re: Give me your expert opinion on these two headlines

This was my exact thought even before reading the comments of others.

They both just kind of 'miss', and don't really read very well.

My thoughts. :)
Forum: Copywriting 29th June 2015, 10:20 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,910
Posted By Alex Cohen
Re: Give me your expert opinion on these two headlines

George,

#2 is better by far.

"Building up to" and "Virtually" take the punch out of #1. Plus #1 reads a bit awkwardly.

Put ellipses between the two sentences in #2 instead of the period.
...
Forum: Copywriting 29th June 2015, 07:26 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,910
Posted By EzraWinter
Re: Give me your expert opinion on these two headlines

Yeah, both are way too long and complicated. You need something shorter like:

"Daily Sales on Amazon? Even Newbies can do it with this new Wordpress plugin."

Sidenote: Obv. I'm not a lawyer but...
Forum: Copywriting 29th June 2015, 06:16 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,910
Posted By Cam Connor
Re: Give me your expert opinion on these two headlines

George, are these for the same product? The first one doesn't even mention that it's a WP plugin, so if it is, that's pretty important to mention.

Neither of them are great.
Forum: Copywriting 22nd May 2015, 01:27 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,858
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Tip Not strictly COPYWRITING but WOW - great piece of writing

Confessions of a Google Spammer (http://inbound.org/post/view/confessions-of-a-google-spammer)
Forum: Wanted - Members Looking To Hire You 12th April 2015, 12:23 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 592
Posted By Vrs
Re: [12 Reviewers Wanted] WP plugin creates memorable presentations that get traffic

Sent you an email.
Forum: Wanted - Members Looking To Hire You 8th April 2015, 10:58 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 592
Posted By Ouroboros
Re: [12 Reviewers Wanted] WP plugin creates memorable presentations that get traffic

George,

I remember the first plugin of yours I was exposed to back in late 2010, a youtube plugin that was quite impressive as I recall. I've used several of your plugins over the years since and...
Forum: Wanted - Members Looking To Hire You 6th April 2015, 09:55 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 592
Posted By Doug
Re: [12 Reviewers Wanted] Unique WordPress plugin

Most interesting ...PM sent George
Forum: Mind Warriors 29th January 2015, 03:04 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 2,967
Posted By shawnlebrun
A Personal Message That I Hope Helps Even One Person

This past October... I was diagnosed with skin cancer.

It was spreading so fast... they had to move up my surgery
to remove it... because new cancerous spots were growing fast.

So what I did...
Forum: Off Topic Forum 31st December 2014, 06:57 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,905
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Yo b*tch!

For my money... this is the spot of the past year -

(Mouse over and click)


http://completeidiots.squarespace.com/storage/XDBMg.gif (http://youtu.be/ovqM72em1dA)
Forum: Copywriting 30th December 2014, 02:54 AM
Replies: 44
Views: 3,623
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: An open letter to all DR copywriters who persist in believing content writing is not copywriting

Note that he says "content marketing" not "content writing". So we're still talking copywriting (as I see it) with a new name.

Well you are - but its a sneak attack. Who's the master at this?...
Forum: Copywriting 29th December 2014, 04:46 AM
Replies: 44
Views: 3,623
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: An open letter to all DR copywriters who persist in believing content writing is not copywriting

Yes, yes I know I said "this is my last post" à la Max5ty some time back...but I can't help but comment after seeing some of the above. Exactly. As for the so-called "Mod queue" - laugh out loud....
Forum: Copywriting 7th December 2014, 08:08 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,010
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Why People With Brain Damage Make Better Copywriters

Over 1000 Proven Headlines You Can Adapt. George Katsoudas - "The Greek Geek" - pointed me to this collection. And it's a beauty. I love playing with headlines - don't you?
...
Forum: Copywriting 4th December 2014, 01:21 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 3,176
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: Dare I Ask...? Yet Another WFH Critque Thread

Young "Rock Star" Copywriter Is Giving YOU A One-Time Chance To Get Crowd-Pulling Copy At A HUGE Discount

Uh - you're a so-called "Rockstar copywriter" - that no one's heard of.

...
Forum: Copywriting 15th November 2014, 12:31 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,184
Posted By Mark Pescetti
Re: [Critique request] Please give me your expert and BRUTALLY HONEST opinion.

Listen to Angie and Mal.

This exercise isn't working.

If you believe in your product... and you think it's better than some of the other WP plugins out there, hire a writer that can hit you a...
Forum: Copywriting 15th November 2014, 02:40 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,184
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: [Critique request] Please give me your expert and BRUTALLY HONEST opinion.

Terrible.

Where's the "Big Idea" - the "hook"?

It's not this lame head - "Simple WordPress plugin attracts more traffic, optins and sales, in a NEW way - even if you're a complete beginner..."...
Forum: Copywriting 14th November 2014, 04:59 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,184
Posted By Bill Jeffels
Re: [Critique request] Please give me your expert and BRUTALLY HONEST opinion.

You have some real issues with the pre-headline, headline and subhead. First the font sizes need to be restructured.

And what I mean is the pre head should be smaller than the headline. ...
Forum: Copywriting 14th November 2014, 10:04 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,184
Posted By angiecolee
Re: [Critique request] Please give me your expert and BRUTALLY HONEST opinion.

I think you're starting to get it.

The best way to get this page in shape? Find someone whose opinions you value/trust, and try to work out an arrangement where they help you get it into the best...
Forum: Copywriting 13th November 2014, 07:31 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,184
Posted By justinmahar
Re: [Critique request] Please give me your expert and BRUTALLY HONEST opinion.

George, have a look at these two videos by Eben Pagan.

"Rules for Online Marketing Beginners"
"7 Rules For Great Marketing Design"

... and take notes.

Then apply them.

Doing this will...
Forum: Copywriting 13th November 2014, 06:40 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,184
Posted By WD Mino
Re: [Critique request] Please give me your expert and BRUTALLY HONEST opinion.

Hi George,

Don't start your letter with a question. You lost me immediately.

Because you are needing to show immediately what makes your product any different than the tons of others out there...
Forum: Copywriting 13th November 2014, 10:04 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,184
Posted By angiecolee
Re: [Critique request] Please give me your expert and BRUTALLY HONEST opinion.

Quick impression:

Didn't even realize the headline was a headline. Didn't look at the big green bar until my internal voice asked why on earth you lead in with a video.

I'm looking purely above...
Forum: Copywriting 12th November 2014, 10:14 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,184
Posted By elmo033057
Re: [Critique request] Please give me your expert and BRUTALLY HONEST opinion.

He's right. You have to do thorough home work first. Explore every benefit, write and rewrite subheads and headline until it's as close to perfect as possible. It should take you at least a week or...
Forum: Copywriting 12th November 2014, 12:45 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,184
Posted By ewenmack
Re: [Critique request] Please give me your expert and BRUTALLY HONEST opinion.

Don't see how you have.

Very light, as if you are scrambling to
come up with anything to make do.

LeadPages and LeadBoxes have set the benchmark
for getting optins. I really don't know how...
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2014, 09:37 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,184
Posted By maximus242
Re: [Critique request] Please give me your expert and BRUTALLY HONEST opinion.

I think you lack a compelling headline to make people want to read your ad.

A headline is like an advertisement for your advertisement. Why should they read your ad in the first place?

If your...
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2014, 06:27 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,184
Posted By justinmahar
Re: [Critique request] Please give me your expert and BRUTALLY HONEST opinion.

Also, your headline (at the time of this post) says "STRANGE WordPress plugin WOWs your visitors - and generates opt-ins and sales like crazy, in just 1 minute..."

What's strange about it? I'm...
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2014, 06:19 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,184
Posted By justinmahar
Re: [Critique request] Please give me your expert and BRUTALLY HONEST opinion.

Hey George, nice work on the landing page.

After I read the headline, I was left wondering... What takes 1 minute? To install it? Set it up? Configure it?

This benefit is in your product...
Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2014, 01:19 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,184
Posted By ewenmack
Re: [Critique request] Please give me your expert and BRUTALLY HONEST opinion.

George, why should I buy your plugin when I can buy LeadPages proven split tested optin pages,
hosted by them, fastest loading in the industry...not to mention continually split tested
and new...
Forum: Copywriting 10th November 2014, 06:02 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,184
Posted By elmo033057
Re: [Critique request] Please give me your expert and BRUTALLY HONEST opinion.

George,

Don't focus on the story as much as the benefits. Take your product and list every benefit you can think of first; that is a super, important step. You can't override that or skimp on...
Forum: Copywriting 10th November 2014, 05:29 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,184
Posted By Mark Pescetti
Re: [Critique request] Please give me your expert and BRUTALLY HONEST opinion.

I agree with the above. Everything before introducing the product came across like, "I quit my job, was in-debt, didn't know how to make money online... and now for something completely unrelated,...
Forum: Copywriting 10th November 2014, 03:05 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,184
Posted By pewpewpewmonkeys
Re: [Critique request] Please give me your expert and BRUTALLY HONEST opinion.

By the time a person gets to this point they're already thinking how boring your story is and will wonder how much money you're flushing.

So you had some shitty jobs and now you're magically...
Forum: Copywriting 1st October 2014, 02:34 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,651
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: I wrote 3 headlines for a WordPress plugin. Need your expert opinion.

1) What You Don't Know About Google Images May Shock You. I could care less - sounds like a linkbait blog post to me.

2) The Hidden Truth on How to Get Thousands of Visitors to Your Website From...
Forum: Copywriting 1st October 2014, 01:40 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,651
Posted By a2050
Re: I wrote 3 headlines for a WordPress plugin. Need your expert opinion.

1) What You Don't Know About Google Images May Shock You.

2) The Hidden Truth on How to Get Thousands of Visitors to Your Website From Google Images Exposed.

3) Why Everyone Is Dead Wrong About...
Forum: Copywriting 30th September 2014, 12:30 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,651
Posted By RickDuris
Re: I wrote 3 headlines for a WordPress plugin. Need your expert opinion.

George, I had an idea.

What if as a sub-head or PS there was some sort of reference to infographics? Infographics are hot right now.

For instance: This 1-click plugin will...

SEO-Supercharge...
Forum: Copywriting 30th September 2014, 12:07 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,651
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: I wrote 3 headlines for a WordPress plugin. Need your expert opinion.

Good man. Thing is... I'd like to see the contributors appreciated. Even if it's just a "What if..." 'Cause that's what leads to a brainstorm that achieves results. I think what you have now is...
Forum: Copywriting 30th September 2014, 09:36 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,651
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: I wrote 3 headlines for a WordPress plugin. Need your expert opinion.

George, I shouldn't have to say this...but how about you offer a copy of the plugin to everyone who contributed here? Next time we may not be so keen to help you.
Forum: Copywriting 29th September 2014, 05:09 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,651
Posted By The Copy Nazi
Re: I wrote 3 headlines for a WordPress plugin. Need your expert opinion.

Traffic is useless unless it's converting. (Same with lists. List size means nothing - its the relationship with the list that is important.)

I had a blog that got over 500,000 Unique Visitors in...
Forum: Copywriting 28th September 2014, 05:04 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,651
Posted By Steve The Copywriter
Re: I wrote 3 headlines for a WordPress plugin. Need your expert opinion.

Yes, the USP should be "get to the top 3 in google".

But lots of people "promise" this.

So, why not "get to the top 3 in google and stay there"


Steve
Forum: Copywriting 27th September 2014, 04:01 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,651
Posted By Top Notch Copy
Re: I wrote 3 headlines for a WordPress plugin. Need your expert opinion.

First off, I think the 1 billion views per day # is too high. It's unbelievable.

"You're telling me that if I buy whatever you're selling, I'm going to get 1 billion views
per day? HA! Yeah...
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