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Forum: Copywriting 13th April 2010, 02:27 PM
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Posted By Bob Conroy
Re: Can someone critique my hook and closer?

I think the current headline is weak...It doesn't make me care...it just tells me you made some money, not that I can.

You need to hit a lot harder than that.

I think Stephen has you going in...
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