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Forum: Copywriting 11th November 2013, 10:47 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,118
Posted By SE DON
Re: I want to give the right person $1000.00

Contest is pulled, I am hiring someone 1 on 1 thank you
Forum: Copywriting 10th November 2013, 10:59 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 996
Posted By SE DON
Re: Do you like my copy?

This is only a sales page for one product we have, not our site. We actually are looking for a page we can use off the site for cold leads. Our site dates to 2006, this product only to 2013.
Forum: Copywriting 9th November 2013, 07:28 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,118
Posted By SE DON
Re: I want to give the right person $1000.00

Looking at your pic, I recognize it too :)

Correct on cold lead conversions which is what we are targeting here. We do well with our existing audience. We want to reach out further.
Forum: Copywriting 9th November 2013, 03:53 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,118
Posted By SE DON
Re: I want to give the right person $1000.00

I dont mind paying the right person 3-5K. Our site makes massive revenue yearly as is and as bad as it seems or people feel this existing copy is, it converts VERY well on our site. I still feel like...
Forum: Copywriting 9th November 2013, 09:51 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,118
Posted By SE DON
I want to give the right person $1000.00

Update: I have found many copywriters who fit my need, and since many complained I was offering too little or simply had to use escrow etc...I prefer to work 1 on 1 with someone. Thanks again for all...
Forum: Copywriting 9th November 2013, 09:10 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 996
Posted By SE DON
Re: Do you like my copy?

how do you make awareness tangible? Can you provide an example?
Forum: Copywriting 9th November 2013, 12:16 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 996
Posted By SE DON
Re: Do you like my copy?

I love the advice guys, please keep em coming.

So far I understand a few things from this that I ll work on.

- Headline CTA - " any advice"
- Fonts and formatting

To address a few points:...
Forum: Copywriting 8th November 2013, 03:08 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 996
Posted By SE DON
Do you like my copy?

I can take harsh feedback, but please keep it clean. We recently redesigned this page and would love some feedback on the CTA and copy throughout.

http://www.crushbusiness.com/?x
Forum: Ad Networks (CPM/CPL, Display) 29th October 2013, 09:35 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 540
Posted By SE DON
Re: Help me Understand which direction to take.

http://i43.tinypic.com/40y2g.jpg

This is our new fold with new CTA minus the opt in
Forum: Ad Networks (CPM/CPL, Display) 29th October 2013, 09:12 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 540
Posted By SE DON
Re: Help me Understand which direction to take.

some great feedback and very much appreciated
Forum: Ad Networks (CPM/CPL, Display) 29th October 2013, 10:32 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 540
Posted By SE DON
Re: Help me Understand which direction to take.

Its a sales page, with an OPT IN on top. Are you saying we shouldnt have an opt in on top?
Forum: Ad Networks (CPM/CPL, Display) 28th October 2013, 04:57 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 540
Posted By SE DON
Help me Understand which direction to take.

Hey guys, need some advice from some of you that have been in the biz for some time. We own www.staypoor.com which is about to get a redesigned fold and slight copy tweaks. It has done very well so...
Forum: Copywriting 18th April 2013, 09:46 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 570
Posted By SE DON
Re: New Sales Page - give me Feedback.

Our audience is younger Gen Y with low to limited business experience who are usually falling for overnight success. 17-30 years of age.
Forum: Copywriting 18th April 2013, 09:32 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 570
Posted By SE DON
Re: New Sales Page - give me Feedback.

This stuff means nothing to me. Tell me what you have. I can't spend vision or innovation. What the hell do you mean by drafting my very own legacy? Get to the meat right up front or your visitor...
Forum: Copywriting 18th April 2013, 09:20 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 570
Posted By SE DON
Re: New Sales Page - give me Feedback.

that will be fixed once actually launched. This is only a pre built and the formatting and functionality will be adjusted so you dont have to do that <---->
prior to being implemented.
Forum: Copywriting 18th April 2013, 09:00 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 570
Posted By SE DON
New Sales Page - give me Feedback.

Ok so in this thread...I asked for feedback on my old page...

http://www.warriorforum.com/main-internet-marketing-discussion-forum/750025-thoughts-sales-page.html

The feedback was good and...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 7th February 2013, 06:18 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 542
Posted By SE DON
Re: Thoughts on this Sales Page

I contacted one of you guys to help me make a new page. I ll post it on here shortly for more feedback, thanks everyone
Forum: Mind Warriors 6th February 2013, 01:25 PM
Replies: 3,690
Views: 126,175
Posted By SE DON
Re: Inspirational Quotes ... Post Yours!

http://www.secretentourage.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/02/2.jpg

http://www.secretentourage.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/01/4.jpg


http://www.secretentourage.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/01/26.jpg
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 6th February 2013, 02:13 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 542
Posted By SE DON
Re: Thoughts on this Sales Page

How would the CTA differ from what it is? or where would you add it?
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 6th February 2013, 12:57 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 542
Posted By SE DON
Thoughts on this Sales Page

Hi Guys,

I am new to this forum and certainly not an affiliate marketer. I joined because of two key reasons:

1. We are about to launch an affiliate program and came to learn more from all of...
Forum: Mind Warriors 6th February 2013, 12:48 AM
Replies: 51
Views: 6,013
Posted By SE DON
Re: Which Personal Development Program Has Changed Your Life?

My favorite :)

Secret Entourage Third Circle Theory (http://www.Thirdcircletheory.com)
Forum: Mind Warriors 6th February 2013, 12:41 AM
Replies: 3,690
Views: 126,175
Posted By SE DON
Re: Inspirational Quotes ... Post Yours!

http://i45.tinypic.com/wmkmxv.jpg

http://i45.tinypic.com/141sg82.jpg

http://i46.tinypic.com/5xtl6v.jpg
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