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Forum: Conversion Rate Optimization 23rd October 2014, 05:14 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,527
Posted By marciayudkin
Re: People love the product, but they don't want to buy it...

I forgot to mention business users, who would be:

* Afraid of losing opportunities

* Frustrated at not being able to make connections

* Wishing they could sign up Japanese clients

Marcia...
Forum: Conversion Rate Optimization 22nd October 2014, 11:00 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,527
Posted By marciayudkin
Re: People love the product, but they don't want to buy it...

Hi there,

As it happens, I have just gotten back from a month in China, where I was a "waiguo ren" (the Chinese equivalent of "gaijin").

Based on my observations, I don't believe you have...
Forum: Conversion Rate Optimization 22nd October 2014, 10:42 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,527
Posted By Raydal
Re: People love the product, but they don't want to buy it...

You need to place everything on ONE PAGE. No need to have to
click through to see the price. It is $5 so no need to hide it or warm
up to the price.

Plus I had to scroll down to see the rest...
Forum: Conversion Rate Optimization 22nd October 2014, 08:23 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,527
Posted By John Pagulayan
Re: People love the product, but they don't want to buy it...

1. Yup...It's definitely misleading.

Is the product yours? Why not create a free portion of your product, kinda like a free taste of what is inside and sell to them once they opt in? That would...
Forum: Main Internet Marketing Discussion Forum 16th December 2013, 11:05 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 399
Posted By John J M
Re: Creating a credible brand

I think a lot of it just comes down to time. The more people exposed to the product, the more people use it/benefit from it, the more the name gets out there. But getting a physical product into a...
Forum: Copywriting 14th June 2013, 01:39 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,089
Posted By Quality Copywriter
Re: One Page Website Sales Letter: Feedback, please

Kind of all over the place in that letter Terry.

Here's a quick one oh one on selling if you cant get a pro in.

Give them a promise/number of promise at the begining.
otherwise why would...
Forum: Copywriting 10th June 2013, 07:16 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 633
Posted By Jeremey
Re: Could you take a moment to take a look at my copy?

Well, you really need to ask yourself ... do I want to sell this product, or do I want to learn how to write copy?

Here's a suggestion though ... your intro is pretty flat. At the bottom of the...
Forum: Copywriting 9th June 2013, 09:44 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 633
Posted By Jonwebb
Re: Could you take a moment to take a look at my copy?

pretty much like everyone else said - its needs some work. now you are not without talent, and I can tell you put some effort into this - you just need basic copywriting structure. my advice start...
Forum: Copywriting 9th June 2013, 09:02 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 633
Posted By PalmTree1
Re: Could you take a moment to take a look at my copy?

Well... I am not an AD copy expert, but as a potential customer, it is very choppy reading with no real flow. This may be the best product of it's kind, but without good copy and some attention...
Forum: Copywriting 9th June 2013, 07:55 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 633
Posted By joe golfer
Re: Could you take a moment to take a look at my copy?

Like Patrick said, this is pretty bad. There's no hook, theme, flow, credibility, value-building or urgency. The benefits are thin, or missing. I would start over using a sales page outline like this...
Forum: Website Design 5th June 2013, 11:04 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 460
Posted By Brandon Tanner
Re: Brutal Opinions Please

Most definitely. Focus on doing what you do the best. And outsource everything else!
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