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Forum: Copywriting 19th April 2021, 07:22 AM
Replies: 13
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Posted By Princess Balestra
Re: Critique My Copy | What am I missing?

tbh I lost your cat at HE.

gal cats can scratch out also — so don't dump 'em outta yr markit.

When your cat scratches your very existence into oblivion, likely you gotta SIT UP.

Eithah you...
Forum: Copywriting 17th April 2021, 03:59 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 452
Posted By max5ty
Re: Critique My Copy | What am I missing?

You can send me a private link if that's allowed.
Forum: Copywriting 17th April 2021, 12:07 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 452
Posted By max5ty
Re: Critique My Copy | What am I missing?

Without seeing the landing page you're running people to...

it can be hard to give a full assessment.

Do you have social proof?

Do you have a big name behind you that recommends this or...
Forum: Copywriting 16th April 2021, 05:02 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 452
Posted By SARubin
Re: Critique My Copy | What am I missing?

Ah, that makes more sense.

So they're coming into your page "problem aware, looking for a solution".


In this case I would think about what Kay said... Make your copy a story about cats and...
Forum: Copywriting 16th April 2021, 02:12 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 452
Posted By SARubin
Re: Critique My Copy | What am I missing?

I don't know what your google ad says to drive people to your sales page? So I can't address the prospect qualifying part of your ad.

But from a strictly sales point of view, your opening ...
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Forum: Copywriting 16th April 2021, 12:55 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 452
Posted By Kay King
Re: Critique My Copy | What am I missing?

You don't want to use the ad to crusade.


A lighter touch would be to find a way to make cat owners feel good about themselves for choosing not to declaw. It's a fine line but a big difference...
Forum: Copywriting 16th April 2021, 12:03 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 452
Posted By Kay King
Re: Critique My Copy | What am I missing?

My opinion - it's overdone, a bit too fast/pushy and some facts are not quite right.

Cats scratch to remove the dead layer of cells that appear on their claws - to mark their territory, etc.
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Forum: Beginners Area 30th May 2018, 09:25 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 489
Posted By Kay King
Re: How do you decide what to sell?

Time for a reality check....where are you going? Do you have a plan yet? That was your first question some weeks ago.

There are countless threads about market research and niche research - did...
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