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Forum: Warriors For Hire
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24th December 2015, 04:43 AM
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24th November 2015, 06:57 AM
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Forum: Copywriting
26th May 2012, 01:09 AM
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Views: 581  Re: Thanks so much for the help, Warriors!
i think you need to get your statistics right (FB is now worth $100B,
and you might want to get some legal advice about using income
screenshots due to the new stringent FTC regulations. Also your...
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd May 2012, 02:05 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 959  Re: Sales page help?
first of all, the popup is to long. the name - email opt-in should be above 'the fold', meaning they shouldn't have to scroll down to put their name and email in. if given the opportunity, they...
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd May 2012, 01:55 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 959 Re: Sales page help?
Right...
Don't tell people they can build a website, "just like this one" when it's not attractive or properly set up for conversions.
Since you're using Wordpress and NOT doing the coding on...
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd May 2012, 12:59 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 959 Re: Sales page help?
Here's a couple more - that's the price on the banner on the right? Readers MUST discover the value of the product before the price
Different size fonts
Don't use the word 'testimonial'
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd May 2012, 12:55 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 959 Re: Sales page help?
TIP: don't shoot a video in your kitchen. Comes across as hokey. And keep the camera still for chrissakes. That whole "I need you to watch this right now...sharing this apartment...its not my...
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Forum: Copywriting
9th May 2012, 03:06 PM
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Replies: 16
Views: 959 Re: Sales page help?
just had a quick look and here are my points;
no flow from the headline to the call to action
benefits not specifically laid out
weak call to action
other guys can come wih few more....
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Forum: Copywriting
9th May 2012, 06:18 AM
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Replies: 16
Views: 959 Re: Sales page help?
Kyle,
I expect you're going to hear the following response, in several different ways.
"Our time isn't for free - hire a copywriter."
I don't know whether you were simply asking for...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th May 2012, 02:15 PM
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Forum: Copywriting
5th May 2012, 12:22 PM
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Views: 931 Re: Warriors have saved my life =)!!
Wow, you took action and reaped the rewards. How does it get any better than that? So often we ask for help and never make the changes. It's great to see that you went the extra mile and that it...
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Forum: Copywriting
5th May 2012, 10:52 AM
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Forum: Copywriting
4th May 2012, 01:52 PM
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Forum: Copywriting
4th May 2012, 06:10 AM
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Forum: Copywriting
4th May 2012, 04:18 AM
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Replies: 17
Views: 931 Re: Warriors have saved my life =)!!
Well done and here’s to your continued success!
In case anyone missed his first post
http://www.warriorforum.com/copywriting-forum/584519-sales-page-critique-needed.html
He mentioned the...
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Forum: Copywriting
3rd May 2012, 05:00 PM
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Replies: 17
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Forum: Copywriting
23rd April 2012, 07:17 AM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,202 Re: Sales page critique needed?
don't want to say it, but your squeeze page conversion is low, you're only taking very limited details and you're using a lot of real estate to get it.
As an example, I'm getting a 40% conversion...
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Forum: Copywriting
22nd April 2012, 09:02 AM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,202 Re: Sales page critique needed?
Shanen is doing rather well isn't she?
It was only a few days ago when she risked her own life and soul by posting her copy pitch and asked for a critique.
She listened carefully and took all...
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Forum: Copywriting
22nd April 2012, 07:55 AM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,202 Re: Sales page critique needed?
Hi Beats,
Yes. Regardless of the direction you take, it's undeniable that you NEED copy written. None of us dispute that.
IMHO, the size of the ebook doesn't matter if you're giving them a...
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Forum: Copywriting
22nd April 2012, 05:17 AM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,202 Re: Sales page critique needed?
Hi Kyle,
If it were me - I would rewrite the landing page.
And... (this is a bit radical)-
Sell the main product straight from the page.
If you've got a "hungry crowd" in a hot niche...
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Forum: Copywriting
21st April 2012, 03:16 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,202 Re: Sales page critique needed?
Well - follow your logic.
Get conversions at 40% plus.
When the copy is that good.
Get the same writer to do your auto responders.
Steve
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Forum: Copywriting
21st April 2012, 01:51 PM
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Forum: Copywriting
21st April 2012, 01:28 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,202 Re: Sales page critique needed?
You are correct about that. Musicians don't want the record label, because they know they will usually get screwed over by them. The thought of being independent is extremely apprealing to them. And...
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Forum: Copywriting
21st April 2012, 01:00 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,202 Re: Sales page critique needed?
Yes, your copywriter should make your landing page more compelling and easier to read.
Your headline should be more powerful - is there any need to mention a record label? (I know nothing about...
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Forum: Copywriting
21st April 2012, 12:31 AM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,202 Re: Sales page critique needed?
Since you're giving away such a great bait piece, you certainly can't expect anyone to buy anything from your landing page.
Therefore, either 1) your email follow-up series sucks or 2) your...
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Forum: Copywriting
20th April 2012, 08:47 PM
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Replies: 27
Views: 1,202 |